The Birth Of My Son-Today (READ)
June 12th the time 08:37/
The day my sons prescence graced us from heaven/ For 9 months u were undercover even 4 days late/ U gave mom 3 days of pain...but still we couldnt wait/ U came out holdin the chord like u were in despair/ Imagine our relieve when we heard ur 1st gasp of air/ And u cried until mommy got the chance to hold ya/ Eyes wide shut suckin ur thumb thinkin... ...how much these people love ya/ And for u being here i thank ya coz i finally know the way/ I'm gonn do erything in my power... ...to make sure u, me and mom never stray/ Or get taken away or you taken from us/ Coz we'd never hurt sum1 so little... ...coz its love we got not financial lust/ U a month old today and the changes u gone through are drastic/ No cone head smile on ur face not from jus wind... ...but still relaxed when u sleep u go like elastic/ U even makin noises like a lil version of a laugh/ U know me & u gonn get on lil pup we gonn have a blast/ I cant wait for the important days of ur life/ 1st words, 1st step, 1st day at school... ...and the day u marry ur wife/ It's his 1st month today and Ethan i'm proud of you dawg this is Mad Dog rappin a tribute to his Mad Pup...Destined 2 Rhyme in this reppin in RapBattles they got ur back to this goes out to Vicki too...u looked after him for 9 months safely i thank you i love you girl...happy times are ahead...im out. |
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yo man that was sum gud shyt ..
it really got me interested in the verse Congradulations on ur baby |
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yo mad that shit was good i wanna cry now an congrads on your kid man fa real pc
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Mad pup you know that will be repin destined 2 rhyme soon
ha ha,.. Shit was tight mate hold it up, Can't wait for my wifey to give me somthing so special,,.. Life. |
this was dope mad-- alot of feelin in this, make a mufucker smile and shit.... stay up.... 1
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yo that was tyt man. make me think of babies and all haha but its tyt yo i was feelin it
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dis made me think bout havin a kid... then i remembered im only 15 n i got a whole life ahead of me
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this makes me want to have a kid.tight shit and goodluck with fatherhood
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ayo madd dog congrudulations on the baby. but night times ain't fun i warn u lol. my baby is wonder when he sleeping and i get to see my girls tits even more when shes feeding ha lol.
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Yo thanx for all this great feedback and sniper tell me about it my lil boy kept me up ALL night Saturday lol but thanx yall uppin
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aiyo man....nice job...dats all i gotsta say. U a strong man for lettin this shit off yo chest and all over da rap battles community. I respect ya for dat and I admire your heart fo your expression. congrats on da baby boy and keep dat shit up.
your verse was tight too man, dope ass hell...but most of all I'm congratulatin' u on your heart. -peace- |
nice drop dogg....hope your sons dong good nice touch of emotion in that verse
and imagery....i was feelin that 8.5/10 props |
Not bad a nice verse WHEN DID U BECOME A DAD...on another note watch yoself
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NiCe ShyT
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