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LethalNJection vs. JaeBurnz354
Ok lets make it 6 lines
No recycaling No crew votes No biting. You up first. |
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ok checkin in and u up 1st dog....... good luck word up
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Jae throw ya "tonsils on the court" cuz ya lyricz "choke on ballz"...
jae couldnt "hold my flow" if ya stood between me and the stall,... i swing "punches" leave jae with a "neck brace".... like "skeletons" doin "push-ups" he just a "dead weight".... |
Wtf you said 4 line in the call out
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Real Verse
When you "release some anger", you line jae asshole with grease...
Mastermind underneith, and says "Im loving this breeze!... Jae throw ya "tonsils on the court" cuz ya lyricz "choke on ballz"... Jae couldnt "hold my flow" if ya stood between me and the stall,... i swing "punches" leave jae with a "neck brace".... like "skeletons" doin "push-ups" he just a "dead weight".... |
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Nigga you better leave this game alone. For I make you hang up ya mic like a telephone. Jae Burnz be on the move, so u can say im roamin like a cellular fone. Fuck if u not in view, ill hit u from long distance like a tellular fone. You homo, Put this needle in ya but, and get the lethalNJection. Post up and i block, so u can call it a freethrow rejection. Votes start |
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LethalNJection
When you "release some anger", you line jae asshole with grease... Mastermind underneith, and says "Im loving this breeze!... good wordplay...punch connected pretty nicely... - 6.5/10 Jae throw ya "tonsils on the court" cuz ya lyricz "choke on ballz"... Jae couldnt "hold my flow" if ya stood between me and the stall,... once again nice wordplay...punch was ok... - 5.5/10 i swing "punches" leave jae with a "neck brace".... like "skeletons" doin "push-ups" he just a "dead weight".... ha ha...good wordplay again...punch connected nicely...best bar in this battle... - 8/10 Overall - 20/30 JaeBurnz354 Nigga you better leave this game alone. For I make you hang up ya mic like a telephone. first line could have been a good set up...wordplay was simple as hell...punch didnt connect at all... - 3/10 Jae Burnz be on the move, so u can say im roamin like a cellular fone. Fuck if u not in view, ill hit u from long distance like a tellular fone. good wordplay in the first line...but u fucked it up when u rhymed fone with fone...i know cellular and tellular rhyme, but plenty of words rhyme with fone...punch didnt connect very much... - 4/10 You homo, Put this needle in ya but, and get the lethalNJection. Post up and i block, so u can call it a freethrow rejection. decent personal...good wordplay...punch connected ok... - 4/10 Overall - 11/30 my vote is gonna go to LethalNJection for comin with more connecting punches...and thats word... VOTE - LETHALNJECTION PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx... |
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yo burnz hit this battle up please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133718
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Yo I dont have enough posts to vote so I guess this dont count but I'd say LethalNJection got it...I like his punches WAY better
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Opener - N/A
Closer - N/A Structure - Lethal Flow - Lethal Punches - Lethal Metas - Lethal Personals - N/A OVERALL - LethalNJection |
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LethalNJection - Good punches and wordplay......flow was the only let-down 7/10
JaeBurnz - It was weaker than LethalNJection's although the punches were good 6/10 VOTE - LethalNJection please vote on these Me vs RV Me vs Illiance Me vs BostonLyricist |
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