fraud vs Lay Fear
 

10 Lines.
House Rules
Eh we'll say a day so you have time to see this n get your verse done.

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 04-15-08 at 11:59 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Lay Fear has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-14-08 12:00 PM.

fraud has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-14-08 12:02 PM.

This veterans game is writing, take a fucking defeat
lay punches are weaker like lesbians cage_fighting!!
you should try an school me on B.T.Y??, cuz im like who the fuck are these fags
ya crew 'send for me' only time ya 'men_tore_me'(mentor) i Was havin trouble in math
an when im squeez'in to leave ya peel-bra
u'll get hit up more time then the myspace count for tila tequila
defeat is what u pay_here, i'll smash the floor where they lay_fear, i got dummy foe's
and my punches connect, so fuck 'confidence' wit da spit, he kept hes head held high from a bloody nose
fraud insane skills an lines rap be just scorchin, 'tear up' you 'pussies' like backstreet abortions
beating whiny rookies, you must be eating chines cookies only time this cats see a 'fortune'

Your a known dick rider..an all the traits are evident
cuz F. DR so much...we startin to confuse him with the president
I'm endin it..fraud is all about deceit when he's compared n tried
cuz it'll be hard to shake off the rust..when your whole style is a Para'lies
I ain't afraid..you ain't bossin this vet, n it'll be costin you yet
cuz ever since my days in high school.....I been easily tossin my F's
you lost in text..fraud,..your coverin up talent?..I'll tackle this
cuz only thing you disguisin about your text skill....is your lack of it.
Okay whale, fat bitch is done..n his strategy may fail
cuz I'm puttin an end to F..like I'm against the fuckin grade scale

Goodluck

Voted For: Lay Fear

Your a known dick rider..an all the traits are evident
cuz F. DR so much...we startin to confuse him with the president
I'm endin it..fraud is all about deceit when he's compared n tried
cuz it'll be hard to shake off the rust..when your whole style is a Para'lies

you last bar was lame...other than that though, you had a very soiild verus

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fraud insane skills an lines rap be just scorchin, 'tear up' you 'pussies' like backstreet abortions
beating whiny rookies, you must be eating chines cookies only time this cats see a 'fortune'

^^ that was easily your best in the entire battle...you could have worded it much much better...but overal you battle lacked alot of personal/wordplay that Lay had. Just keep trying bro, good job though

overal: Lay Fear

crew members voting for each other??

how lame!!!

lol, we ain't in the same crew dude...i just put down that im' in their crew to fucking piss them off.

you can go check for youself over in the crew section

please rtf over in my 2 battles

Yeah, he's a poser dude. lol but he's cool..especially considering we only got like 10 active people on the site..if that

Voted For: Lay Fear

you win

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Voted For: Lay Fear

fraud loses this for mentioning tila tequilla.



no...seriously...lay had a decent verse...i've seen much better from you....but....why try when you don't need to?

i really liked your opening bar.....and the tossin my f's bar.....and the 2nd to last bar...other than that i thought you came weak by your standards....but..thats irrelevant.

fraud...that verse was garbage....all the way down to your structure....you had a couple....(im giving you the benefit of the doubt) concepts that were mediocre...but..you managed to fuck those up to.

vote - lay fear

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by the way if yall could return the favor...i've had this battle open for ages and i'd like it closed

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appreciate it...stay up.

Voted For: Lay Fear

Your a known dick rider..an all the traits are evident
cuz F. DR so much...we startin to confuse him with the president creative, 7/10
I'm endin it..fraud is all about deceit when he's compared n tried
cuz it'll be hard to shake off the rust..when your whole style is a Para'lies decent metaphore,6/10
I ain't afraid..you ain't bossin this vet, n it'll be costin you yet
cuz ever since my days in high school.....I been easily tossin my F's decent 4/10
you lost in text..fraud,..your coverin up talent?..I'll tackle this
cuz only thing you disguisin about your text skill....is your lack of it. liked the wordplay 6/10
Okay whale, fat bitch is done..n his strategy may fail
cuz I'm puttin an end to F..like I'm against the fuckin grade scale creative 6/10..............................
murda
your verse i felt like you were just rambling
i felt your only good line was the mentore one and i didnt think it was that good.

Voted For: Lay Fear

Vote: Lay Fear.

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