Kesse vs Black Ghost
 

Battle Rules:

5 - 15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
NO crew and hate votes

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-29-05 at 07:35 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

Black Ghost has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-29-05 07:09 PM.

Nigga u fucked up cuz u pissed me off.Tryna act hard but my bullet tips'll leave ya soft/
Cuz im bout tired of u talkin all dat shit/
I gota banana clip dat'll leave yo ass split/
Im from da westside, bankhead to b exact/
the pump go boom bullets hit ya, ya go crack/
so u can talk shit da tech'll blow off ya head/
ya go 2 hell or heaven dont mata long as ya dead/
all rap verse Know ya lame an even if ya tried ya couldnt spit/
if every member in rap verse had they hand up yo ass they still wouldnt b feelin ya SHIT!!!!

Kesse has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-29-05 07:30 PM.

you step up in face and act like you the king of this site
but putting you in place and upping my wins will be my delight
you thought you could be beat me, i dont know how you figured
all you had to do was look in the mirror to see a 'pussy nigger'
you insult and annoy me, you dont do that, so i know you can't be sober
and by-the-way, ghosts not in style unless its the end of october
you spit so much shit, that you must be a freak
with an ass for a mouth, your the worst kind of unique
your too pathetic thats why my winnings will grow
i'm gunna rip you apart, so you better learn to sew
i thought that being a ghost, you would have learned from past events
should think things out first, , your time is spent, too late to repent
to paint up your bedsheet and challenge me your pretty brave
just call me Egon, your busted, now get back to your grave

-called me 'pussy nigga' earlier
-Egon, from ghost busters

a uppin we need some votes ill be sure 2 try 2 return tha favor

not to sound stupid or anythin, but being new, i dont know what uppin is, heh

Voted For: Black Ghost

aight this was a spectacular battle both emcees came out tough kesse i felt u dawg but at the end u lost me. black ghost it seemed that the only thing that saved u from losing my vote was your vo cabs and the closer overall both emcees came wit it but my vote has to go 2

-black ghost

upppp, upppppppp this shit,,,,,,,,,,uppppppppppuppupupup

cmaaaan peeps, uppppin here biatches, uppp uppp and more uppps dammit

Voted For: Kesse

Kesse

you step up in face and act like you the king of this site
but putting you in place and upping my wins will be my delight
^decent but no punch...

you thought you could be beat me, i dont know how you figured
all you had to do was look in the mirror to see a 'pussy nigger'
^good good

you insult and annoy me, you dont do that, so i know you can't be sober
and by-the-way, ghosts not in style unless its the end of october
^love 2nd line,1st could've been better

you spit so much shit, that you must be a freak
with an ass for a mouth, your the worst kind of unique
^okay bar

your too pathetic thats why my winnings will grow
i'm gunna rip you apart, so you better learn to sew
^not feeling it

i thought that being a ghost, you would have learned from past events
should think things out first, , your time is spent, too late to repent
^love 1st one,didn't feel 2nd as much

to paint up your bedsheet and challenge me your pretty brave
just call me Egon, your busted, now get back to your grave
^nice closer

Overall good drop, had some nice creative punches n personals in there, made me laugh here and there.Good wordplay,was also feeling your flow. Vocab n structure were straight on point,no bad comments on that.Just keep it up,solid verse!


Black Ghost

Nigga u fucked up cuz u pissed me off.Tryna act hard but my bullet tips'll leave ya soft/
^doesn't do the trick for me...

Cuz im bout tired of u talkin all dat shit/
I gota banana clip dat'll leave yo ass split/
^no punch...

Im from da westside, bankhead to b exact/
the pump go boom bullets hit ya, ya go crack/
^nah man...

so u can talk shit da tech'll blow off ya head/
ya go 2 hell or heaven dont mata long as ya dead/
^decent i guess

all rap verse Know ya lame an even if ya tried ya couldnt spit/
if every member in rap verse had they hand up yo ass they still wouldnt b feelin ya SHIT!!!!
^okay closer

Wasn't that good in fact,didn't have any hardhitting punches or personals in there and you used self-glorification a lot, always talking about blowing his head off and shit...that doesn't make you win battles...Vocab was decent,structure could be better and flow was okay but improve on those punches and such...no hate though...

This was feedback posted for Kesse
 

I think Kesse had the better rhyme, but the 'nigger' word was of low class. I would give an automatic disqualification for that shit. Thats scum of the earth shit to me.

haha, whatever man, i get called one, he does, straight up

upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin bitches up up up

Voted For: Kesse

Kesse- Again nice punches, upp ya grammer. Fix your strucuture kinda fucking up the flow....Dont stretch your lines that much fam....Punches was very creative and effective..wordplays was good...Add multi'z in your verse next time. Ok>?


Black-ghost- Punches were played, i've heard the "banna clit" so many times..Flow was fucked.........Structure needs elevation....Punches was basic and played out.........Need elevation in punches.....Dont stretch your lines that much......




overall=This is an one-sided battle.......Kesse had some effective punches, stayed on point. Wordplays was nice...Add multi'z.....Some of your punches kesse was a filler. Black-ghost, your punches was played out, basic. Flow was fucked..The structure needs elevatoin..dont stretch your lines that much.......Punches needs elevation......I have to give this to kesse, for harder punches and flow....Black ghost keep doing ya thang..just need a lil elevation...Vote kesse for harder puncehs black ghost was just played out, wun