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J. Luth 03-02-09 11:25 PM

SnoCap vs J. Luth
 
8-12 lines and shit

Minimum posts to vote: 1000

Check in by: 03-05-09 at 11:25 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 03-02-09 11:26 PM

J. Luth has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-02-09 11:26 PM.

System 03-02-09 11:30 PM

SnoCap has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-02-09 11:30 PM.

SnoCap 03-02-09 11:31 PM

are you actually going to post cuz ill juss drop the verse in the thread homeboy, i could careless if yu show or not.

J. Luth 03-02-09 11:31 PM

I am, if I don't it counts as a loss. And I can't risk my ever so beautiful record :(

SnoCap 03-02-09 11:51 PM

What you gonna do when i start engagin ya mind?
You could donate ya kidneys but the board still wont be taking ya side!!
He wieryer, If im superman than Luthor inferior...
and only "see dumb people" lookin the mirror!!
You new to this? Step to sno? you must be losin it
Homie i BOMB and get "atom" like nucleus!!
Its sinnacle how i take this Kid to school like principals...
At my pinnacle, Before he could speak i cut em off like umbilicals!!
I degrade foes, swear hes fresh but all his concepts played though...
Dont be affraid bro, everyone know you more underground than a potato!!
My rhymes sound drastic, you lackin in drops...
i put this clown in his casket like jack in the box!!

J. Luth 03-04-09 07:48 PM

Blah didn't bother trying against this herb

Ok...
I thought he had some potential, but now I KNOW that dude’s average
Cuz that verse was so Bush league.. Iraqi’s should be throwing shoes at it
My verses get voters on their feet. Your’s make ‘em snore for a month
I win cuz my lyricalflowz are gkillaz. You’d win if they could vote more than once
So when I’m facing this fag? No need to try and be sick
I half ass, while he just got one on each side of a dick
I’m sick, bro, just choke. My lines? Most of ‘em dope
You drop heat? Guess that makes you the first dude who toasted his soap
Romance? Shit, If this herb ever bagged a broad, the chick a fool
So when you tie the knot we’ll hold our applause... ‘till the bitch kicks the stool
Living in New England I’ve seen sno crumble, and I’ve definitely seen sno fall
But even after severe storms and showers, I’ve still yet to see sno ball
12

ONE LUTH MU FUCKA!


JTR 03-04-09 07:56 PM

Voted For: J. Luth

My verses get voters on their feet. Your’s make ‘em snore for a month
I win cuz my lyricalflowz are gkillaz. You’d win if they could vote more than once
Romance? Shit, If this herb ever bagged a broad, the chick a fool
So when you tie the knot we’ll hold our applause... ‘till the bitch kicks the stool
I thought he had some potential, but now I KNOW that dude’s average
Cuz that verse was so Bush league.. Iraqi’s should be throwing shoes at it

vs.

Its sinnacle how i take this Kid to school like principals...
At my pinnacle, Before he could speak i cut em off like umbilicals!!

Those three bars from J Luth caught my attention, illy. Other then that the rest of his verse was aight. Snocop it's good you got your flow and rhymescheme down good but yo can always work more on that, and the punches you had seemed really played, work on being more fresh bro

v/j luth

Cola 03-04-09 08:14 PM

This was feedback posted for J. Luth
 
I thought he had some potential, but now I KNOW that dude’s average
Cuz that verse was so Bush league.. Iraqi’s should be throwing shoes at it


wow, you had to recyle that line AGAIN?

J. Luth 03-04-09 08:50 PM

That ain't recycled. Nice try tho. Stop swaying...

Cola 03-04-09 08:55 PM

rofl

yes it is, you've used that punch more than once dude

stop fronting

J. Luth 03-04-09 09:09 PM

Prove it or get the fuck out of the battle son. word

SnoCap 03-04-09 10:02 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by J. Luth
Blah didn't bother trying against this herb

Ok...
I thought he had some potential, but now I KNOW that dude’s average
Cuz that verse was so Bush league.. Iraqi’s should be throwing shoes at it
My verses get voters on their feet. Your’s make ‘em snore for a month
I win cuz my lyricalflowz are gkillaz. You’d win if they could vote more than once
So when I’m facing this fag? No need to try and be sick
I half ass, while he just got one on each side of a dick
I’m sick, bro, just choke. My lines? Most of ‘em dope
You drop heat? Guess that makes you the first dude who toasted his soap
Romance? Shit, If this herb ever bagged a broad, the chick a fool
So when you tie the knot we’ll hold our applause... ‘till the bitch kicks the stool
Living in New England I’ve seen sno crumble, and I’ve definitely seen sno fall
But even after severe storms and showers, I’ve still yet to see sno ball




I’m sick, bro, just choke. My lines? Most of ‘em dope
You drop heat? Guess that makes you the first dude who toasted his soap

http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-...er-3-1-a-2.html

I half ass, while he just got one on each side of a dick

http://board.rapmusic.com/rapmusic-...-luth-wins.html

And the bush line too...

