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MaRVJay1009 vs solo
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12 lines.. 3 votes=ko No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting only explained votes...no fukkin hatin Minimum posts to vote: 600 Check in by: 04-27-05 at 12:07 AM Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in. |
SoLo has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-26-05 11:40 PM.
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MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-26-05 11:41 PM.
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RV Givin Birth To Major Herbz..Now Y’all Know What Marv’s Been Fuckin…
I Set This Battle Twice..Marv Must Be A Quack The Way He’s Been Duckin… Yo Bitch I’m Cookin..You’ll Get Burnt Like Ya Sittin On The Gateway To Hell… Desperate To Get KO’ed Aren’t Ya “Jay”………”K”………You Can Have The “L”… I Hear Ya Yell..“I Run RV!” “I Run RV!” Man It’s Like Ya Mouth’s Set On Repeat… Marv The Only Way You’d Be Runnin Shit Is If Ya Crap Came Out With Feet… Ya Gettin Beat..Wanna Name Me Ali…Cuz I Am The Greatest In The Ring… Marv Agrees!! Now I’m Solo But Its Clear He Still Thinks Of Me As The King… This Bitch Can’t Spit A Thing..He Just Throws Hands Like He’s A Mime Rappin… Spits Like A Box Of “………” Streets..Cuz “Quality” Is What Ya Rhymes Lackin… * Wack Lines Ya Packin..Smoked 1009 Jay’s Now Marv Thinks His Skillz Are High… Fuck Bein A Nightmare Ya Lyrics Are Suicidal..Make Me Wanna Pop Pillz ‘n’ Die… * as in the sweets “QUALITY STREETS” anythin else ya dont understand then don't vote |
in a few i should c alot of deals,u pre write i dont n im hotta still.
solo broke his pockets like da "white house" he aint gota "bill". u da vet on dis month way da go,yea probly da best in da UK. but hold up listen fruit cake,im 1009 times nicer than yOU,K! wastin ya time u cant rap why go buy a couple new beats. solo's wack like da "first 7 days in april" yea dis "fools-weak". ur 2 sweet! fag "sit down" cuzz i really cant "stand" homo's. not da "star wars cat" i'll cut off ya limbs n beat u wit ya "hands-solo".* u all text only time u were in da "booth" u "confessin da preist". i'll put ya "heart in da air" since u got trouble "catchin da beat". fam u neva was KiNG neva see u stand on da throne. y's ya name SOLO u need crews u like "babi's","cant stand on ya own". |
Voted For: SoLo
MaRVJay1009: in a few i should c alot of deals,u pre write i dont n im hotta still. solo broke his pockets like da "white house" he aint gota "bill". ^^decent meta 5/10 u da vet on dis month way da go,yea probly da best in da UK. but hold up listen fruit cake,im 1009 times nicer than yOU,K! ^^decent bar.. self glorification though 5/10 wastin ya time u cant rap why go buy a couple new beats. solo's wack like da "first 7 days in april" yea dis "fools-weak". ^^good meta decent punch 6/10 ur 2 sweet! fag "sit down" cuzz i really cant "stand" homo's. not da "star wars cat" i'll cut off ya limbs n beat u wit ya "hands-solo".* ^^lol nice 8/10 u all text only time u were in da "booth" u "confessin da preist". i'll put ya "heart in da air" since u got trouble "catchin da beat". ^^ehh 4/10 fam u neva was KiNG neva see u stand on da throne. y's ya name SOLO u need crews u like "babi's","cant stand on ya own". ^^decent closer 6/10 Overall: 34/60 (57%) SoLo: RV Givin Birth To Major Herbz..Now Y’all Know What Marv’s Been Fuckin… I Set This Battle Twice..Marv Must Be A Quack The Way He’s Been Duckin… ^^good meta decent punch 6/10 Yo Bitch I’m Cookin..You’ll Get Burnt Like Ya Sittin On The Gateway To Hell… Desperate To Get KO’ed Aren’t Ya “Jay”………”K”………You Can Have The “L”… ^^ok 5/10 I Hear Ya Yell..“I Run RV!” “I Run RV!” Man It’s Like Ya Mouth’s Set On Repeat… Marv The Only Way You’d Be Runnin Shit Is If Ya Crap Came Out With Feet… ^^lol 8/10 Ya Gettin Beat..Wanna Name Me Ali…Cuz I Am The Greatest In The Ring… Marv Agrees!! Now I’m Solo But Its Clear He Still Thinks Of Me As The King… ^^decent personal 5/10 This Bitch Can’t Spit A Thing..He Just Throws Hands Like He’s A Mime Rappin… Spits Like A Box Of “………” Streets..Cuz “Quality” Is What Ya Rhymes Lackin… * ^^good meta 7/10 Wack Lines Ya Packin..Smoked 1009 Jay’s Now Marv Thinks His Skillz Are High… Fuck Bein A Nightmare Ya Lyrics Are Suicidal..Make Me Wanna Pop Pillz ‘n’ Die… ^^ehh 4/10 Overall: 35/60 (58%) Close battle but SoLo gets this one And this is my 4000th Post :thumbup: Plus the 100th battle i've voted on this weak... Im a beast Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
