KriZ vs Ryda
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 25 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0 TKO

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-30-05 at 07:09 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

Ryda has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-05 03:20 PM.

im bout ignite ur rymes cause there defense less/
just like wen u realize battlin me ur headin into a deep abyss/
cause ur rhymes are weak they always digress/
only battle u won was against a coward*/
This kids rhymes are soft like wet flowers/
He's is fuckin gay probley looks down in the showers**/
u think ur rhymes got peoples heads bobbin/
na thats u on ur knees slobbin/
u bout to get beat by a white kid u should be in chagrin/
im too quick for u ur punches there not hitten/
only things hitten is the 2 balls on ur chin/
i saw ur battle all u say is self glory/
and even then it's like a fictional story/
u fuckin pussy u shoulda neva acepted this battle u should have denied/
You bout to be mortified worldwide/
u think ur gonna be great/
thats impossible like turnin u straight/
im merkin u already ill neva cease/
battlin me u goin crazy like u got the mad cow disease/

/= means end of line
* Rah-ta-tat didnt show for one of his battle his only win
** like people who take showers at school with other team mates people neva look down

KriZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-05 04:58 PM.

I said up the time amount. Shit. o well. Here we go.

Yo, i got this mans blood glistenin on my death blade/
Fought well but didnt prevail to the wraith of the blade/
^^^Refers to this battle, man just chill out sip some lemonade/
Ya not gonna win give up bitch, ya gonna be wadding in ya own blood/
From the motion of my lyricist skill blade, i got tha shit made/
Act like a bitch, i'll thro ya fuckin lunch tray in the hallway/
Can you evade ya death? i doubt it... cant evade shit/
You claim you got sex yet you dont even know the clit/
Ya cowering in fear cuz you cant take this smash hit/
man, open ya mouth, i shit in ya mouth now ya silenced/
And prayin that i may let you go and let you run glidin/
You aint gonna win no matter how hard your tryin/
Shut this bitch up by shovin brocali in his mouth/
Now ya cant do shit permantly fo awhile, you out/
(15)you claim to put the barrel in my mouth, yet i can yell this shit loud/
Doesnt effect me, now i shall kill ya ass wrecklessly/
your pain n suffering dont make a difference to me/
Kick your ass murdously as if im the dude JeT LI/
Now im finished -cleans the blood from the blade-/

Aiight, uppin for battles. Ryda for future references, me n Nu-moneys battle was a draw. Cuz he never sho'd for the battle date.

But yeah, uppin for votes.

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This was feedback posted for KriZ
 

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Voted For: Ryda

Ryda

Well,it's clear to me that your new to this.
First off,don't explain your shit.Just makes it look herbish.In real life,you wouldn't spit your bars and then explain it would you?NO,you wouldn't.That "look down/shower" line was shit,to say the least.And you had a decent concept with the rah-ta-tat thing,but you worded it too simplistic.
You got a lot of work to do..

KriZ

Wow...you only had one punchline.And that was the "he doesn't know a clit" one,which sucked because it sounds newbish.You sound like some little kid saying something like that.The rest of your verse was all threats.The point of a battle is to diss the oppenent.Saying you'll kick his ass like Jet Li doesn't diss him in any way.

Vote-Ryda...for actually having a lot of punches..

Drop an honest vote in the link below.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212726

Aiight thx for the feed. I'll check your battle later, 1-0 ryda.

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