J. Luth 03-04-09 10:06 PM

^LOL wasn't in the rules . :evilgrin:

SnoCap 03-04-09 10:07 PM

LoL, thats fine... its all good, you can recycle shit just own it when you do it instead of denying it like a dumb bitch.

Coke called you out on the bushline and you denyed it... so i'll juss blow you up for the fake you are :)

but its all good, i aint hatin jus statin, i already knew you wasnt creative.

lyricalflowz 03-04-09 11:58 PM

This was feedback posted for J. Luth
 
Luth, you had some pretty good punches. Good wordplay, decent personals. Structure was cool, flow was good.

Sno, too match selfglorifying. You had a couple of good punches. Creativity was there, I felt some of your shit could have been worded differently for a harder hitting punches. I'd suggest you start to use more personals.

Overall, Luth came harder, his punches hit much harder and he had more personals.

Luth gets my vote although I can't vote because of the post requirement.

Oh and lol @ my name in this, if this was about the kirk and sno battle. That was an honest vote. I honestly didn't like how Kirk played off his name several times, it got old. It was basically the same concept for 3 different punches, but anyhow that's old news.

King Solo 03-05-09 08:42 AM

Voted For: J. Luth

SnoCap had an old style. Some of that shit just took me back to '03-'04. I mean, the flow was adequate, but the punchlines were lacking severely. The execution was just poor. That see dumb people could've been flipped raw, but sno just flipped it too simple. That was just an example, shit like the opener and the jack in the box shit were just weaksauce and overall I wasn't feeling the verse at all.

SPuL threw in some throwaway punches into his verse and mixed in a couple of solid hits. The bush league shit was ok, I've seen it before though. The lyricalflowz/gkillaz shit was a nice flip and was on the money because they do still vote for the weak ass old shit. The half ass has been done. The toasted his soap also. The applause punch was a bit ehhh, I didn't like it. Then you sealed it with the sno nameplay which was creative, witty, and had a nice execution.

VOTE: J. LUTH

SUPERVILLAIN 03-05-09 10:40 AM

This was feedback posted for J. Luth
 
just checkin' the polls. nice shit fam...you got this.

p.s.- smack a wenis son. :thumbup:


s.v.

Ltizzle 03-05-09 03:22 PM

This was feedback posted for SnoCap
 
LOL at that potato line. That shit just sounds hilarious.

J. Luth 03-05-09 10:33 PM

upping for the voteronis...........................

MurDaH187 03-05-09 11:52 PM

This was feedback posted for SnoCap
 
Since I'm hood and my computer don't have internet access I'm on my g1 online and I'm not writing both verse but hot danm there was some fire in here both have nice flow and decent set up and good punches but in all reality there have to be winner here and I think snocap came harderfrom jump to finish and the other dude was on someshit like he half assin it beating u which the cocky attuid had some straight hits still u should of went harder if u could and also for the simple face ur opponit came harder then u think good battle much props..... 9/10 most def both verse

SnoCap 03-06-09 12:09 AM

good thing you need 1g posts to vote so only his homeboys can vote :)

MurDaH187 03-06-09 12:41 AM

That don't mean we cool fam after that bullshit vote u drop on me I just vote honest and fair like everyone else should around here including you...

SnoCap 03-06-09 01:08 AM

i was being honost too... You want me to vote for you cuz you voted for me?

why are your votes fair and mine arent?... no one voted for you.

MurDaH187 03-06-09 03:15 PM

You stupid fuck I broke ur verse down if I don't then I explain why the fuck I voted for who I picked you said vote blah because murdah sucks that's it.... that's not no fucking brake down dick you ain't explain shit there for don't fucking vote if u don't brake it down is all I'm fucking saying stop being a follower dush bag "ooh how I'm I hateing no1 else voted for you" so you felt the need not to read the verse and just vote for the same person they did????? You feel like u cool now cuz you follow them dush bag???? Well you not u just the condom to my dick bitch u'll get tossed in the trash when I'm done with u hommie..... set up a battle and let's bang or shut the fuck up and stop being a follower prick I'm done with you

SnoCap 03-06-09 04:43 PM

nigga that wasnt me, that was coke... i broke yuor shit down and tried to give you tips to elevate... i wouldnt never say... /v ___ cuz ____ sucks...

