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.Aeral. vs ..Exponent..
4 bars/ 8 lines..
..No gay votes g'd luck.. 1 I'll drop today.. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-20-04 at 04:26 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
.Aeral. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-17-04 04:27 PM.
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..Exponent.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-17-04 05:53 PM.
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Who Is This Guy And Y Does He Play Hard..
He Saves Rappin Fa Later Cus Dickridin Is His Day Job.. No Confidence In Him Self Like Obeased 4th Grader.. He's Wack N Most Of His Battles Come 4rm Off Paper.. Undertermined Like His Location W.p.b... Style Of Mih Rhymes Left Him Crossed Over Like Legs Of W.c.. Aeral's Onli Win Came 4rm Tha Weakest Herb.. Now His Been Merked Last Thing Needs Ta B Said Is Jesus Word..(Amen) ~1~ |
Couldn't be a star if you lived in the bright sky...
..& he's an exponent?? ...The switchblade cut ya up into 3.14 pieces like PI You'll go broke but this is not the great depression... could cut off ya left hand... ............& still couldn't leave the right impression Invisible with spits, Even your girls rydin the dick... ...Cos in the end, exponent's not seen like I was a Scientist Just pissed on ya style,Fucked ya bitch witout a glove I'd say you're left heartbroken ..... but Urine Love |
your in/ urine.. don't get the punches, go play with yourself...
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Bout Time Damn...Iight Uppin This Battle Fa Honest Votes No D/r's Please!!!!!!!
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This was feedback posted for ..Exponent..
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Voted For: ..Exponent..
Couldn't be a star if you lived in the bright sky... ..& he's an exponent?? ...The switchblade cut ya up into 3.14 pieces like PI DECENT OPENER You'll go broke but this is not the great depression... could cut off ya left hand... ............& still couldn't leave the right impression PRETTY DECENT Invisible with spits, Even your girls rydin the dick... ...Cos in the end, exponent's not seen like I was a Scientist NO…… Just pissed on ya style,Fucked ya bitch witout a glove I'd say you're left heartbroken ..... but Urine Love HEH, DECENT CLOSER NEXT Who Is This Guy And Y Does He Play Hard.. He Saves Rappin Fa Later Cus Dickridin Is His Day Job.. DECENT OPENER No Confidence In Him Self Like Obeased 4th Grader.. He's Wack N Most Of His Battles Come 4rm Off Paper.. NICE PUNCHLINE Undertermined Like His Location W.p.b... Style Of Mih Rhymes Left Him Crossed Over Like Legs Of W.c.. DECENT PUNCH Aeral's Onli Win Came 4rm Tha Weakest Herb.. Now His Been Merked Last Thing Needs Ta B Said Is Jesus Word.. DECENT CLOSER overall I think Ex came a little harder cuz Aeral skrewed up on 1 line…but anyway Ex gets my vote on this 1 |
Voted For: ..Exponent..
Ex Good Structure Nice Going, The Flow Was Tight, Still No Rhyme Scheme But You'll Get It Sooner Or Later... Add More Punches And Personals, Multis And Metas...Good Verse Dopeness......8/10 Areal First Off Your Structure Was Fuck It Was Chatoic I Couldnt See Where Your Bars End, Those Dotted Line Wasn't Working. Add More Punches Personals Came Weeker You Can Do Better, Mutis Was Needed Here Too.................................. |
Voted For: ..Exponent..
exponent........ Who Is This Guy And Y Does He Play Hard.. He Saves Rappin Fa Later Cus Dickridin Is His Day Job.. lol....shit actually made me laugh a lil bit....7/10 No Confidence In Him Self Like Obeased 4th Grader.. He's Wack N Most Of His Battles Come 4rm Off Paper.. hmm....didnt like it too much....didnt hit too hard 3/10 Undertermined Like His Location W.p.b... Style Of Mih Rhymes Left Him Crossed Over Like Legs Of W.c.. Decent....work on wordplay some......5/10 Aeral's Onli Win Came 4rm Tha Weakest Herb.. Now His Been Merked Last Thing Needs Ta B Said Is Jesus Word..(Amen) ok personal.....2nd line wasnt too great.....5/10 Aeral....... Couldn't be a star if you lived in the bright sky... ..& he's an exponent?? ...The switchblade cut ya up into 3.14 pieces like PI hmm ok opener....ok meta.....6/10 (could have been worded better) You'll go broke but this is not the great depression... could cut off ya left hand... ............& still couldn't leave the right impression didnt like the first line....2nd line was ok...5/10 Invisible with spits, Even your girls rydin the dick... ...Cos in the end, exponent's not seen like I was a Scientist not feeling this at all....didnt rhyme well.....2/10 Just pissed on ya style,Fucked ya bitch witout a glove I'd say you're left heartbroken ..... but Urine Love sex jokes are played........3/10 exponent.....20/40.....decent...could have came harder but i guess you didnt have to....i felt like his punches hit harder...his structure was better.....overall it was just a better verse... Aeral......16/20......couple of bars were played....couple of lines were ok....practice being more consistent..... |
i meant to say aeral was 16/40.......lol not 20............my bad
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lol, was his verse that good.. & goliath?, I think you're Zeke, some dickrydin huh?.. whatever, idc...
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Voted For: .Aeral.
Good battle overall Aeral had bad structure...Ok flow not bad at all...Punches where hitting most of the time...Vocab was aight...Personals where pretty good...and ya Multis where not very good...Overall good job to you Ex had a better structure...pretty good flow...Had alright punches seen better from you...Vocab was aight...Multis was not there....and ya personals where weak...pretty ood job not bad seen better from you v/Aeral |
return the favor: Coopa Bang vs 3x.............Coopa Bang vs KKKHater.....Coopa Bang vs Ike.....thank you and have a nice day :thumbup:
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