Ghost of a Love Forgotten
 

A shorter one by myself and more to the point, ANd onlder one so its not as matured as the rest... Enjoy :)


I've loved every minute we spoke
I've loved every minute we we're ever together
Though it ended just as quickley as it began,
someone i thought i had by me forever slowly faded through time
Through my own ignorance and Through my own faults
i have brought this upon myself
In my own time and In my own waste of life
i have lost the one that kept me alive
Hollow glass life shimmers as the sun sets on the long lost lust
But memories fade as well as friends
Unexplained, reasonless, and careless actions cannot be accounted for
All errors were on my side, All problems were my fault
Even if you care nothing about this,
I just wanted this haunting to stop
This spirit left to torment me,
The Ghost of a Love Forgotten

Emotions were runnin deep. Depthness defined. Nice drop contend was good.....work on imagery a little.


check my 1st poetry drop. Flower of Life

yeah like i said it is one of my earlier pieces so it wasn't as in depth with everything like the others are. Up.

up.

man it suck

i Liked It....The Emotions...The Way With WOrds....Nice Drop
But Like DV said work on IMAGERY

Check some of my other drops... and Da great 1... I am not even going to acknowledge you.. 0-0... 0-0..?... Dont speak to me :)

thanks up

u suck

hahahahhahaha... seriously?... god damn kid.. you just registered this month.. shut hte hell up

^^ LOL...Dont Listen To Him...He's Mad Cuz He Prolly Cant Even Make A Line...But StyLL Nice Drop...