Alright
 

Tonight I lack the strength to even move,
When you walked, now watch me die

For I know this is harder for you,
For love has let you down

The road ahead is lined with broken dreams,
So walk, walk on by

And I failed to give you everything you need,
For the fears, behind your eyes

When I can't feel you,
I'm not alright, I'm not alright,
When I can't heal you,
I'm not alright, I'm not alright

Jesus as you throw me on the rocks,
For love I left your side

For I believed in love and beauty's whiles,
Where heaven shone from her eyes

Tell me that it wasn't all for naught,
It's such a waste now, It's such a waste now c'mon
I know your scared but baby don't you hide,
It's such a waste,
We'll stand alone now, we'll make it somehow

it seams like you had two different thoughts like your talkin abought god then a girl? I kinda lost wherer this was going but it wasnt bad

This was tight!

IDK wtf u thinkin here its cool but kinda goin 2 diff ways!

it was ok...
keep to one thing though

this was a nice read... emotional and it was down to the last drop of interesting though at times i felt like you were a bit jagged about this and didnt know what else to say but otherwise this was a nice drop man... keep writing pious