bm316 vs. illtalic
 

5 bars
no biting prewriting recycling
spits due in 30 mins
blind spits
no dr,crew,or hate votes good luck

Czech.

Look check it:
Get a fire extingusiher cause i'm spitting fire//
I'll rip this bitch like he walking through a feild of barbed wire//
If i gave you a head start in this battle you still couldn't touch me//
Put you in the special olympics cause the way your lyrics look you can't run a 40//
This cat stepping to me he must be metal so i put him in a institution//
I think you'll have a better chance if you call ya substitution//
Let me put it like this you suck and ya flow is weak//
I'll spit shit that'll have you shaking like the girls in petey piablos Freak a Leek//
You must watch fairy tales if you want to battle me this isn't pretend//
Fuck the world i'll be like god and put this battle to a end//

Where do i start?? Everything about you says 'im a herb'
Wackness is undefined
An ya scripts always amaze.. like blank pads with a blurb
Cos kid's got nothin to say.. an no one to say it to
Mumbles in mime
So stay with ya d/r's.. cos ima break the silence with you
An the way this is goin means it’ll stay that way
This pussies played
Ya scripts are worn thin so literally ya verse is afrayed
I see your adamant with the rules.. the reason aint cool

Thanks. Cos you jus removed ya only advantage.. fool
Blah. Half this verse'll prolly go strait over ya head
Bitch's duckin
An the other half is bitten.. cos "You're Dead."

Ok,
Bm, Very basic flow. Structure was choppy. Punches, a few decent ones, mostly shitty and basic though. Personals- non-existant.Multis- nah Creativity- nah

Fav Bar:

None really, but this was the best one I guess.
Get a fire extingusiher cause i'm spitting fire//
I'll rip this bitch like he walking through a feild of barbed wire//

Ill
Structure- I really liked that shit, flowed pretty good, a lil' hard to stay wit in a few spots, but overall, pretty solid. Punches- Funny, hard enuff, definately. Personals- good, and you had some, so that's always a plus. Multis- Decent Creativity- Hell yeah, I enjoyed your verse, and had my hand coverin' my mouth cause I felt badd for homeboy gettin' sonned so badd.

Fav line: So many to choose from

Where do i start?? Everything about you says 'im a herb'
Wackness is undefined
An ya scripts always amaze.. like blank pads with a blurb
Cos kid's got nothin to say.. an no one to say it to
Mumbles in mime

I really liked those, although I actually thought the whole verse was solid.
Very one-sided. Bm, just elevate man, No hard feelinz. Ill- nice spit man.

Vote-Ill

Werd.

awwww hell naw get tha fuck outta here that shit doesn't even count that bitch battled me that was a hate vote from hell ill is wack as fuck didn't even make since get that bull shit outta here

Lol.

^^^^ you a bitch if you want to accept that it says in the rules no fucking hate votes and that was a hate vote and clearly dick riddin

What ima hate on you for man? Why you cryin' like a bitch, I voted honestly, the way I always do. Herbs like you might confine yourself to dick-ridin' and hatin', but I'm just here for the hip-hop portion of it. If ill had sucked, I would have told him so. Unfortunately, U the mufuka that sucked, so I had to tell you that. Now shut the fuck up, cause I was very specific and insightful, so stop bein' a whiny lil' bitch, you ass-clown.

anyone in their right mind can tell your a dick rider how bout you get a chair cause you just sitting on his dick i be if i look at all his battles you are there voting for him so get tha fuck bitch

That's the first battle of his that I seen or voted for. And let's see what everyone else has to say about your corny ass verse bitch. Don't be madd cause you suck. If you don't want honest feedback, don't post, cause if niggaz suck, ima let them have it. I tryed not to be too rude, but your shit fuckin' sucked man, ok, it sucked. Now shut the fuck up.

Yo bm.. the fuck man?!

He broke it down nicely. So dont insult the voter.

uppin for votes let get some votes in here stop sleeping

Iight This Is How It Is
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