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DaTrusHurtz 04-27-07 02:27 PM

15. docholiday (1-1) vs. 16. Tony Brown (7-4)
 
G.B.A
Gimmick Battle Association


Dead Celebrity Picture Battles

This week, we will be resurrecting the lives of many great individuals. Diss your opponent on their picture and on the life behind that picture. Do your research and be witty. Good Luck.

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docholiday as Easy E

vs.


Tony Brown as Big L


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Verses Due Monday at 12:00AM Pacific
10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit
Biting = Ban
Feeding = -2 Votes
Swaying = DQ
Must Vote On 4 Battles And Post Your Links
Votes Due Wednesday Night
New Battles Up Thursday Morning
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TonyTone 04-27-07 04:28 PM

trus his pic aint workin

docholiday 05-01-07 06:01 AM

Hurt this kid who on the surface is weightless jus look at slim
This sucker win? Yeah in a look a like contest for earthworm jim
My vice grips ta make mics lift crowds with tightness arrgh heck
Why even key a verse dudes already got beat wrapped round his neck
Hang this vet slammed him yes wit manuscripts of savage spits
That ravages amateurs who couldnt find head in a patch of cabbages
Anorexic lookin muthafucka fa gods sake you un-able ta hold weight
I bomb straight n evisterate till nothings left fa ya moms but........
Diggin in your crate.

Sorry fa lateness forgot bout I was in this league till today

Jus thought I should key somethin rather than no show

Peace.

TonyTone 05-01-07 02:14 PM

http://www.nndb.com/people/126/000023057/e.jpg

Dog i got the hottest punchlines, i wont bother a 2nd look
When Eazy sounds like Mike Tyson after his 20 years of takin hooks
Sure he got the wig braided now, but u ain't foolin this
Cuz when that shit gets let out, he the Don King rap duplicate
Actin like u really doin shit, like gangsta rap is a sport
Man, i never heard such a tall-tale...from someone so damn short
But truth be told, i gotta give ya props, congrats n mad love
For birthing an era of hip hop...that everyone else is tired of


Quote:
Originally Posted by Paranoid
but yo man you talk gangsta way to much man
Quote:
Originally Posted by Paranoid
you goin a little to gangsta haha almost sounds like you over played the lyrics man. you do this type music to much man I'd like to hear you switch it up man.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Willa
i dont like it simpl;y because you didnt spit gangsta before now thats all you spit about
Quote:
Originally Posted by K.ontroverz.Y
No fake gangsta shit here
Quote:
Originally Posted by Black Dragon
nah ur juss every black rapper on tha market now...'a gangsta'....lol fake ass e thug...



......and the list goes on

DaTrusHurtz 05-01-07 03:44 PM

Uppin for votes

Lay. 05-02-07 06:57 PM

My vice grips ta make mics lift crowds with tightness arrgh heck
Why even key a verse dudes already got beat wrapped round his neck
^that was descent..

vs.

Dog i got the hottest punchlines, i wont bother a 2nd look
When Eazy sounds like Mike Tyson after his 20 years of takin hooks
^made me laugh..

Doc's verse flowed real well...nice multi's in there..some of his punches didn't hit to hard though..I wasn't feelin it really. One decent one..n Tony had some alrite punches..^his opener was good. made me laugh lolz..he was more consistent throughout his verse..ez

v/Tony

§howcase 05-02-07 07:07 PM

Hurt this kid who on the surface is weightless jus look at slim
This sucker win? Yeah in a look a like contest for earthworm jim


vs.


Dog i got the hottest punchlines, i wont bother a 2nd look
When Eazy sounds like Mike Tyson after his 20 years of takin hooks
Actin like u really doin shit, like gangsta rap is a sport
Man, i never heard such a tall-tale...from someone so damn short



Weak battle. Both only really had one quotable each so I looked for another decent one and the only one I found was Tony's tall-tale punch. So just based off that, I gotta give this to Tony. Seemed like he didn't try much, but he still had enough to take it.

V/ Tony Brown

DiZzy 05-02-07 07:23 PM

Hurt this kid who on the surface is weightless jus look at slim
This sucker win? Yeah in a look a like contest for earthworm jim
^laughed a lil bit

vs

Sure he got the wig braided now, but u ain't foolin this
Cuz when that shit gets let out, he the Don King rap duplicate

v//tony 4 a better quote

Popcorn. 05-02-07 08:00 PM

doc:
Hurt this kid who on the surface is weightless jus look at slim
This sucker win? Yeah in a look a like contest for earthworm jim

vs.

tony:
Dog i got the hottest punchlines, i wont bother a 2nd look
When Eazy sounds like Mike Tyson after his 20 years of takin hooks
Actin like u really doin shit, like gangsta rap is a sport
Man, i never heard such a tall-tale...from someone so damn short



Weak battle overall. Goes down to quotables tho.




Vote = Tony Brown

TonyTone 05-02-07 09:34 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241838
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241836
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241834
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241835

okay 05-02-07 09:42 PM

nuthin

Vs

Actin like u really doin shit, like gangsta rap is a sport
Man, i never heard such a tall-tale...from someone so damn short
But truth be told, i gotta give ya props, congrats n mad love
For birthing an era of hip hop...that everyone else is tired of

V/tony i felt his verse was overall harder hitting with some good personals, doc your verse really had nuthin i was feeling the earth worm jim line wasnt good to me work on ya shit

docholiday 05-03-07 04:52 AM

man people need to learn to vote properly not takin nothing away from tony but the votings a joke at least make it seem like you know what ya doin break some cats down wordplay phors multies punches personals n shit god damn

uncle phil 05-03-07 07:12 AM

Doc only line I liked was earth worm jim... let me explain the cabbage line an the closer were both good concepts but the way you worded them man it took alot away from them i figure your mad coz ppl missed your flow but flow cant make up for weak punches in a text battle so remeber that

Tony - I wasnt feelin your verse at all wtf was up with qoutes? One line was the tired of your style that was cool but nothin else really made me laugh........

vote = Doc

TonyTone 05-03-07 08:06 AM

lmao...... .

DaTrusHurtz 05-03-07 10:41 AM

Actin like u really doin shit, like gangsta rap is a sport
Man, i never heard such a tall-tale...from someone so damn short

vs.

Nothin'

doc, concepts of urs were for the most part fine, but ur wording was kinda awkward n' that killed u. Tony came kinda bland, but tall tale line was aight n' that won it.

Vote - Tony Brown


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