dreaded wicksta vs. 40caliburhitz
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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 line min. 16 line max. |
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There ain't shit "Dreadedwicksta" can say that'll make me Lose Cause your style is played out like Under-Roos Who's hot? Me or you? betta give me an answer You wouldn't be "Sick Wit It" if you drank AIDS and pissed CANCER Only four lines deep but you ready to QUIT Nigga soft, couldn't spit ~Hard~ if his ~Saliva~ was "Brick" I need some real competition, batlling weak cats is old You couldn't beat me if you were possessed by *Tupac's* soul In case you didn't get the MESSAGE,I'll just say it, You SUCK Rhymes wouldn't move me if you put 'em on a *U-haul* Truck You can save your wack repsonse 'Cause I know what's comin "You're gay, You're a fag" be a original or somethin Verse after verse i read the same OLD shit Obsesesed wit gay people just 'cause you LOVE dick Beat you twice in one verse? sounds hard but I did it Caught a lil cold now you think you sick? QUIT IT |
This's the end of this, Im serving ya, and round two's ya dinner plate``
Cuz the only time u are "beating the boards" Is when ya tryna skate`` I’ll ‘tear~your~flows’ like rip~tides, ya easy to brake, ya be~soft`` Ya cant ‘bear~raw~blows’ like microwaves not set on defrost`` Like school…I’ll cut ya up into fifths, leave ya bloody-like-periods`` Ya talent is no wher near-this, Ya just like William Hung, ugly-but-serious`` Hitz's a loner and he has "no-one" like a table of even numbers`` Cuz this dudes circle of friends is smaller than neck holes in babys jumpers`` Ya teacher could be stoned and u still can't get high marks`` Cuz Hitz's bout to get K.O'd n beheaded like foriegners in iraq`` Readin' my verse is the only time ya seenin' 40calibahitz`` I flip the scriptz, think ya gon win ? mind must be playin trickz on tripz`` Try az hard az you want ya cum off 0 to none like a bum'z bank account balance`` Hitz could process photoz of American Idol...still wont 'develop some talent'`` So are u a cry baby or a grown man, or maybe your both?`` I guess u are a little kid cuz ya rhymes need plenty of room 4 growth`` |
Ur actually not bad^. I thought u were a newb but if u make ur lines more consise and dispose of the~highlighting~rhymes and punches you will be pretty dope. These made me laugh from you...
Try az hard az you want ya cum off 0 to none like a bum'z bank account balance`` Hitz could process photoz of American Idol...still wont 'develop some talent'`` and Hitz's a loner and he has "no-one" like a table of even numbers`` Cuz this dudes circle of friends is smaller than neck holes in babys jumpers`` the rest was ok...nufin too hard, you got good word play and got good wit...nice verse bro. As for 40...ur verse ranged between basic.... Verse after verse i read the same OLD shit Obsesesed wit gay people just 'cause you LOVE dick Played Who's hot? Me or you? betta give me an answer You wouldn't be "Sick Wit It" if you drank AIDS and pissed CANCER Only four lines deep but you ready to QUIT Nigga soft, couldn't spit ~Hard~ if his ~Saliva~ was "Brick" or just wack... I need some real competition, batlling weak cats is old You couldn't beat me if you were possessed by *Tupac's* soul Nufin in ur verse I liked. So vote=Dreadedwicksta |
Verses Due By Thrusday....Not On Thursday Thats Why I Didn't Drop Hard Becuz He Went Over The DeadLine.......Read The Rules Homie
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40:
