Wrecker vs Dopeman
 

5 bars..no more no less..
don't no-show..
no gay votes.. (crew, d/r, etc.)
g'd luck

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Dopeman has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 04:20 PM.

i'ma give this dumb fuck the merkin of the highest order...
punches that'll 'floor-ya' an then ship you off to the mexican border...
15 essa's runnin a train, ya bitch ass is gettin cooked like crack cocaine..
ya rhymes are comin lighter than the fact under your name...
last time we battled you cried when i got a vote......
an if you dont believe me i'll go copy a qoute....
your the complete opposite to a microphone wrecker..
you stayin bangin on hard dick like a fuckin woodpecker..
so for now, i'm out an this battle is done.....
an your gettin about as far in life as big pun on the run!!..

okay, the woodpecker line...
ya know, woodpeckers peck an bang at WOOD, wood=hard dick, ya get it?

Wrecker has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-13-04 04:25 PM.

this kids not worth my time, too wack to try
& i'm like a roman clockmaker when I slash your eyes (I's)
i've already beat you once, your drop was beyond basic.
& revenge is sweet.....too bad you won't get to taste it.
when yu battle me, its like you play in the NFL, coz you're done (Dunn)
so I'll have this L stuck to your sole (soul) like chewed piece of gum.
Grasp the rifle, have this bastid filled with shells..
Named himself Dopeman..coz he's always receivin L's..
this wack guy..get outta the closet wit your gay style.
& this battles like a movie, coz victories seen throughout 8 miles.

the dopeman and l's line is because l's are blunts... and dopeman always receive the blunts and sell 'em or w/e they wanna do wit em..

dope verse wrecker
g'luck homeboy
upppin yall!!!!!!!

c'mon people don't sleep vote up... .. drop yur links and i'll hit em up..

yeayea fa sho
honest votes will be returned..
upppin!!!

can we get some damn votes people?
honest well explained vots will be returned
peace

fuckin sleepin
wake up!!!
honest votes will be returned
peace

Voted For: Dopeman

Wrecker
this kids not worth my time, too wack to try
& i'm like a roman clockmaker when I slash your eyes (I's)
Nice wordplay here, good opener, aight punch, 3/5
i've already beat you once, your drop was beyond basic.
& revenge is sweet.....too bad you won't get to taste it.
This punch is what was basic. instead of "too bad you won't" you could've thrown something much more creative in there. 2/5
when yu battle me, its like you play in the NFL, coz you're done (Dunn)
so I'll have this L stuck to your sole (soul) like chewed piece of gum.
Another basic punch, the first line was what killed it for you, 1.5
Grasp the rifle, have this bastid filled with shells..
Named himself Dopeman..coz he's always receivin L's..
...Ok, 2/5[/B]
this wack guy..get outta the closet wit your gay style.
& this battles like a movie, coz victories seen throughout 8 miles.
Bad closer, blatent gay lines and 8 Mile lines are both hella played, 0.5/5
Total:9/25

Dopeman:
i'ma give this dumb fuck the merkin of the highest order...
punches that'll 'floor-ya' an then ship you off to the mexican border...
Ok multis here, but the punch was weak, 2/5
15 essa's runnin a train, ya bitch ass is gettin cooked like crack cocaine..
ya rhymes are comin lighter than the fact under your name...
Blah, more ok multis but weak punch, 2/5
last time we battled you cried when i got a vote......
an if you dont believe me i'll go copy a qoute....
I didn't see that battle, but anyway the punch connected but wasn't that hard, 2/5
your the complete opposite to a microphone wrecker..
you stayin bangin on hard dick like a fuckin woodpecker..
Punch was ok, didn't hit very hard, 2/5
so for now, i'm out an this battle is done.....
an your gettin about as far in life as big pun on the run!!..
Another ok punch, it was just ok, 2/5
Total:10/25

Winner: Dopeman. Battle was mediocre, but no hate you kids probably just weren't focused. Return the vote to a link in my sig, honest explained votes only...

This was feedback posted for Wrecker
 

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Voted For: Dopeman

Wrecker
structure is good.. flow fell of a little throughout ur verse.. no multis.. u attempted a lot of wordplay, but some of it was either played, or just didnt make since.. like the Dunn line.. i dont get what that had to do with anything.. it was just, there.. whatever though.. nnone of ur punches connected.. seriously.. u attempted a personal, but it didnt connect..

Dopeman
structure is pretty good.. flow is good for the most part.. u had a few multis.. wordplay was pretty good at some parts.. like the big pun line.. a few of ur punches connected.. pretty much the only 2 i liked was the big pun one, and the light weight one.. the rest i wasnt feelin.. the light weight line was a decent personal..

Overall
both had a good structure.. Dopeman had the better flow.. more multis.. better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and a better personal.. so basing off of that.. Dopeman gets my vote..

VOTE - DOPEMAN

This was feedback posted for Wrecker
 

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