T-Hook vs -UNF-
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-28-05 at 02:11 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

T-Hook has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-05 01:42 PM.

Yo
This A rematch cos i wasnt happy with the last result,
i Dont Like losing to a dirty colt,
after im thru with you police will hire sherlock holmes,
this is rapverse so y the fuck u writin poems,
i spit like fire u sing row row ur boat,
i know u use ur frends 2 help u win vote,
U No Wot Fuck This Website Its Not Ordinary,
Eminem Didnt win the rap olympics cos he had gr8 vocabulary,
get your ryhming dictionary out u gonna need it for this,
and while your there dont 4get ur thesaurus,
the rap game has changed since u started,
me against you bitch r u retarted,
u dont hear 50 speaking like shakespeare,
and em uses slang from the northern hemisphere,
u sed i need to elevate, u talking shit!
keep practising homie cos u spit like a bitch,
you got lucky once so keep the moment,
cos after this im gonna own it,
this a freestyle, its what im good for,
like sayin ur pops is gay an ur mums a whore,
say u will murk me one more time,
then spend a week figuring out a new line,
i dont rap from my soul or heart,
this is anger coming into part,
aww now who needs 2 fucking elevate,
im a pimp but i cant afford an escolade,
say upping 1 more time i dare ya,
cos ill hide with my 9, wait then scare ya,
who cares if i lose as long as i get my message thru,
cus i got a sliencer that'll make fuckers say bless you,
or i could drop by with an uzi,
kill u, an ur lawyer so can't sue me,
hey unf how does it feel to lose to a newbie
Bitch!!

-UNF- has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-28-05 01:51 PM.

ummm...wuddup herb????

Listen, This Guys A Wreck, His Flow Stinks But I Wont WHINE OR SNITCH
But For Real, I Cant Front, Sit Next To, Or Stand BEHIND THIS BITCH
Dude Aint Hardcore, And We’ve Gotta Real BITCH ON OUR HANDS
Tryin To Step Up To Devinchi, Please Homie, Keep Ya DICK IN YA PANTS
It's Obvious That Your Fallin' Off, And You Be KNOWIN IT HOE
Cuz Ur Flows Turning To Shit & Your Punches 'GO WITH THE FLOW'
I Promise, I Swear It, I'll Show What DAMAGIN LINES DO
If There's A "Shadow Of Doubt", It's Prolly STANDIN BEHIND YOU
Hook Sucks Dick, A Fag That's Tired, And He's An AWFUL DISGRACE
So I Give 'Him A Towel, Just To Take A Load Off OF HIS FACE

urmm.....WTF????

say upping 1 more time i dare ya,
cos ill hide with my 9, wait then scare ya,

ha ha bitch upping.................

Voted For: -UNF-

T-Hook: aight, you had a lot more lines than -UNF- which can be an advantage as well as a disadvantage. And I feel it didn't do you any good. I expect every line to be straight fire and maybe some built-ups here and there. But your verse was just filled with meaningless shit, some played punches and hardly any creativity. You didn't bring him down the way you should've in my opinion, I was expecting more hardhitting shit you know. Flow was nice cause the lines were rather short, vocab might be upped.

-UNF-: i've seen far better from you without a doubt, I felt this was below your usual level but nonetheless sufficient to defeat T-Hook. You came with decent creativity, not too many personal touches though. Wordplay was there, punches were aight but might've been better. Flow was good, vocab was excellent.

Vote goes to -UNF-

umm i didnt try cause he is weak so meh.......but yall know wot im like...im fire:thumbup: check the rec anyways upping.......................

ay UNF dont go to sleep 2nite im gonna hold my word
by the way woz dat ur brothers frend dat voted per chance
my shit is hot off da block ok 2pac never spoke about standing behind ppl all da time

im so fuckin scared...your shits weak elevate...night night!!!

Voted For: -UNF-

UNF:

Listen, This Guys A Wreck, His Flow Stinks But I Wont WHINE OR SNITCH
But For Real, I Cant Front, Sit Next To, Or Stand BEHIND THIS BITCH
^^^
Lol this was set up real good, likin this...lmao...good line

Dude Aint Hardcore, And We’ve Gotta Real BITCH ON OUR HANDS
Tryin To Step Up To Devinchi, Please Homie, Keep Ya DICK IN YA PANTS
^^^
Lol ok line too...u on that devenchi shit lmao..

It's Obvious That Your Fallin' Off, And You Be KNOWIN IT HOE
Cuz Ur Flows Turning To Shit & Your Punches 'GO WITH THE FLOW'
^^^^^^^^
HAHAHAHA this was the best line no doubt, sick punch, and good hard hittin

I Promise, I Swear It, I'll Show What DAMAGIN LINES DO
If There's A "Shadow Of Doubt", It's Prolly STANDIN BEHIND YOU
^^^
Hahaha second best line, again good punch, this is hittin hard, best ive seen from ya

Hook Sucks Dick, A Fag That's Tired, And He's An AWFUL DISGRACE
So I Give 'Him A Towel, Just To Take A Load Off OF HIS FACE
^^^^^
HAHAHAHAHA lmao again really good....yo man

flow was on point, sturcture on point, punches on point, hit hard..


HOOK...no dont ever do thta again work on structure and flow...sylabalise each line, work on it...and come back.....

UNF GOT THIS

sorry my dick is too big it falls out atleast i hav 1

lol your wack just admit it an i aint battlin u anymore ive proved ma point bye fucker

This was feedback posted for -UNF-
 

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This was feedback posted for -UNF-
 

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