Hey Ma Freeverse (will rtf)
 

www.myspace.com/paranoidxl
or
www.soundclick.com/paranoidcan

jea i did this remix what now, I did a faster flow than the dipset cats did. anyway drop some cool feedback and i'll hit you back. 1

links comin

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3169456
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3169453

this site sucks.

Yo I told you what i thought about this song. I think you improved you're flow and delivery a hell of alot since the last time I peeped you. You're fluctuating you're voice giving that emotion element. They're the good points, weak points flow sumtimes was off but for a freeverse jawn it doesn't matter and lyrics I told you I jus do not feel some choice of words you use. Hit me back

lol yea like this beat.. made me d/l the real one

some lines u rush ya words at the end... but u definitly gettin better wit every track u makin man which is the goal for every rapper.. flow needs some more work.. but u got ya self a decent track here man..

thanks uppin.

ok this beat is cool..hearing it.. it starts out good.. flow is reall good.. rite with the beat... lyrics is ahh... wasnt fellin the lyrics.. not fellin the voice either.. flow was good tho