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Held Under
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The Torture we Endure Holding Down our Souls..
...Extract our Love for Life Leave our Heart's with Holes.. Every Free Thought Expressed toward an Escape.. Resist Loseing Faith and Surrender to the Fate.. Due Set Backs to the Never Ending Suffering.. All Forced to Think One Thought of Nothing.. Human Corpse's Used as Pawns Devil's Build Them.. Dictated to Stay in a Mental Range of Children.. Forced to Slave for Food Un Worthy of Eating.. Threats From Anger Get a Verbal Beating.. Crack's of Age Spark out more then Thunder.. When will we release From Being Held Under.. |
nice poem motif, you really have a great way with your words,articulate even, deep feeling in this too, i liked the first and last line, i like pieces like this that make me think.........
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Yo Motif, yo poem is tha shit. I like tha structure, an how you stayed on topic.
Cuz keep doin wha you do an very great thangs will happen. ~one~ |
thass wass tight..i liked it a lot
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