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Ysdat 09-24-06 03:54 PM

~Luciano~ vs LooseNuse
 
Topic: A heart that wont bleed

Check in Due 25 September
Verse due 28 September

20 line Min
40 line Max

~Luciano~ 09-24-06 09:19 PM

*Steps 2 the PodiuM*

~Reporter:..Troop do u plan on makeing it 2 the championship?~


SINISTER 09-24-06 09:34 PM

LooseNuse Has Arrived
 
Mr.Sinnister Takes the stand
Reporter: Aren't you afraid of your very well known competor has in store,?


:shoot: Checkin in and good luck troop :nono:

SINISTER 09-28-06 01:37 AM

40 line max...Ok can do, We Drop Tommorow Troop, Be here......~24 Hour Notice~

SINISTER 09-28-06 11:59 PM

The Unbleeding Heart
 
Heart Of Darkness
...
The Unbleeding Heart

Nararater
Smoke lies on the hearts intent as Storms begin to rise
Nights of pain and misery, Fear called with a dredful Sigh *sigh*
There he stands where bodies lie Crippled on the ground
Fame is what he's looking for And hell is what he's found..

............
~ AS Dawn Begins To Rises A Premonition occurs-~

:What He Said:
Birds sang sweet in the silent trees.
Two lovers sat beneath their leaves
Gaily we laughed just to hear their song
As children we danced in the Summer sun
With lust jealousy grew in our twisted minds.
We said distrust had made us blind....

Within her eyes flames she calls out my name
A history of silence and legacy of pain
Mock the hearts intent,invite not it's curse
Misfortune or mirth she with-holds in her purse
The wings of a butterfly are Pounding away
Stir the breeze into hurricanes to this day
Severed fragments to myself defined my being
Pieced together makes life dispise it's meaning
Belive im not blind to Endless useless excuses,
YoU Achived to confuse your confidence boosting

:What she Said:
Keep your lips up, and please hold your tongue,
This glimpse of hatred, Will eclipse the sun.
Scorn the fear with your coldened sight
The granite Of heart gets strong with spite
So Please free my path to this broken estate
Through golden gate-ways passing too late
Pull your master out of trouble if your so hard
Double to give you less neglect, Respect the reward
I wanna be a pleasure slave Desire my body not my mind
The flesh that you degrade Make me feel like a lesser kind

:What Sinful Said:
AS Dreadful propaganda plays prosperity manipulates
An adgenda of fate fade's all questions of faith
How does she partake to be a servant of the snake
Where art thou whos heart is easy to penetrate?
Drastic measure for existence seems divine
Denote my heart unbleeds a delusive design
Pain will linger Until the blood drains cold
Obey the commands and then reject your soul
Strife of perfection to highten control
As told life evaporates every hearts hole
So now he has knowledge but what has he won?
All pages are empty - he's already gone.....

TK 09-29-06 12:27 AM

DQ i guess... all the work for nuttin, hurts don't it.

SINISTER 09-29-06 12:54 AM

Yeah it sucks, but whatever one step closer i guess........

TK 09-29-06 01:09 AM

Well, yea, actually I take back what I sed, writing is never a waste of time.

~Luciano~ 09-29-06 02:26 PM

sorry ya ive been booked with work and shit

i can drop before tommorow night (Sat) if thats ok with Loose

i kno as a Man u dont want no lil hoe show win

but its up 2 u and Ysdat 2 choose

Ysdat 09-29-06 04:25 PM

no.
LooseNuse wins

~Luciano~ 09-29-06 05:49 PM

lol @ u sayin it like it was gonna hurt my feelins

thats pretty wack

o well this tourny was a failure this yr anyway lol

i'd rather make money

smh

Ysdat 09-29-06 06:04 PM

what? hurt your feelings?! um, E-feelings?! huh?! You make no sense.
How does saying

"no.
LooseNuse wins"

Imply that im tryna hurt E feelings?

atti? 10-01-06 11:28 AM

smh ..... herb.


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