GKillaz05 03-06-09 07:02 PM

Voted For: SnoCap

Blah didn't bother trying against this herb (was that nessesary? )

J. Luth:
I thought he had some potential, but now I KNOW that dude’s average
Cuz that verse was so Bush league.. Iraqi’s should be throwing shoes at it
4/10 - weak opener.
My verses get voters on their feet. Your’s make ‘em snore for a month
I win cuz my lyricalflowz are gkillaz. You’d win if they could vote more than once
1/10 - didnt make sence ... (fake personals that make no sence ..played to the fuck max kid.)
So when I’m facing this fag? No need to try and be sick
I half ass, while he just got one on each side of a dick
4/10 - weak ...
I’m sick, bro, just choke. My lines? Most of ‘em dope
You drop heat? Guess that makes you the first dude who toasted his soap
6/10 - alright ..
Romance? Shit, If this herb ever bagged a broad, the chick a fool
So when you tie the knot we’ll hold our applause... ‘till the bitch kicks the stool
4/10 - nah.
Living in New England I’ve seen sno crumble, and I’ve definitely seen sno fall
But even after severe storms and showers, I’ve still yet to see sno ball
2/10 - what the fuck man?
21/60

seriously dude .. i dont like you, this is true .. I would still tell you if you had some iight shit ive seen iight shit from you before.. but that was fuckin' terrible ... and keep my name out your mouth you fruity l luth mofo'


SnoCap:
What you gonna do when i start engagin ya mind?
You could donate ya kidneys but the board still wont be taking ya side!!
6/10 - good opener .. fuck anybody that thought spuls was better.
He wieryer, If im superman than Luthor inferior...
and only "see dumb people" lookin the mirror!!
5/10 - good personal. (not fake like spuls)
You new to this? Step to sno? you must be losin it
Homie i BOMB and get "atom" like nucleus!!
2/10 - nah.
Its sinnacle how i take this Kid to school like principals...
At my pinnacle, Before he could speak i cut em off like umbilicals!!
4.5/10 - rhymed niice.. good punch.
I degrade foes, swear hes fresh but all his concepts played though...
Dont be affraid bro, everyone know you more underground than a potato!!
3.5/10 - played.. but good multi's..
My rhymes sound drastic, you lackin in drops...
i put this clown in his casket like jack in the box!!
2/10 - weak closer.
23/60

you had some tight rhymes in there for sure .. it flowed well,a nd had some niice hits .. a bit was played though.

GKillaz05 03-06-09 07:09 PM

props to murder not bein' on luth's fuckin' jock .. that vote should count ... usin' that bs sayin' 04 style is old .. what the fuck was so fresh about spuls verse? it didnt rhymed well.. battles are about flow and fuckin' good rhymes and multi's .... not just some punch you fuckin' think is hott ... nd then some simple rhyme at the end... its not fuckin awesome .. sick and dick ... ball and fall .. thats some weak ass fuckin' shit .. i dont care if he attempted some whavk punvh .. where is the flow .. and the niice multi's to go with a punch or personal .....

GKillaz05 03-06-09 08:32 PM

wow and now I see all that recycled shit SPuL that is fuckin' low bitch .. you no more can say shit about me not bein' "fresh" or whatever the fuck it is your on... I fuckin' atleast write some new shit for every one of my battles bitch... you deserve to lose this .. your no where close as good as you think you are.

SnoCap 03-06-09 08:38 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by GKillaz05
wow and now I see all that recycled shit SPuL that is fuckin' low bitch .. you no more can say shit about me not bein' "fresh" or whatever the fuck it is your on... I fuckin' atleast write some new shit for every one of my battles bitch... you deserve to lose this .. your no where close as good as you think you are.


^ LOL word.... good thing he put 1g for votes tho... now he actually got a chance :)

J. Luth 03-06-09 09:40 PM

^LOL @ you getting your hopes up from Gkillaz vote. He only proved me right with my opener.

rofl tho @ you saying no multi's, when actually every single line has a multi in it. Oh and the fact that you rated his verse 2 pts above me and his verse was "tight" and mine was "Wack" lmaoo

It's cool tho, I expected that shit from you (hence the punch, which obviously went over your head too).

Oh, and sno, I love how you hang your hopes that you actually won this battle on some dude who JUST signed up and is named Murdah187 and some herb like Gkillaz. Great crowd homie.

And Gkillaz, set it up anytime loser.

MurDaH187 03-06-09 11:56 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by J. Luth
^LOL @ you getting your hopes up from Gkillaz vote. He only proved me right with my opener.

rofl tho @ you saying no multi's, when actually every single line has a multi in it. Oh and the fact that you rated his verse 2 pts above me and his verse was "tight" and mine was "Wack" lmaoo

It's cool tho, I expected that shit from you (hence the punch, which obviously went over your head too).

