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21. Civilized Gangsta (2-4) vs. 22. Sprungy (0-0)
G.B.A Gimmick Battle Association Dead Celebrity Picture Battles This week, we will be resurrecting the lives of many great individuals. Diss your opponent on their picture and on the life behind that picture. Do your research and be witty. Good Luck. ============  Civilized Gangsta as James Brown vs.  Sprungy as Marlon Brando ============ Verses Due Monday at 12:00AM Pacific 10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit Biting = Ban Feeding = -2 Votes Swaying = DQ Must Vote On 4 Battles And Post Your Links Votes Due Wednesday Night New Battles Up Thursday Morning For Full Rules Click Here |
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im in, ill drop about 16.
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Dunno if hes gonna show, but the deadline to this came aroudn really quickly, and I'm about to go to bed, So i just threw somehtign together quickly.
16. james brown? what a farce!... face it your done. a sex machine? yeah, I heard you like to use vibrators for fun make you sleep with the fishes, when i pump my gun at this gay but you'll be at one... cause you look like a puffa fish, with all those lumps on ya face Fuck it, ya gay. claiming status, like the "godfather of soul" yet since your death your career is quickly falling, like I pushed you down a bottomless hole I beat you fast. yeah, brando is the boss of the boss is that a wig your wearing? or is it the top of a mop? you flop from the top. Let me tell you this. We won't "get up", and neither will your dead arse bitch I find it quite unfair, cause your shit, everyone basically bumps because your ill.. Yeah, you've got a serious case of the mumps. and I know in your verse you'll be packin fudge and coming with about as many lines as your jacket does. you could never finish the job.. you got caught when you were stealing, and fucked up your mastered stuff well how's this for a closer. *CREAK* your caskets shut. I dunno, I prolly shouldn't havent signed up If i knew the due date was gonna be so soon, been busy as hell with work. Ah well, good luck. |
Geez, Marlon Brando?
..................you look like you got hit by a 'streetcar' and ran ova I guess its the desire to eat cuz ya waist is biggin then ya damn shoulda's Ya must have been eatin damn boulders, hold that mic next to ya heart son Seriously, i thought you died of old age, and you fuckin got scarred lungs Actually they said thats not what killed ya, we determined it wasn't older age And potter wasn't your heart problem VERNON, you was just overweight We're no longer in the older days, And now you can't be missed dude Cuz you had more fuckin health problems, then ALL of your family's issues Your whole life was wreckless, even as a kid..... you were still scary fool How the fuck you move around 10 times, and get kicked out of military school 10 years for Manslaughter? Damn, ya son didn't finish right dude Raise children.....your fuckin daughter committed suicide too 24? damn son, you was born way the fuck back then. hold on *pause Jumpstart of your career? Dude, your fuckin OLDER then jaws My bad on the fat jokes dude, but thats something i can't not bother Dude you had 9 fuckin children no wonder you played 'The GodFather' This shit's a boat, a closed deal. But i have a opposite belief Cuz the funeral aignt a mystery. They just tossed you into the sea |
james brown? what a farce!... face it your done.
