KeMy$try 101
 

Hey yo I havent been here in a long ass time but I'm back and this is what I got to say so here we go

When I start my lyrical attack, it's all in fun
But if you test my patients long, ur life is done
Ive begun, in my sleep and progressed in dreams
And I tear apart your hopes wit a lyrical scream
Its the dream team, that searchin for me
And when I spit my flow, its straight make believe
U concieve thoughts, from an incredible thing
Then my words hit ur head with a prolific sting
Its a song sung, wit a masterful beat
Ur waitin for my song tah beam down on ur street
But it cant, until my deals signed
U'll know my names K, from my damagin mind
I'm a genius with rhymes, bring reprocutions with nines
Roll down the streets just increasin my fines
Now a split second, for u tah regain ur face
But if ur up against me, the best is second place
Because u can't replace, and my style ya chase
And if u gonna challenge me, its my time ya waste
So dont waste my time, cuz I'm ready tah shine
Spit like a watch, it's time afta time
Speak out with anger cuz im runnin with greed
Produce all my words wit an incredible speed
Let loose with my tongue like Roy Jones wit his hands
I just keep on swingin and I'm waitin tah land
Waitin tah span the globe with the illness I speak
The Kemy$t is comin, wit my flow thats unique
Wit all the talent they seek, they got no farther tah go
Multi-platinum deals from a Kemy$try show
People's jaws hit the floor when I'm vulgor and shout
More saliva spills my mouth then a water and spout
Leave um in doubt when vibrations escape my lips
People dont wanna die so they skip my rips
Cuz, I kill um in style and destroy um in flow
Gonna release this verse and just let this shit go


Thats it tell me what u think cuz this shit is madness.
Peace.

-KeMy$t

Im going to be as honest as possible for you...and I hope you will return the favor by hittin up one of the links in my signature...preferably a battle.....but any way this is my opinion.......this verse was just okay....It doesnt seem like you writting with the best of your ability...when i read this it felt like alot of it was just thrown together just to rhyme with the last line...like....."Spit like a watch, it's time afta time"...you gotta come iller than that dawg.....i think this was your best line though...."Produce all my words wit an incredible speed"...but forreal thats not saying a whole lot to be honest because i've heard lines like that before....but it seems like you have an above average vocabulary...so use that strength..but dont use it in a the wrong way "Then my words hit ur head with a prolific sting"....i'll peep your next open mic though......im out...