Dazasta Vs. Cameronj86
ok rules..
no bullshit votes no hate votes d/r votes 12 lines no biting prewriting you wanna go first?...waiting for checkin |
not really, how bout we both start writing now and drop when we are done? Due in at half past? Howz that sound?
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sure..........................ill start now........
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No point in changing rules...Im gifted enough to boast..
and your custom title should be" Herb with a lot of Posts".. Mediocre at most..and addicted to taking pills.. and i'd have to go to Hell if wanted rate your skills... Decipate your will...I take lessons in strides... and if you wanna win..go to "Quote Message In Reply?".. Weapons in side...It takes skill to win this.. and yes i always got your back...with a knife in it... Need and eyewitness?...witnesses said that I.. murked you..and suggested that "you need dick in your life".. yes i stick it..thas right..i Dismantle your posts... CameronJ only means..that Cameron's a Joke... |
fuck I only got six and times up, gimmie a couple more minutes, I won't bite off of your verse since you already posted it, my bad, I got a brain freeze
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it dont matter...you can have the time............
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I'll drop my verse to seperate the real emcees from the gays
Destroy any chance for "dazata" like EMT's and the CIA I'm better than you, 3 lines and already no way you can top that Like Native Americans... there is no way you gettin ya spot back Dazatas a rapper? What is he doing to get his name sold?? Like movies digitally remastered, just a new spin on the same old. You heard that he's a good rapper? Don't believe the hype I came to get polled, he want's to get poled and lay pipe RB's badboy, now I'm back and better cuz I'm sick with it Only time he's on the straight and narrow is riding his bf's dick |
.........................................holla back..uppin 1
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DAMN....
Heated battle... Some dope shit from both But since Dazasta in my crew I wont vote........ But damn...... Nice from both CameronJ you want in Executives? |
Sheeeeeeeit Good To See You Back
Cameron.... Damn I'd Breakthis Shit Down But To Be Honest I Thin Daz Got Murdered. Cam Came Pretty Good To Not Have Battled In A While, And Some Of Daz's Punches Were Like Ehhh. I Think Daz May Have Had On Punch In His Verse The Rest Was Not Effective Or IT Was Filler. Cameron Came Prepared, His First 3 Barz Was Nice. Then He Fell Off Btw Ever I'm Gonna Vote Cameron For And Overall Better Verse He Took It In Every Catergory. v/Cameronj86 |
alright I'm uppin this battle for vote.... I just voted on a shitload of battles, so I'll just wait for some people to vote on dis one...
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No point in changing rules...Im gifted enough to boast..
and your custom title should be" Herb with a lot of Posts".. ??...ok...not good...2/10 Mediocre at most..and addicted to taking pills.. and i'd have to go to Hell if wanted rate your skills... filler if i've ever seen one....2/10 Decipate your will...I take lessons in strides... and if you wanna win..go to "Quote Message In Reply?".. no no no....2/10 Weapons in side...It takes skill to win this.. and yes i always got your back...with a knife in it... do u really??....3/10 Need and eyewitness?...witnesses said that I.. murked you..and suggested that "you need dick in your life".. no...again..wording is asshole..2/10 yes i stick it..thas right..i Dismantle your posts... CameronJ only means..that Cameron's a Joke... consistent with the rest..2/10 overall for Daz...13/60 I'll drop my verse to seperate the real emcees from the gays Destroy any chance for "dazata" like EMT's and the CIA first line is wackest shit i've ever read...but...u came back for a 3/10 I'm better than you, 3 lines and already no way you can top that Like Native Americans... there is no way you gettin ya spot back nice try..but no!!!!!! 2/10 Dazatas a rapper? What is he doing to get his name sold?? Like movies digitally remastered, just a new spin on the same old. ok..not too hard hitting though...4/10 You heard that he's a good rapper? Don't believe the hype I came to get polled, he want's to get poled and lay pipe so what???...3/10 RB's badboy, now I'm back and better cuz I'm sick with it Only time he's on the straight and narrow is riding his bf's dick horrible...just plain horrible..1/10 overall for cameron...13/50....he wins Wack ass battle right chea..neither had any good lines cameron came not as bad so he takes this...peace |
Pretty good battle...
Daz..you had a good structure and some nice punches but some lacked creativity although they still were good some okie wordplay try and use more personals they really help in battles..but the ones you had were good. Cam...good solid verse...a little harder hitting punches then daz same type of flow/structure but the personals were okie and some more complexity.. can you both drop a vote on one of my battles pleae honestly..thanks Vote. Cam |
Well shit..I dont know about everybody else, but I think Daz got this shit.He had better punches, less filler,..more effective hitting punches..less bullshit..structure was good and so was flow..and also..vocab..
cameron..I wasnt feeling your verse..uh huh..no way..not at all..the lines was weak..in my opinion..and you had some fillers..alot of fillers..some of the attempted punches was pointless..like the native american line..booo to that..and that poled lay pipe line just..the..ender..the was the final straw.....in wackness.. my vote goes to Daz.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113306 |
Daz - solid verse.. not ya best.. but thoroughly consistant.. non-stop punches.. used the personals to good effect an created some nice concepts for ya metas.. flow was neat.. let yaself down a lil wiv the 'knife in ya back' line.. although that particular version mite be new the whole concept is old.. nice creative verse tho..
Cam - 'new spin on the same old' = best line of the battle.. but the rest of ya verse let u down.. u werent personal enuff.. alot of general punches that werent connectin tho they were creative.. u seemed to slip towards the end as well.. prolly cos u were rushin.. def not ya best.. VoTe = Daz Drop a vote on this both of u plz a.s.a.p: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111096 ...1 |
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