Notorious Verses vs warrior
 

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Check in by: 10-23-04 at 10:40 PM

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Notorious Verses has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 10:29 PM.

warrior has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 10:33 PM.

let me kick some knowledge

notorious verses' verse is notorious heres warriors explaination/
the definition of notorious means to have a bad reputation/(his verse is known to be bad)

ima fuck up "verses" so bad u gon have to edit~ya~self/
cause we all know ya wack man u even said~it~ya~self/


this bitches chances of "beatin me" is worst~then~an~armless~chick/
its like i tatooed my rhymes to my penis the way "verses"~be~on~my~dick/

im leavin verse~lost ya words~soft talkin shit will get this herb~tossed/
he found out "greatness cant be taught".....right after he got his third~loss/

my losses will neva go~to~three but ull get a vote hopefully/
id tell u to vote wit an alias but then again ull prolly vote~for~me/

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Yo Despite Da Hype I Gotta Short Fuse Like Black Jews
Anotha Check Of My List Of Emcees Like NIKE Shoes
Dawg Ur Flo Gets Credits Like Visa Cards Dats Stepped On
I Would Battle Cuz Even My Elevated Status Couldnt Stop Dis Match From Gettin Slept On
I Give Pleasure To Voters Cuz Dawg I Lyrically Grope
U Need To Note, Dat Lyricist Focus Like Bloods On Da East Coast
Dawg Da Flow Is Rediculous, Yes Understand Dat U AInt Da Sickest
Dis Win Im Obtainin Is A Good Addition Like Da Rap Olympics
Dawg I Slaughter Emcees, I Don Mean To Mingle
Dawg Worst Of All U Got Ur Name Of Lloyd Banks Single(Warrior)

anyway good drop dawg, good battle overall, uppin fo votes

Voted For: warrior


N.V.
yo u had some nice wordplay
but u had alot of self glory
your flow was good except for one area where it
got streched,jus next time don't use so much self glory and shit,I was saddened at this

Warrior
was wack and basic but punches when battles
your vocab and rhyme scheme was terrible,
no hate,but you only win this due to more
punches
then self glory


~most explained vote EVA~

peace niggas

BLA!

uppin............................................. ..

Voted For: Notorious Verses

my vote goes to --notorious
He jus had a better verse, even though both were pretty good. I also like notorious's structure better, it made it easyer to read. Warrior word play was really good but i still have to give him a 8.8/10 and notorious a 9/10!

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Voted For: warrior

whoaaaaa....can u say LANDSLIDE ?????...heres da breakdown

punches - EASILY...warrior...punches were definately harder hittin n more direct...notorious had more of an open mic verse cuz he really wasnt tryin to get at Warrior 2 hard....warrior was eatin !!...simple n plain

personals - easily...warrior...nigga got him uglyyyy wen he sed U EVEN SAID IT YOURSELF...hahah dat shyt had me dyin !!!!...notorious wasnt really gettin at him as hard

meta4s - warrior...simply becuz he was more consistent wit his metas...he tied the metas into a punch which made em even better...notorious wasnt really competin wit that...like i sed b4...notorious had more of an open mic verse...wasnt really tryin to get at warrior

wordplay - definately warrior...edit-ya-self N said-it-ya-self...killin em...dat shyt wasnt hard but it was fuckin HALARIOUS...dat takes the cake in this catagory

enjoyment - must i go on...warrior...smashed em...punches were harder...had some good metas...wordplay was halarious...did his thing... CHEYA

Vote - Warrior


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This was feedback posted for Notorious Verses
 

Sorry to say but Warrior beat u.... u say Dawg to much mayun

uppin this..........................................

Voted For: Notorious Verses

weak battle all around
warrior had 6 lines wich were whack
and i cant even read the other dudes name is but he came a lil bit harder with a few meats and aight flow n rhyming but it was a still weak battle but keep tryin

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