soulstar vs. enygma
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

Just checkin in early so I don't forget..................Chiggity Check.

Just a quick 11 bars since this cat's gonna no show anyway...

Soulstar's just like an Old Car, not known to Go Far//
Just a Cracka tryin to get Blacka, swearin that his Soul's Tar//
I'll bust his Nose Open, tried to kick my ass but left Both Of His Toes Broken//
This kid'll be Left Dead wit his Chest Wet and Most Of His Clothes Soakin//
You Suck And Ya Verse Blows, you'd be Fucked From The Worst Flows//
Leave his Words Ghost and when he no shows he'll be Stuck On His First Post //
Even though I Smoke All These Herbs, I'll never Choke On These Words//
This Dope's Rappin wit No Action, he's gotta Hope On These Verbs//
Gotta Laugh, It's A Done Mission, this Bastard Just Doesn't Listen//
Shit Look, I got this Dick Shook like After I'm Done Pissin//
I spit Deadly Venom while this cat's still just Getting Settled//
I spit Platinum and gold bars, this Cat Thought it was Heavy Metal//
You wouldn't be Cummin wit Jack Son even if you Been Through Micheal//
This cat only flows once a month, I'm callin him Menstrual Cycle//
I’ve Had Enough, he ain’t even showin, I’m callin this Faggot’s Bluff//
Hand this New Kid On Da Block a noose and he still wouldn’t be Hangin Tough//
Ya Out Confessin and Countin Blessins, bitchass go Cryin To Pastor//
Musta spit butt remover to the bitch wit this Rhyme And Disassed Her//
Rhymin? Ya Stuck Failure, ya ship has sailed and you ain’t Ridin Amongst Sailors//
Not to mention I’ve seen harder Sole Stars on the Side Of Some Chuck Taylors//
I Tossed Ten Fellas from your crew then Paused To Tell Yas//
That your city suits you very well, this cat's from Lost And Jealous//

Click on the links in the battle if you didn't get the punch............

Nigga u think u slick but I don't know how u got all the bullshit out with all that dick in your mouth/hope ya kiss your family good bye cuz when I through wit ya ain’t no way ya gonna make it alive/u as a stupid ass probably laughin' like tickle- me-elmo cuz micheal jackson got his dick in ya asshole/bitch I'm malevolent sent ya to a early casket/u thought I wasn't gon show up but unlike ya daddy bitch I ain't no punk/now u paraniod in need of health clinic/I'm a health hazard leave ya done wit at the end ya wont matter/then 28 dayz later like jeffery have ya head in my refrigerator/Ya Rhymes are fake tryin' to be hard core when ya more fruiter than a fruit cake/bitch get outta the game and go sit on the bleachers/I'm the MC ya tha wannabe so go play wit ya self and fuck off of me

Time for some votes.................Hit this battle up and may the best verse win

breakdown for enygma:

flow:could always tighten this up but this was good 7/10

volcab:solid use nothing too amzing but 7/10

punches:nice punches real personal like the using links to his posts to put him down my fav,"Soulstar's just like an Old Car, not known to Go Far//" i don't it was kinda funny good job 8/10

overall:22/30

breakdown for soulstar:

flow:some of the rhyming was alittle touchy but you had a couple of alright multis 6/10

volcab:overall nothing special 5/10

punches:good job for what you had my fav was,"u as a stupid ass probably laughin' like tickle- me-elmo cuz micheal jackson got his dick in ya asshole" pretty harsh 7/10

overall:18/30

vote--enygma just stronger punches and flow that's what it boils down too

Enygma - punchlines 8/10
vocab 7/10
word usage 9/10
flow 8/10
total = 32
Enygma's flow was the peak of his rap. He murdered with word usage and lines were tight

SoulStar - punchlines 5/10
vocab 6/10
word usage 7/10
flow 7/10
total = 25

SoulStar lost this cause he didn't have any punchlines that gave it the "wow" in his flow. His Flow was too easy and seemed like he didn't try.

vote=Enygma

Aight Check Dis...

Easy Win For Enygma...Obviously Skill Overall In All Fields

Punches: E
Metaphors: E
Mulits: E
Word Usuage: E
Flow: E
Structure: E

Vote-Enygma

~R~

My vote: Enygma
Flow:8/10
Punches: 7/10
Vocab: 7/10
Total: 22/30
Soulstar:
Flow: 7/10
Punches: 5/10
Vocab: 5/10
Total: 17/30

my vote goes to enygma he got this with flow structre punches voab just ripped this guy the other guys verse wasnt that great so that is why i voted for Enygma

I count that as 5-0 so far........ Thanks for the input........

uppin for votes

I dont even know how to explain my vote on this one. Enygma was just superior on every part of the battle

enygma wins 5-0