::..:$lobK::..: vs SCIP
 

Battle Rules:

6 lines flat no more no less
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-20-05 at 09:14 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

SCIP has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-17-05 09:30 PM.

::..:$lobK::..: has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-18-05 11:25 PM.

This was feedback posted for ::..:$lobK::..:
 

honestly slobk i gotta say u got a nice style of rhyming & i think u won this battle in my opinion

This was feedback posted for ::..:$lobK::..:
 

good battle...just checkin da poollls

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Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

aiight SCIP,
your shit was pretty nice. Yo flow was alright not the best. You had some ok punches, nothing special. I was feelin' some of them. Some real nice ones. Your structure was pretty nice too. Just lose the explanations at the end of ur lines make it look herbish. But overall a pretty nice verse, man. props 8/10

$lobk,
you had a nice verse. Your flow was on in this. Your structure was ok. Closer I loved. tight shit. Yo punches kept on hitting too. Real nice job. 8.5/10

I think this was a 1-sided battle. Both of y'all gonna be good in the future so keep practicing. nice job.
but vote/ $lobk

plz RTF nobody does it anymore, but please do it.

Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

Aii This IS what it is

ScIP

This kids always messy like Fuckin Fat Kids Eatin-Ribs, cuz I'll Fuckin End Slob's Career by Simply puttin on Him a Freakin-Bib{shit rhymed better then fuckin}
You Already Said it Yoself ...It was Sort of Shitty

Like Baggy pants this kids Lyrics are Sagon, you can tell he aint the Rhyme-Kind cuz even if K raised a hand he still couldnt High-Phive*
....Nive Personal Mayne
The way my punches hit Both-Eyes yall have Black Rims peeps think ya a Blind-Guy, so go wit ya crew lyrics and all and tell em "I Tried-Guys
Aii But Shouldve hade a StrongEr Closer ...especailly With you only doing 6 lines

$lobk

U Aint The "SCIPpa" On RV..No By Far Motherfucker..
Throw "Balls" In "Scip" Face Like We Was Playin Games At The Rucker..
Good opener Lets see what Happens next
Put This Fag On A "Scale"..Just To See How The "Pound" "Rips"..
This "Fly"..I "Shoed" Him And "Laced" Kid..No1 Wants To Engage In Ur Gay PICS*..
Umm Aii .......Nice name play But I Feel You Couldve done betta
And Like Aid Patients..I Been Known To "Tow" The "Rates"..
All Teams Named "Warriors"..Is Whack..Just Check Out "Golden State"..*
..........Damn.......You do Have a Good point there :)

Overall:
umm... Mayne this was an aii battle especailly for you both to be doin 6 lines ....but i can only give my vote to one person and that person is ......$lobk.....Becuase he came wit a really good opener and ended even better and thats how it should be when you only have one bar in between ya opener and ya closer .....
So Nice job both of you You did great


PLEase=
I voted honestly so can you please do the same in my battle ....i Only have one battle its my first one ......Atleast help me get it out of the way

Thanx

Uppin For More Votes..C'mon Yo.....................

Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

scip
your stucutre amde my eyes bleed wigka, your punches were flat dry, i wasnt feeling your verse at all, vocab was decent but you really need work on syllable count and your punches wigka, other den that you lost, work on ya punches n flow, most important ight. pz

slob
not bad im feeling it, ive seen alot better from you tho, great punchlines nice stucutre, good syllable count, i was feeling ya verse alot wigka, keep dopin ya thang this was a 1 man battle you got this hands down on everything. ight peace

RTF in my battles linsk are in the sig peace.

Uppin For More Votes Yo................................

Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

slobk took this...he had better punches...better wordplay...and better flow...his structure was better too...the personals killed him...especially the 1 about his pics...and the warrior punch was tite too...

scip...nice verse...work on yo wordplay...personals and structure...shit was hard to read...just work on it a little...and you'll have it down...

This was feedback posted for SCIP
 

YOu both suck..and have no hope at this text game....its like crack man u gotta sell it and at ur level your not gonna sell nun.....

Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

omg scip fix yo structure boo you have to many streched lines so i mess up yo flow n struture
slobk not da best i've heard from you n slippin j/p but it wasnt nuttin to be impressed about you just had harder punches den da otha dude