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uh here we go now (Yea).

i like it when gurls lean over here and dance/
it makes me feel like pullin down my pance/.
i hope ya feelin me cuz i think im gonna get my chance/.
i hope ya likin me cuz i think im ready/
its my first time so i hope yer nice and steady/

uh part 2 here we go now.

im tryin to send a message to you/
i hope ya gettin it, cuz you aint no foo/.
i realy do like it when you shake yer ass/
i hope you dont reply and say you pass/.
if you do say that then ill be shut down/
and ill be home with a frown/

lil 2 simple n short but good drop...work on structure,wordplay n vocab holla back

yeah but wut would i kno i got the same prob

yo dawg nice drop u shud make it longa man make it a real song dawg good topic but work on vocab like Killa sed , uh god drop doe dawg keep postin n ill holla

ya plan on that i recorded it man but it needs to be longer

if you have heard lean back by fat joe thats the beat im using for it

thanks yall im starting to fegure out how to spit good rhymes my home boy on msn told me that i keep changing the story and that and i am starting to rap with a good style now i think ill have some good audio songs when i fiegure out how to get them on the soundclickt thingy