baller_84106 Vs. Nolost4rhymes
 

rules:

15 minute timelimit after check in
no d/r
no crew votes
3-0 ko

u spit first

check in to this one aight..hurry up

Dawg...I have to go now man..here...I spit first

put ya hands up people

i'ma spit so fast and furious/
fifteen minutes? are u serious/
u must be like eddy murphy delirious/
cuz i'll spit so quickly ya gonna blink and miss it/
so logout now just leave this battle, quit it/
shit fuck it, i'ma tear ya from limb to limb/
get me another well deserved win/
u lost for rhymes, cuz ya name be norhymes/
u think ya a winna, well, sometimes/
but not now, noway, utah vs. cali/
pumpin up this crowd like its a pep rally/
hop in the denali and speed on over/
listen....i'm ringin ya doorbell, so get on over/
ANSWER THE DOOR.....na ya scared, hidin in ya ma bed/
ya a bitch out the back door ya sped and fled/
runnin so fast u could be the next michael johnson/
but ya just a baby wearin diapers by johnson and johnson/
fifteen minutes over, so i'ma hand it over/
ya think ya can win, na dog ya verbally lower/
shit i'll give ya 1 hour/

(hey this is what i put in my fifteen minutes)

(hey here it is again cuz the other one doesn't have the last lines)
put ya hands up people

i'ma spit so fast and furious/
fifteen minutes? are u serious/
u must be like eddy murphy delirious/
cuz i'll spit so quickly ya gonna blink and miss it/
so logout now just leave this battle, quit it/
shit fuck it, i'ma tear ya from limb to limb/
get me another well deserved win/
u lost for rhymes, cuz ya name be norhymes/
u think ya a winna, well, sometimes/
but not now, noway, utah vs. cali/
pumpin up this crowd like its a pep rally/
hop in the denali and speed on over/
listen....i'm ringin ya doorbell, so get on over/
ANSWER THE DOOR.....na ya scared, hidin in ya ma bed/
ya a bitch out the back door ya sped and fled/
runnin so fast u could be the next michael johnson/
but ya just a baby wearin diapers by johnson and johnson/
fifteen minutes over, so i'ma hand it over/
ya think ya can win, na dog ya verbally lower/
shit i'll give ya 1 hour/
i'll go play ball, take a shower/
be back check if ya posted/
check if ya got roasted/

Here's my spit!!!

Batllin' me is lyrical suicide, change ya name to self destructed//
Look at ya lines, its a lyrcial mess constructed//
Comin at me comes with dangerous reprecussions//
Beware, my punches land hard and make you retire from concussions//
Your verse wouldnt be dope even if a coke head sniffed all 14 lines//
My message is wise youre outta place tryna battle me like intestines in thighs//
I blaze complete any rapper from A-Zinc cause I spit a Spectrum of lines//
Even if you had a key for your ass you still couldnt have shit on lock//
My lyrics send you into a trance but forget Hypnotic, your ass is just hip-not//
I play ya rib cage like a harp cut off ya balls and force you to sing high notes of opera parts//
Fill you with lead and stain ya frame with your blood and call it abstract art//
Dawg, i won this shyt wit only 12 lines//
just stop and quit this shyt cuz the battle belts mine

i could see I won this shyt!!!!!

fuck this dudes a retard settin up a non battle thread and then tryin to holla at me to change threads when theres a time limit, shit! post ya votes people

fuck you bitch

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

DAMN, vocab was great by nolost
clean ass opener:
Batllin' me is lyrical suicide, change ya name to self destructed//
Look at ya lines, its a lyrcial mess constructed//
damn:
I play ya rib cage like a harp cut off ya balls and force you to sing high notes of opera parts//
Fill you with lead and stain ya frame with your blood and call it abstract art//

baller, ya did good, fix ya structure, and nolost's struc was a lil sloppy

but V/NoLost

Aight, its like this. Both of you guys need to check your structure and flow. baller, some of your lines are short enough that you might as well just combine two or three of them into one, and that way you can also have more coherent punches. those 3 word ones don't quite do it. its like you got good ideas for them (like him takings an hour to post a verse), but you can't get in paper. elevate a bit.

norhymes, your structure also a bit fucked. the lines are stretched out in some places, and too different from one to the next, especially when you got no multis. good rhyme though, with mutlisyllabic words, pretty creative with your punches. jsut work on your structure and flow.

v/no rhymes.

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a gud battle
thats more like it NoLost, thats tha sshit i know u can rip

baller u had some great flow in ure rip but ure shit was mainly all basic that i've heard before, ure punches were average, u need to use a bit more word play in there.

NoLost a great rip as usual
u came out strong with a sick opener and u threw in some gud originality in there with some solid punches to get u my vote.

My vote goes to NoLost

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bklah blah blah.....nolost took this easily baller was garbage nolost didnt even have to spit the first bar and i already knew he won...gave punches structure flow..everything to nolost...good battle though

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no lost i ain't kno it wuz like that pimpin..u merked ole boy cuz that wuz sicccccc
better vocab and wordplay but yes u need better structure
baller elevate bro ya stuff too basic......and bout ya structure i feel ya but u can't do that here..u gotta combine cuz i do liek that too..i wud spit those lines real fast if it wuz audio but u gotta make it better to read ya feel..but i feel ya cuz i used to do it

VOTE-NO LOST