nice battle by both, i think marv edged it out a little though
should be close, props to both................ |
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
aight marv took dis eazy he came wit harder punches mroe personals sum good nameplay sikk ass metas he had sum aight multies openor-marv betta punch punches-marv,betta punches multies-tie stucture-solo nameplay-tie both had sum vocab-none closer-marv hiz punch was harder marv took dis came harder n put more effort n 2 it so marv gets mah vote Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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see i told u solo i knew u was gon get dat vote taken well ur's got taken 2
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Voted For: SoLo
MarvJays Verse in a few i should c alot of deals,u pre write i dont n im hotta still. solo broke his pockets like da "white house" he aint gota "bill". ^ 2nd line aight but 1st line a lil self-g u da vet on dis month way da go,yea probly da best in da UK. but hold up listen fruit cake,im 1009 times nicer than yOU,K! ^ blah self glory wastin ya time u cant rap why go buy a couple new beats. solo's wack like da "first 7 days in april" yea dis "fools-weak". ^ lol this was good i liked it ur 2 sweet! fag "sit down" cuzz i really cant "stand" homo's. not da "star wars cat" i'll cut off ya limbs n beat u wit ya "hands-solo".* ^ nice name flip but a lil played on the gay thing though...but good u all text only time u were in da "booth" u "confessin da preist". i'll put ya "heart in da air" since u got trouble "catchin da beat". ^ nice punch good rhyme fam u neva was KiNG neva see u stand on da throne. y's ya name SOLO u need crews u like "babi's","cant stand on ya own". ^ good closer again name flip all in all good Overall i was impressed this was good overall 2 things though you should work on. 1 lose the self-glory...audio perhaps you can get away wit it but i've learned in text, self-glory harms verses and it took 3 bars for you to kick in. 2 the layout of your verse is like how a newb would type, it's horribe u & you neva & never exactly the same why do it?...but other than that cool verse was good SoLo's verse RV Givin Birth To Major Herbz..Now Y’all Know What Marv’s Been Fuckin… I Set This Battle Twice..Marv Must Be A Quack The Way He’s Been Duckin… ^ good opener nice rhyme good flow Yo Bitch I’m Cookin..You’ll Get Burnt Like Ya Sittin On The Gateway To Hell… Desperate To Get KO’ed Aren’t Ya “Jay”………”K”………You Can Have The “L”… ^ lol good bar i liked I Hear Ya Yell..“I Run RV!” “I Run RV!” Man It’s Like Ya Mouth’s Set On Repeat… Marv The Only Way You’d Be Runnin Shit Is If Ya Crap Came Out With Feet… ^ LOL nice bar good punch...real steady diss Ya Gettin Beat..Wanna Name Me Ali…Cuz I Am The Greatest In The Ring… Marv Agrees!! Now I’m Solo But Its Clear He Still Thinks Of Me As The King… ^ nice link...self-g a lil on the 1st line...2nd debatable i'll explain in my overall This Bitch Can’t Spit A Thing..He Just Throws Hands Like He’s A Mime Rappin… Spits Like A Box Of “………” Streets..Cuz “Quality” Is What Ya Rhymes Lackin… * ^ nice for americans who DON'T know quality streets really are assorted box of chocs...nice bar Wack Lines Ya Packin..Smoked 1009 Jay’s Now Marv Thinks His Skillz Are High… Fuck Bein A Nightmare Ya Lyrics Are Suicidal..Make Me Wanna Pop Pillz ‘n’ Die… ^ good closer Overall More consistant verse i think now to explain the king/ring bar, that could seem like self-g but overview and also using a link is good which turned this bar from a self-g to a personal not much wrong with this really but this was in my eyes a decent battle...so i'm jus going on consistency in lines and my vote is for... SoLo |
NewKid's votes always get removed..............stop cryin like a little bitch Marv!!!!
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