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New Vs Old
Hey. May I say this day is estranged from the normal way to play
When I say, I mean I don’t portray us to be astray, or fucked.. K! May I give ya my reasons for believing my dealings, be stealing Aint no heathen, but fuck, I aint peeling the skin from within I don’t agree with the sins, cos im living within my moral fringe Like the Edinburgh festival, ya lynched, if ya astringed Cos if ya aint funny ya binned, ya games fucked, ill spin But ya lyrics are thin, like the anorexic, I don’t respect it But what’s expected, cos the kids around here are neglected, So in metric, their meters behind, but they don’t let it Bother them, its excepted, and reflected in the mirror of the next Generation, who can blame them. It’s in the views of the nation Hatred for the free living, blatant, with no time for the stationed Those untainted by the newly created, cos anything new is debated And anything old is dated, within minds torn… so who should make it?? |
The flow was the best part of this....it was perfect.
Your vocab was also up to par and your word selection made this an interestin piece. You were also pretty creative in this too and overall posted a good drop.....8/10 Check my open mic.....links in my sig and are you definatly a member of instant? |
ill hit ya link no problem... and im in if im accepted
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yall gotta go check out Atmosphere-"Trying To find a balance". U can download it on mtv.com.
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Yeah...your accepted. Already on the roster. We got the sub forum for perfection (topical+audio) Thats where you are
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thnx man... appreciated... wont let the crew down.... obviously...lol....
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Flow Was Perfect Man. . I Can't Complain About This Piece With Flow Like That, Straight Up. . Content Was Nice. . Vocab/Multi's. . On Your Level As Always. . I Was Jus Feelin This Shit Mainly Cause Of The Flow Tho. . Cause Ya Kno I Judge Pieces Based On Flow. . So You Getta 10/10 For This One. . Pz.
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thnx man... i was going mainly on flo... jus a new style im trying...
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liked this due to the consistent Flow
Multis sumtimes can be overused but this instance you got it nicely it helped prolong the flow thruout & ya flipped the topic well.......... thats why i got ya down at Peasantry coz ya hold ya own on a topic which i like I'd like to see ya do sum shit out the ordinary tho get a freaky topic & nail it..excuse the Pun if ya got Aim- PsDetained <thats mine hit me up Once again good spit & keep the Consistancy pz |
whoa deva Nice man i likes this very much....good keystyle man i liked your flow in this it was good.....ya Wordplay was Nice man I Liked tat quite alot....your vocab was also good....over all this was Good man keep it dropin KuZ....PeacE....
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damn......dev came nice here.......topic was interesting, not too played!.......flow was impeccable....structure was good...metas and wordplay i liked alot....ver apealing....
your vocab could'a been more consistent alittle basic at times but still....good enuff to say the Least......nice drop props keep em comin 9/10 peep open mic - Heres Something For Your Intrigue |
..this shit was ILL~~~~~~seriously..not as good as your recent works..but..still very nice..
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thnx people.... appreciated.....
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its hilarious this is far from Dev's dopest work and its still farrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr doper then ya'll best work. Dope drop Dev i can see u still killing em
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lol,,,,,thnx,,
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