There ain't shit "Dreadedwicksta" can say that'll make me Lose Cause your style is played out like Under-Roos ^^decent personal good opener 7/10 Who's hot? Me or you? betta give me an answer You wouldn't be "Sick Wit It" if you drank AIDS and pissed CANCER ^^hot shyt but its stretched 7/10 Only four lines deep but you ready to QUIT Nigga soft, couldn't spit ~Hard~ if his ~Saliva~ was "Brick" ^^lol good bar nice punch 8/10 I need some real competition, batlling weak cats is old You couldn't beat me if you were possessed by *Tupac's* soul ^^kinda weak and basic 5/10 In case you didn't get the MESSAGE,I'll just say it, You SUCK Rhymes wouldn't move me if you put 'em on a *U-haul* Truck ^^seen stuff similar to this decent bar 7/10 You can save your wack repsonse 'Cause I know what's comin "You're gay, You're a fag" be a original or somethin ^^decent punch 6/10 Verse after verse i read the same OLD shit Obsesesed wit gay people just 'cause you LOVE dick ^^really basic 4/10 Beat you twice in one verse? sounds hard but I did it Caught a lil cold now you think you sick? QUIT IT ^^good close nice punch 7/10 overall : 51/80 dreaded: This's the end of this, Im serving ya, and round two's ya dinner plate`` Cuz the only time u are "beating the boards" Is when ya tryna skate`` ^^good meta dcent punch nice opener 6/10 I’ll ‘tear~your~flows’ like rip~tides, ya easy to brake, ya be~soft`` Ya cant ‘bear~raw~blows’ like microwaves not set on defrost`` ^^another good meta decent punch 6/10 Like school…I’ll cut ya up into fifths, leave ya bloody-like-periods`` Ya talent is no wher near-this, Ya just like William Hung, ugly-but-serious`` ^^hottest bar in the battle funny shyt good meta and punch 10/10 Hitz's a loner and he has "no-one" like a table of even numbers`` Cuz this dudes circle of friends is smaller than neck holes in babys jumpers`` ^^lol good shyt nice punch and meta 8/10 Ya teacher could be stoned and u still can't get high marks`` Cuz Hitz's bout to get K.O'd n beheaded like foriegners in iraq`` ^^no tolerance for words that dont rhyme marks...irag...2/10 Readin' my verse is the only time ya seenin' 40calibahitz`` I flip the scriptz, think ya gon win ? mind must be playin trickz on tripz`` ^^ticks on tripz? didnt make sense but good wordplay 5/10 Try az hard az you want ya cum off 0 to none like a bum'z bank account balance`` Hitz could process photoz of American Idol...still wont 'develop some talent'`` ^^good meta and punch 1st line stretched and weak 5/10 So are u a cry baby or a grown man, or maybe your both?`` I guess u are a little kid cuz ya rhymes need plenty of room 4 growth`` ^^good finisher more good meta's 7/10 overall : 49/80 vote:40caliberhitz dreaded you had no punches and some of your lines were stretched and the bar were it didnt rhyme made you lose points....shorten your bars expand your vocab and use harder punches...you had multies but not good ones...wordplay was ok caliber...you had a couple stretched lines too decent verse...hard punches pretty consistent...you also need to expand your vocab use more meta's better wordplay and use more multies... ~!1!~ |
fuck off, i posted that shit thursday
my time i dunno the time differences and shit......... upping and fow ya blind or just str8 dumb ? iraq mark, seems to rhyme to me fuck face upping1 |
dreaded...
you had nice flow and very average punches punches your flow and punches were practically the same but you had him in flow overall 6.8/10 40 cal. ur flow sucked and ur punches much like his were average... the thing is he had way better flow ur total 6.2/10 my vote goes to dreaded wiscta for flow alone..... |
Dreaded- your flow was alright...your punches werent great but
they were good...struc was aigh... wordplay was great overall 6.5/10 40- you flow again was alright..i think some of your punches hit harder than dreaded's....wordplay was good... like that aids and cancer line strc was aight....so overall: 7.0/10 vote:40 caliber hitz. |
Dreaded Wicksta- your verse was decent you had an okay flow to go wit it...your punches were good....you had some nice wordplay...but you did good in this battle...
40- your verse was decent also...you also had a decent flow to go along wit it. But your punches were good too. but i thought they hit harder then Dreaded's...So overall 40 gets this with harder hitin punches...Close battle tho v/40CaliburHitz |
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