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9th Degree vs Verbal Abuse
Battle Rules:
8-16 Lines No Crew, Hate, or D/r Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-03-04 at 05:57 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Verbal Abuse has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-03-04 12:00 AM.
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droppin an open call wen im online, wat were ya thinking about? wat a waste, my limits should have me drop God's link and im out. i check in, and have ya second guessin. im gonna jerk ya lisp. auto declined my battle, cause his wisdom knew i wasnt worth the risk. i planned this lesson, puts herb n newb together how ya biting the keys. ill just move on to my next problem, cause ya just a dividend of 90 degrees. so your the kid p-dizzle, ya mugshot stated no girl would date you. some 50 verses created mayhem, Ha...and 10 lines was all it took to brake you. im still gonna win, no matter how hard ya hopin i key wack. this wasnt even my verse, its just ya open mic feedback. a 10 minute sitter. |
9th Degree has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-03-04 10:28 AM.
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You called me out first, actin' like a herb and you'll lose
You ain't nuthin' but talk, no wonder you're Verbal Abuse I ain't wanna have to murder you boo, but I'll do more 'Cuz you only got ill from being the high school whore You dope? Look like a drug addict, this hype is smoked VirginiA's pushin' sweet-n-low 'cuz she though it was diet coke You know all about bein' real, I don't have to teach ya 'Cuz you incorporated your name with how your boyfriend treats ya This battle's typical, you're gettin' screwed, peep how I work the hole But you're bout to son sumthin' too...'cuz I stole your fuckin' birth control (For those of you who still don't know, VA's a femcee...) |
Voted For: 9th Degree
Wow, I've seen much better from Verbal Abuse. Verbal: Your punches weren't that creative, just basic stuff. No strong personals or lines that got an "ohhhh" reaction. Just a so-so verse. 9th:The closer really decided this for me. I think you could have had better femcee oriented punches, but the ones you had were nice. I liked the multis and the wordplay Return the Love Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Aight, thanks, uppin' this shit for mroe votes....
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Voted For: 9th Degree
mayn you destroyed in this battle mayn, nice punches all over hte place, great job....... verbal, you didnt come hard enough, but degree mayn you came hard, used everyhting taht you ahd nice job.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Ok, yo, I'm uppin' this fuckin' shit for some votes
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Voted For: 9th Degree
ok in my opinion Punches/Personalz-9th Degree you threw some good ones in there...as well as you VA....Nice disses on each other and not shit talking too much...:-D Multies-Not any in my looking...more and this battle def. woulda been a better one...but overall ya could used more so n/a for this one Vocab-Overall it looks like 9th Degree had more vocab that was more complex so he gets this one right here..Verbal About And Out?? come on whats that.....(first two lines) you should know thats weak vocab....well upp on that Overall-9th Degree got this one in my opinon came a lil bit harda in the main areas such as Vocab,Personals,Enjoyment so 9th gets my vote |
This was feedback posted for Verbal Abuse
ok 9th good drop it had good punches ok flow nice structure and a good flow a 7/10
but..... verbal one line was streched the rest were perfect flow and vocab excellent punches are fucking dope opener is fucking madd creative dope all the punches were hard hitters 10 lines to break you dope ender was fire also for real you are the best femcee i ever read a verse from ever including those signed a 9.5/10 only the streched line stopped you from a 10/10 |
Ok yeah, there's a couple votes that may be dq'd for being inadequate, but I'm uppin'...
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse
Verbal Abuse won this battle because the punches were harder and more creative than 9th degree. Verbal's spit just flowed alot better and the punches hit harder. 9th's punches were pretty played, the structure was ight tho but the flow really lacked creativity just work on that. |
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Voted For: 9th Degree
opener - 9th, nice play off the name.. Wordplay - tie, nice rhymes scheme from both.. flow - flow was also a tie, the transition from bars were smooth on both ends. struture - verbal abuse had more stretched lines than 9th degree.. so 9th gets that.. closer - 9th degree, clever ending.. all in all, kid p came with better punches and better struture.. verbal abuse had a very nice flow too, just work on the punches a little.. return favor witta honest vote in my battle right here, wun.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=152757 |
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