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lyricalflowz 03-04-09 11:58 PM

This was feedback posted for J. Luth
 
Luth, you had some pretty good punches. Good wordplay, decent personals. Structure was cool, flow was good.

Sno, too match selfglorifying. You had a couple of good punches. Creativity was there, I felt some of your shit could have been worded differently for a harder hitting punches. I'd suggest you start to use more personals.

Overall, Luth came harder, his punches hit much harder and he had more personals.

Luth gets my vote although I can't vote because of the post requirement.

Oh and lol @ my name in this, if this was about the kirk and sno battle. That was an honest vote. I honestly didn't like how Kirk played off his name several times, it got old. It was basically the same concept for 3 different punches, but anyhow that's old news.

King Solo 03-05-09 08:42 AM

Voted For: J. Luth

SnoCap had an old style. Some of that shit just took me back to '03-'04. I mean, the flow was adequate, but the punchlines were lacking severely. The execution was just poor. That see dumb people could've been flipped raw, but sno just flipped it too simple. That was just an example, shit like the opener and the jack in the box shit were just weaksauce and overall I wasn't feeling the verse at all.

SPuL threw in some throwaway punches into his verse and mixed in a couple of solid hits. The bush league shit was ok, I've seen it before though. The lyricalflowz/gkillaz shit was a nice flip and was on the money because they do still vote for the weak ass old shit. The half ass has been done. The toasted his soap also. The applause punch was a bit ehhh, I didn't like it. Then you sealed it with the sno nameplay which was creative, witty, and had a nice execution.

VOTE: J. LUTH

SUPERVILLAIN 03-05-09 10:40 AM

This was feedback posted for J. Luth
 
just checkin' the polls. nice shit fam...you got this.

p.s.- smack a wenis son. :thumbup:


s.v.

Ltizzle 03-05-09 03:22 PM

This was feedback posted for SnoCap
 
LOL at that potato line. That shit just sounds hilarious.

J. Luth 03-05-09 10:33 PM

upping for the voteronis...........................

MurDaH187 03-05-09 11:52 PM

This was feedback posted for SnoCap
 
Since I'm hood and my computer don't have internet access I'm on my g1 online and I'm not writing both verse but hot danm there was some fire in here both have nice flow and decent set up and good punches but in all reality there have to be winner here and I think snocap came harderfrom jump to finish and the other dude was on someshit like he half assin it beating u which the cocky attuid had some straight hits still u should of went harder if u could and also for the simple face ur opponit came harder then u think good battle much props..... 9/10 most def both verse

SnoCap 03-06-09 12:09 AM

good thing you need 1g posts to vote so only his homeboys can vote :)

MurDaH187 03-06-09 12:41 AM

That don't mean we cool fam after that bullshit vote u drop on me I just vote honest and fair like everyone else should around here including you...

SnoCap 03-06-09 01:08 AM

i was being honost too... You want me to vote for you cuz you voted for me?

why are your votes fair and mine arent?... no one voted for you.

MurDaH187 03-06-09 03:15 PM

You stupid fuck I broke ur verse down if I don't then I explain why the fuck I voted for who I picked you said vote blah because murdah sucks that's it.... that's not no fucking brake down dick you ain't explain shit there for don't fucking vote if u don't brake it down is all I'm fucking saying stop being a follower dush bag "ooh how I'm I hateing no1 else voted for you" so you felt the need not to read the verse and just vote for the same person they did????? You feel like u cool now cuz you follow them dush bag???? Well you not u just the condom to my dick bitch u'll get tossed in the trash when I'm done with u hommie..... set up a battle and let's bang or shut the fuck up and stop being a follower prick I'm done with you

SnoCap 03-06-09 04:43 PM

nigga that wasnt me, that was coke... i broke yuor shit down and tried to give you tips to elevate... i wouldnt never say... /v ___ cuz ____ sucks...

GKillaz05 03-06-09 07:02 PM

Voted For: SnoCap

Blah didn't bother trying against this herb (was that nessesary? )

J. Luth:
I thought he had some potential, but now I KNOW that dude’s average
Cuz that verse was so Bush league.. Iraqi’s should be throwing shoes at it
4/10 - weak opener.
My verses get voters on their feet. Your’s make ‘em snore for a month
I win cuz my lyricalflowz are gkillaz. You’d win if they could vote more than once
1/10 - didnt make sence ... (fake personals that make no sence ..played to the fuck max kid.)
So when I’m facing this fag? No need to try and be sick
I half ass, while he just got one on each side of a dick
4/10 - weak ...
I’m sick, bro, just choke. My lines? Most of ‘em dope
You drop heat? Guess that makes you the first dude who toasted his soap
6/10 - alright ..
Romance? Shit, If this herb ever bagged a broad, the chick a fool
So when you tie the knot we’ll hold our applause... ‘till the bitch kicks the stool
4/10 - nah.
Living in New England I’ve seen sno crumble, and I’ve definitely seen sno fall
But even after severe storms and showers, I’ve still yet to see sno ball
2/10 - what the fuck man?
21/60

seriously dude .. i dont like you, this is true .. I would still tell you if you had some iight shit ive seen iight shit from you before.. but that was fuckin' terrible ... and keep my name out your mouth you fruity l luth mofo'


SnoCap:
What you gonna do when i start engagin ya mind?
You could donate ya kidneys but the board still wont be taking ya side!!
6/10 - good opener .. fuck anybody that thought spuls was better.
He wieryer, If im superman than Luthor inferior...
and only "see dumb people" lookin the mirror!!
5/10 - good personal. (not fake like spuls)
You new to this? Step to sno? you must be losin it
Homie i BOMB and get "atom" like nucleus!!
2/10 - nah.
Its sinnacle how i take this Kid to school like principals...
At my pinnacle, Before he could speak i cut em off like umbilicals!!
4.5/10 - rhymed niice.. good punch.
I degrade foes, swear hes fresh but all his concepts played though...
Dont be affraid bro, everyone know you more underground than a potato!!
3.5/10 - played.. but good multi's..
My rhymes sound drastic, you lackin in drops...
i put this clown in his casket like jack in the box!!
2/10 - weak closer.
23/60

you had some tight rhymes in there for sure .. it flowed well,a nd had some niice hits .. a bit was played though.

GKillaz05 03-06-09 07:09 PM

props to murder not bein' on luth's fuckin' jock .. that vote should count ... usin' that bs sayin' 04 style is old .. what the fuck was so fresh about spuls verse? it didnt rhymed well.. battles are about flow and fuckin' good rhymes and multi's .... not just some punch you fuckin' think is hott ... nd then some simple rhyme at the end... its not fuckin awesome .. sick and dick ... ball and fall .. thats some weak ass fuckin' shit .. i dont care if he attempted some whavk punvh .. where is the flow .. and the niice multi's to go with a punch or personal .....

GKillaz05 03-06-09 08:32 PM

wow and now I see all that recycled shit SPuL that is fuckin' low bitch .. you no more can say shit about me not bein' "fresh" or whatever the fuck it is your on... I fuckin' atleast write some new shit for every one of my battles bitch... you deserve to lose this .. your no where close as good as you think you are.

SnoCap 03-06-09 08:38 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by GKillaz05
wow and now I see all that recycled shit SPuL that is fuckin' low bitch .. you no more can say shit about me not bein' "fresh" or whatever the fuck it is your on... I fuckin' atleast write some new shit for every one of my battles bitch... you deserve to lose this .. your no where close as good as you think you are.


^ LOL word.... good thing he put 1g for votes tho... now he actually got a chance :)


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