shadow vs State Capitol (Voting Closed!)
 

checkin in fam.........this is gonna be good

ohha yea... checkin in... this is gonna b tight

shadow........want to drop now........i mean we both online and its only 2 lines......

ill drop when you drop.........................

wtf mayn thaz cheap......u dun read my punchline, had more time to drop then me...you said you was finna drop at the same time as me...cheap ass....oh well...uppin for your verse............

state capitol aka killa bwoy

admit it killawbwoy
when we were in lyrical destruction u said it ur self damn discharge u really are that sick.....
get off my dick,
give this starvin ethiopian some spicy food cuz thats his only chance of droppin hott shit....

Your wack at text, heres facts ,
.......only time your skilled with your fingers is when your moms horny..
Shadows Lines are like His Girlfriend last night,
.................................................. .Your "wore-out" Shit Bores-Me..

shadow :

admit it killawbwoy
when we were in lyrical destruction u said it ur self damn discharge u really are that sick.....
get off my dick,
give this starvin ethiopian some spicy food cuz thats his only chance of droppin hott shit....

^^ok i got a caouple problems with this bar...i really cannot stand the structure its really annoying nd unnecessary...newyas your bar was too long should have made it shorter...1st line was more of a self glorification than a punch or a set up to a punch and i figured your 2nd line would have something to do with the first but it really didnt it was a decent punch and a good personal tho not too good

overall : 4/10

state capitol :

Your wack at text, heres facts ,
.......only time your skilled with your fingers is when your moms horny..
Shadows Lines are like His Girlfriend last night,
.................................................. .Your "wore-out" Shit Bores-Me..

^^same with your structure its really annoying when the lines are long if they were shorter the structure wouldnt have really mattered but when they are that long its gay..decent punch i think u had a better personal than shadow...mediocre punchline

overall : 5/10

state u barely won this your punch was weak but shadows was weaker

vote : state

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yeah i think state got this.. it was close tho both of u really didnt come to good but yeah state good job u got my vote..

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dis was an iight battle..both structures were kinda fucked up but its all about the punch, and state's punch hit harder and had a good personal
shadow ur punch was iight but it wasnt hard enough to beat state, good personal about him bein killah bwoy but state had a harder punch.. no hate

hmm yes..

shadow:that structure was a lil annoying.. first line was iight.. wasent really a punch.. and the punch that you did have was about his pic and him being a starving etheopian lol... was an ok punch.. wasent really feeling it..

state:iv seen oyu come alot harder.. wasent really to hyped about this bar either.. you hit harder because you actually had more than on punch in there.. both lines had a ppunch in it.. that extra punch is theonly thing that swayed my vote.. i know we are in the same crew, it is not a dickride vote at all.. because id have ot admit, states structure is the only thing that saved him lol..Id say an average punch


Vote goes to state

shadow - ehh that was blah....if u worded shit better it wouldnt have been so stretched...u tried TOO hard....just let it flow and do ya thang....punch concept was good but really u need to word it right to hit hard...u tried too hard....i could tell...i give it a 3.7/10....

state capitol - eh this wasnt that great either...def a lil better of a flow....but still stretched....meta was decent....the personal (link) really didnt have a good effect....woulda been better if u didnt use it....close battle bu had the better flow and wording which made ur punch a lil better....give it a 4.1./10....

Vote - State Capitol

admit it killawbwoy
when we were in lyrical destruction u said it ur self damn discharge u really are that sick.....
get off my dick,
give this starvin ethiopian some spicy food cuz thats his only chance of droppin hott shit....

alright an ok punch.. shadow i definitely think can do better.. this had a good idea just too stretched.. soo im gonna give this a 4/10

Your wack at text, heres facts ,
.......only time your skilled with your fingers is when your moms horny..
Shadows Lines are like His Girlfriend last night,
.................................................. .Your "wore-out" Shit Bores-Me..

a little better... lines arent as stretched as shadows.. good thought for the punch i liked this one a little better than shadows i give it a 6/10

soo pretty even battle.. not very good punches from either but state takes it due too better structure..

Ok battle.....Breakdown

Shadow....ok structure was horrible, I hated it, flow was off, setup line was ok, punch was wack an seriuosly played, you needed a good meta in there or something but you didn't so I'm a say you really disappointed me with that one cuz I know you do better than that man, I'll give ya 4/10


State....not much better structure was just as bad, flow was off too, coulda used a meta but you didn't, you used some wack wordplay but it was wordplay nonetheless, setup was ok punch was kinda played but it was a little personal so that only thing u got this battle for, is that u got personal, I'll give ya 5/10

Vote: State