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Operation Bloodymore & A Million Eyes
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a nigga need feedback
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ima leave feed on ya tracks ckuz im done beefin wit u son..lo...first...nigga get a new mic makes u sound like a lil ass boy...flow is on point tho..damn that old ass belly dances line :nono:...its all good tho...emotion is way betta then it used to be tho..lyrics is straight on the multi tip but..i dunno u aint a G...=\...it was straigt for u to do it and everything but on some real shit man i got equiptment for days 40 dollas a track man..lol...i dunno nobody that says bloodymore tho...bodymore...
million eyes...this shit is like a commercial type of feel...gun shots is a no..they not "full" enough...flow all that other shit was straight nuthin really wrong wit the track..just a lil to much gun play for me now or sumthin..its ok tho.. |
thanks for that shit.. I dont kno really wtf Im doin over here with this recordin and mixin i just try lol thanks tho
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..first mc...vocals are a tad to high just a little though...your flow is real solid though man...lyrics are dope....delivery is nice...and emotion is dope...i'm not feeling the part where the gun shots comes in...u should of had a chorus...that would of been dope.but overall this is a dope track 7.5/10
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rtf... beat def cool... some arabic shyt.. u come in nyce, maybe turn ya vocals up.. you got a good voice no doubt nyce presence.. danm some good words n vocab... im lovin this beat man, should send it to me... AIM: fo twenty
samples on the hook are sexy, the production is amazing on this joint, now again u come in, dunno if its cuz ur vocals are low but emotion is just a tiiiiiiny bit lackin to me... lol ive used a tetris line like that b4.. bring ya block down like tetris <that was mine... if i laced it i woulda at least said sumn over the hook, like "yea, million eyes baby!" lol... damn 3rd verse i like the best cuz u really killin tha multis with complex lyrics im feelin that.. yea all in all this was nyce, seems like with more experience u can become quite good.. |
nice job on this track man, i think the quality is good, the flow was on point, the lyrics was good, reppin MD here to, nice job man....i liked this and i dont got any advice....
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uppin............
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can i get some feedback
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