Oh, and sno, I love how you hang your hopes that you actually won this battle on some dude who JUST signed up and is named Murdah187 and some herb like Gkillaz. Great crowd homie.

And Gkillaz, set it up anytime loser.


Yo did you really just try to play me like a herb bitch??? You mad cuz you thought he beat him and you got proven that don't everyone in this bitch think the same???? Get ova it hommie you can't make niggas change they mind just cuz you say so don't everyone got they own opinon so why u acting stupid for??? Relack be ez take the votes how they come and elevate and WATCH HOW U SAY MY NAME or just kepp my name OUT YA MOUTH.......

Brydon 03-07-09 03:52 AM

This was feedback posted for J. Luth
 
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Brydon 03-07-09 04:04 AM

Recycle king lmao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

To be honest i wuda voted for that dickhead spul but after thinking id seen sum of that shit before somewhere but wasnt 100% i wuda went other way with my vote, for someone who thinks he is god, u should atleast create fresh shit like god would a son.

Magic5 03-07-09 02:41 PM

Voted For: J. Luth

I thought he had some potential, but now I KNOW that dude’s average
Cuz that verse was so Bush league.. Iraqi’s should be throwing shoes at it
My verses get voters on their feet. Your’s make ‘em snore for a month
I win cuz my lyricalflowz are gkillaz. You’d win if they could vote more than once
I’m sick, bro, just choke. My lines? Most of ‘em dope
You drop heat? Guess that makes you the first dude who toasted his soap

vs.

Nothing

J. Luth wins. SnoCap had all kinds of played shit (underground/potato, kidney/side, etc. etc.). J. Luth came with more than enough to win. The first two lines of his verse beat SnoCap's entire verse, I only kept reading as a courtesy. This battle wasn't even close.

And recycling doesn't mean shit when a). It's not in the rules and b). You're battling somebody who you don't know anything about because they suck. It's not like SnoCap dropped a bunch of shit that was aimed specifically at J. Luth -- he had a bunch of generic shit too. J. Luth was just better.

Vote - J. Luth

Valerie 03-07-09 05:45 PM

This was feedback posted for J. Luth
 
Checking the Polls .

King Solo 01-17-10 08:24 PM

Closed at the request of the battler.

fuck yuu 09-24-10 08:38 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mimesis
Voted For: J. Luth

I thought he had some potential, but now I KNOW that dude’s average
Cuz that verse was so Bush league.. Iraqi’s should be throwing shoes at it
My verses get voters on their feet. Your’s make ‘em snore for a month
I win cuz my lyricalflowz are gkillaz. You’d win if they could vote more than once
I’m sick, bro, just choke. My lines? Most of ‘em dope
You drop heat? Guess that makes you the first dude who toasted his soap

vs.

Nothing

J. Luth wins. SnoCap had all kinds of played shit (underground/potato, kidney/side, etc. etc.). J. Luth came with more than enough to win. The first two lines of his verse beat SnoCap's entire verse, I only kept reading as a courtesy. This battle wasn't even close.

And recycling doesn't mean shit when a). It's not in the rules and b). You're battling somebody who you don't know anything about because they suck. It's not like SnoCap dropped a bunch of shit that was aimed specifically at J. Luth -- he had a bunch of generic shit too. J. Luth was just better.

Vote - J. Luth


actually mem it is in the rules... you need to go back and read them again...

Quote:
5. There is NO recycling allowed. Please use original rhymes/verses.


and now i just realized that spul had this closed for some reason... mabye because it was a tko or what not but you broke the rules man so you just lost... sorry bruh

SnoCap wins by DQ

spul if you got a problem PM me and was can talk about it.

King Solo 09-25-10 10:03 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Fuck Yuu
actually mem it is in the rules... you need to go back and read them again...



and now i just realized that spul had this closed for some reason... mabye because it was a tko or what not but you broke the rules man so you just lost... sorry bruh

SnoCap wins by DQ

spul if you got a problem PM me and was can talk about it.




Yes, while it states in the general rules for text battling, those rules are not concrete. Hardly anybody (most likely nobody) even bothers to check those rules and thus this site has always operated by battlers stating specific rules when they set up a battle.

The NO RECYCLING rule was not stated in the set up. There is actually posts on the first page stating it wasn't in the rules and SnoCap was fine with that and allowed the battle to continue even though he was given the opportunity to try and get a DQ win.

Furthermore, I contacted both battlers when I originally closed this and both were pretty assured in the fact that the NO RECYCLING rule was not enforced and therefore J.Luth's use of recycled lines would not result in a DQ.

J.Luth wins via TKO

fuck yuu 09-26-10 01:02 AM

my bad... should let me know next time so i dont come on and look like an idiot lol :thumbup:


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