8. Killah.Bwoy Vs. 32. Hotshh!
 

Rules:

Battles open Friday Night At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Verse's Due By Tuesday At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Voting Ends Thursday At 11:00 PM Eastern Time

12 Lines
No Biting
No Feeding
No Recycling
The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins

If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney!

Good Luck!

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You Gassed See....Only in the 2nd Round...from a no show Last Week...
Ya Album cover got a dumspter...... Cuz ya lyrics is where da Trash Be!
When 'Killa' Dont pay rent...Thats the only time He ever Got A Vic. (Evict)
You So Weak.....Even In Ya 'avy'... Cam Praying to Make it Out of It!
So U Should Skip Battling....You couldnt set fire to Trick Candles And
You might as well be from Detroit....The way u Couldnt 'Rip' Hamilton!!
Fuck Tournaments Ya Skills is Void..Break ya Speakers Just 2 Kill da Noise
He couldnt hang wit Grown Men....So Kontraverzy had to Killah Bwoy !!
Flow dealt me this 'Joker'...So I'll 'Cut Em Up'..Like Cards Drawn Fair...
While you 'Break Under Pressure'....like Bone Crusher in a Lawn Chair!!
"Is He Back"?...No!...He's Too Wack!..A weak punch'll make His Rib Sore..
So Fuck A Studio.....Kontraverzy should go "drop" From the Sixth Floor!!

dumpster lines Played

everything else koo

hey that speaker line was used by somene. not the same line but the concept. thats played too..

well since we are sharing........basically every punch including the apprentice one was played and worded badly...fucked up structure and absolutely no readible flow...the hotshh line played the viagra line worded bad and played the drug dealer line played..the sumo line if not played then weak...the ONLY thing i felt the need to compete with was the closer...good closer...other than that ......BLAH!!

and skriptz im confused r u in the voting council cuz i dont see u..if u are..i feel bad for round 3 if u think that verse was hot...cannabarz was wayyyy more competition

First of all, both of you need to stop swaying.....it's childish. If I feel the lines are played, I will say so....anyway

Killah came pretty weak to me. None of his lines really seemed to hit hard at all. No real wit behind any of his concepts.....plus they weren't really worded to effectively.

Hotshh had a few ok lines. Some of his set ups needed help though.....evict isn't the word you were looking for, it was evicted, which would have killed the whole set up. Anyway, he still had a better overall verse than Kontro....

Vote - Hotshh

killah.bwoy:

Your Wack, Your Garbage, truth is, Im Just Not Feelin' You..
Losin' Is your best Customer, And You Smokin Up all Your profits,
...........Sorta' Like Drug Dealers do..
^^ good meta weak punch 6/10
Hotshh.. <--Did Himself a favour and didn't finish the sentence..
Only Time Your Fired Is Blowin Farts While Competing On The Apprentice..
^^ liked the set up... punch was decent 6/10
Quickly, Murder this Hoe, With murderous Flows, Reload-n-then-Blow..
Medicine Man? Kid Stays Down, After a Multiple Liquidized Viagra Dose..
^^1st line was fire.. 2nd line was worded completely wrong 7/10
Punches Knock You to Heaven, Back down, So you can "live life after"..
Your Current Progress Similar to fat people Participatin in Stair Masters..
^^ set up line = wack punchline = good 7/10
Hotshh's Chances Of winnin', Slimmer Then Anerexic Sumo Wrestlers..
Embrace His hands around His Rap sheets, so he can feel soft Textures..
^^ehh decent closer 7/10

overall : 33/50 (66%)

killah you had another bar its 12 lines should have used the extra 2 lines

hotshh!:

You Gassed See....Only in the 2nd Round...from a no show Last Week...
Ya Album cover got a dumspter...... Cuz ya lyrics is where da Trash Be!
^^first line was fire 2nd was decent dumpster lines are played 6/10
When 'Killa' Dont pay rent...Thats the only time He ever Got A Vic. (Evict)
You So Weak.....Even In Ya 'avy'... Cam Praying to Make it Out of It!
^^lmao dope personal 8/10
So U Should Skip Battling....You couldnt set fire to Trick Candles And
You might as well be from Detroit....The way u Couldnt 'Rip' Hamilton!!
^^ another dope bar good consistency 8/10
Fuck Tournaments Ya Skills is Void..Break ya Speakers Just 2 Kill da Noise
He couldnt hang wit Grown Men....So Kontraverzy had to Killah Bwoy !!
^^lmfao dope as fuck best bar 10/10
Flow dealt me this 'Joker'...So I'll 'Cut Em Up'..Like Cards Drawn Fair...
While you 'Break Under Pressure'....like Bone Crusher in a Lawn Chair!!
^^lmao@bone crusher in a lawn chair good bar good meta 7/10
"Is He Back"?...No!...He's Too Wack!..A weak punch'll make His Rib Sore..
So Fuck A Studio.....Kontraverzy should go "drop" From the Sixth Floor!!
^^good way to close it dope bar 8/10

overall : 47/60 (78%)

vote: hotshh!

im giving it to hotssh fpr creatviity killah u came played as hell kid none of ur lines really hit that hard they could have if the were wordred right though
hotshh wasnt great eihter but he didnt come as played as killah here a few of his punches could have been reworded also

FUCK YOU i get the point no need to fuckin rub it in FUCK that pissed me off
im nto rubbng anything in i was voting

hotshh won, better verse overall, harder punches, etc. Killah had aight dopr but didn't make much sense. You know I vote honestly so if you need any more explanation get this vote dq'd

Vote - hotshh!

4-1 winner hotssh goodluck in the next round