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50Cal. 01-18-05 07:19 PM

LYRIC vs FLOW INTELLIGENT
 
CHECK IN BY FRIDAY OR TOPIC WONT BE GIVEN POEMS DUE BY SUNDAY EDIT YOU LINK WITH AT LEAST 2 OTHER POETRY BATTLES IN THE LEAGUE YOU VOTED ON VOTING ENDS WENSDAY AT 12 EASTERN TIME.NO LINE LENGTH AND DONT WRITE A TOPICAL THIS IS A POETRY LEAGUE I WILL DQ YOU IF YOU WRITE A FUCKING TOPICAL I HATE THAT SHIT ITS NOT POETRY :cussing:WINNERS RECIEVE 100,000 R.V SORRY NO SHOWS DONT GET PAIED YOU GOTTA ACTUALLY WIN :thumbup: GOOD LUCK TO BOTH :thumbup:


YOU TOO BY NO FAULT OF YALL OWN WERENT GIVEN A TOPIC SO THIS WEEKS BATTLE WILL COUNT DOUBLE 2 WINS OR 2 LOSSES SO DONT SLACK FELLOWS;)
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TOPIC-COLD RAIN

LyRiCaL GeEnUs 01-18-05 08:17 PM

shit CALI...discuss changes with me man
AIM= Supressed Skills

FlowIntelligent. 01-18-05 09:18 PM

wtf u gave us a topic 2 days late .. then u close it open this shit and say battles are worth double next week.. we didnt fuck up u and valor did.. i had a whole fucking verse written up already thats some gay shit try pming people i dont check this forum every day
*SMACKS THE BOY FOR BEING SO MOUTHY* I AINT FUCK SHIT UP I WASNT MOD TILL TUESDAY NOW EITHER I LEAVE YOUR BATTLE OPEN AND MAKE THE WHOLE LEAGUE WAIT OR I DO THIS I THOUGHT MAYBE SINCE YALL MISSED A WEEK YOUD BE WILLING TO TO DO THIS AS A CATCH UP UNLESS YOU FEAR LYRIC?IF YOU WANT IT TO 1 WIN OR LOSS I WILL CHANGE IT LYRIC AGREES FLOW IF YOU DONT PM ME AND I WILL CHANGE IT. OTHER THEN THAT TOPIC IS NOW UP YOU ARE RESPONSIBLE TO DROP FOR THIS PM ME BOUT THE REST DONT POST HERE THAT IS ALL.

LyRiCaL GeEnUs 01-21-05 08:48 AM

Cold Rain

Opaque skys roll blanketing me in grey
Droplets descend
Tears from heaven
Foreshadowing gloom is on the way

A barrage of tiny droplets explode
Miniature bombs
Impacting ground
Seeping down to forgotten souls

The drops burn my body with chills
Saturate my skin
Seeping within
Numbing all exposed cells and my will

I feel the helplessness of tomorrow
Im caught here
God's spittin fear
Drowning His creation in his sorrow

Completely submerged in my destiny
Staring at the sky
Open my mouth wide
I drink his tears without questioning

And for that moment I'm whole
Lifeless and cold
Raining on homes
His feelings freeze all warmth



50Cal. 01-24-05 02:02 AM

lyric wins flow no showed


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