a sex machine? yeah, I heard you like to use vibrators for fun decent make you sleep with the fishes, when i pump my gun at this gay but you'll be at one... cause you look like a puffa fish, with all those lumps on ya face meh Fuck it, ya gay. claiming status, like the "godfather of soul" yet since your death your career is quickly falling, like I pushed you down a bottomless hole okish at best I beat you fast. yeah, brando is the boss of the boss is that a wig your wearing? or is it the top of a mop? nah you flop from the top. Let me tell you this. We won't "get up", and neither will your dead arse bitch nah, ya both dead I find it quite unfair, cause your shit, everyone basically bumps because your ill.. Yeah, you've got a serious case of the mumps. no and I know in your verse you'll be packin fudge and coming with about as many lines as your jacket does. decent you could never finish the job.. you got caught when you were stealing, and fucked up your mastered stuff well how's this for a closer. *CREAK* your caskets shut. no was ok in spots, bad in others Vsss Geez, Marlon Brando? ..................you look like you got hit by a 'streetcar' and ran ova I guess its the desire to eat cuz ya waist is biggin then ya damn shoulda's okish at best Ya must have been eatin damn boulders, hold that mic next to ya heart son Seriously, i thought you died of old age, and you fuckin got scarred lungs nah Actually they said thats not what killed ya, we determined it wasn't older age And potter wasn't your heart problem VERNON, you was just overweight okish at best We're no longer in the older days, And now you can't be missed dude Cuz you had more fuckin health problems, then ALL of your family's issues lol ok Your whole life was wreckless, even as a kid..... you were still scary fool How the fuck you move around 10 times, and get kicked out of military school nah 10 years for Manslaughter? Damn, ya son didn't finish right dude Raise children.....your fuckin daughter committed suicide too lol fuckin harsh 24? damn son, you was born way the fuck back then. hold on *pause Jumpstart of your career? Dude, your fuckin OLDER then jaws nah My bad on the fat jokes dude, but thats something i can't not bother Dude you had 9 fuckin children no wonder you played 'The GodFather' meh This shit's a boat, a closed deal. But i have a opposite belief Cuz the funeral aignt a mystery. They just tossed you into the sea eh both were inconsistant but had decent stuff, so its kinda close V// Stub, his punches hit harder, now go write your verse for our pic battle lol I'm already done |
Uppin for votes
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wow @ only 1 vote on this.
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I beat you fast. yeah, brando is the boss of the boss
is that a wig your wearing? or is it the top of a mop? vs 10 years for Manslaughter? Damn, ya son didn't finish right dude Raise children.....your fuckin daughter committed suicide too v//stubb |
and I know in your verse you'll be packin fudge
and coming with about as many lines as your jacket does. vs. 10 years for Manslaughter? Damn, ya son didn't finish right dude Raise children.....your fuckin daughter committed suicide too ^haha..K stubbs came more consistent with better punches n' less played. v/ Stubbs |
sprungy:
and I know in your verse you'll be packin fudge and coming with about as many lines as your jacket does. vs stubbs: 10 years for Manslaughter? Damn, ya son didn't finish right dude Raise children.....your fuckin daughter committed suicide too Alright battle. Stubbs came more consistent. Vote = K.Stubbs |
nuthin
Vs We're no longer in the older days, And now you can't be missed dude Cuz you had more fuckin health problems, then ALL of your family's issues V/k stubbs his verse overall hit better an this line i thought was pretty good sprungy your punchs were to bland an had no wit to them work on that |
and I know in your verse you'll be packin fudge
and coming with about as many lines as your jacket does. vs 10 years for Manslaughter? Damn, ya son didn't finish right dude Raise children.....your fuckin daughter committed suicide too My bad on the fat jokes dude, but thats something i can't not bother Dude you had 9 fuckin children no wonder you played 'The GodFather' ^^^needed to tweak the wording v/ stubb for the extra "near quotable" line lol |
Honestly, nothing in Sprungy's verse was good.
Maybe: I beat you fast. yeah, brando is the boss of the boss is that a wig your wearing? or is it the top of a mop? Was a lil funny, barely. Nothing else was harsh at all. Everything else was meh: I find it quite unfair, cause your shit, everyone basically bumps because your ill.. Yeah, you've got a serious case of the mumps. Damn, this concept is ooooollllllllldddddd. As far as Stubbs, most of his stuff had potential, but nothing was harsh here either. But, it did seem like he had a greater grasp on wording, and his shit was overall just better. Actually they said thats not what killed ya, we determined it wasn't older age And potter wasn't your heart problem VERNON, you was just overweight That had potential. So yeah, my vote goes to Stubbs. ----------------- VOTE: K. STUBBS ----------------- |
I beat you fast. yeah, brando is the boss of the boss
is that a wig your wearing? or is it the top of a mop? vs. 10 years for Manslaughter? Damn, ya son didn't finish right dude Raise children.....your fuckin daughter committed suicide too Sprungy, ur verse looked rushed. A lot of really simple concepts n' not that much wit in ur verse, was expectin' more. Mop shit was good and puffa fish was aight, but that was about it. Civilized, was hopin' to see improvement this week. I saw a little, but not much. Ur wording is still a bit awkward n' u gotta work on soundin' more direct. Ur concepts were much better than his though n' u came more consistent so u got this. Vote - Civilized Gangsta |
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