King Mathers vs Wordz AhGod
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 30

Check in by: 10-14-08 at 03:24 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

King Mathers has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-08 10:44 PM.

Let me start by saying i aint scared of you man, I seen all your posts
and i can tell your gonna have a harder time then Mc Cain getting votes
you devote your time to this rap shit, i have a life, i am a fighter
i have kids and wife and you have a life partner
i am damn right smarter in life and the way i write my lines
i take the time to create punches that hurt and actually rhyme
i dont take this shit serious i do it for fun cause its a hobby
mess with me and ill fuck you up, you Whitney and I'm Bobby
ill travel across the country like Mexicans in boats, till i reach florida
beat your ass till you bleed and leave you with a permanent scar
trust me homie it wont be a drive by cause i wanna get my hands dirty
i take pride in beating up emcees that claim to be better than me
when where done no one will fuck with me cause im the new Denice the menace
while ill leave you looking like the new rocky Dennis
you gotta be kidding me joining a crew called owning you daily
those fuckers so weak they couldn't even kill a new born baby
And Mr Wordz AhGod the big man above cant even save your from defeat
cause he and your own crew know that the only way you can beat me is if you cheat
you shit outta luck cause your crew cant vote, and without them you will have none
but i guess for you it doesn't matter if you won, as long as you had fun

Wordz AhGod has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-12-08 10:57 AM.

yo,
I'll let em bleed to death, the whole floors just covered wit em'

This fag here be sportin lip stick and eye liner. Man he from another world.
Scanning every womans mag he can just coz it promises to cover girls.
Boy Im like a beast when I rap, so I'll school you in the basics of Text for sure.
By pointing at your bitch and saying, "easy does it".. coz yeah, thats a metaphore.
and speaking of the whore, we run trains on her and leave her garments as trace.
And the bitch got a need for speed, so naturally I spew my carbin her face.
Merking him is just a preset, Nigga I pay my dues with each step.
So when exausted, I punch Mathers enough times to help me take a deep breath.
Shhh, right now Im at the library reading.. so dont yell, but its okay to text.
coz If I get disturbed I'll lay down some bookmarks..across your face and chest.
They say your face is fucked. looks like its fighting your forehead, and every day it raises up.
But never fear, my fist is here to mediate the disputes, by helping to break it up.

short and sweet. :thumbup: g'luck fam.

yo,
I'll let em bleed to death, the whole floors just covered wit em'

This fag here be sportin lip stick and eye liner. Man he from another world.
Scanning every womans mag he can just coz it promises to cover girls.
Boy Im like a beast when I rap, so I'll school you in the basics of Text for sure.
By pointing at your bitch and saying, "easy does it".. coz yeah, thats a metaphore.
and speaking of the whore, we run trains on her and leave her garments as trace.
And the bitch got a need for speed, so naturally I spew my carbin her face.
Merking him is just a preset, Nigga I pay my dues with each step.
So when exausted, I punch Mathers enough times to help me take a deep breath.
Shhh, right now Im at the library reading.. so dont yell, but its okay to text.
coz If I get disturbed I'll lay down some bookmarks..across your face and chest.
They say your face is fucked. looks like its fighting your forehead, and every day it raises up.
But never fear, my fist is here to mediate the disputes, by helping to break it up.

short and sweet. :thumbup: g'luck fam.

this site sucks, whats the point of a battle if nobody votes

yeah, its been like this lately. Im in Rapbattles right now coz that place is more alive at the moment.

me to man, im a member to. Wanna end this battle then copy both verses to Rap Battle because people will actually vote there?

over 100 fucking people view and not one fucking vote

nah, Its not a real verse to me lol so I dont really want to put it every were.

Voted For: Wordz AhGod

man dis was an easy win fo Wordz Ahgod.

Punchlines:7/10
Metaphores:2/10
Similies:none
Wordplay:6/10

Overall: 7/10

King Mathers need sum werk buddy

Punchlines:6/10
Metaphores:none
Similies:4/10
Wordplay:4/10

Overall:6/10

Vote: Wordz Ahgod

Voted For: Wordz AhGod

when where done no one will fuck with me cause im the new Denice the menace
while ill leave you looking like the new rocky Dennis

vs.

Boy Im like a beast when I rap, so I'll school you in the basics of Text for sure.
By pointing at your bitch and saying, "easy does it".. coz yeah, thats a metaphore.
and speaking of the whore, we run trains on her and leave her garments as trace.
And the bitch got a need for speed, so naturally I spew my carbin her face.
Shhh, right now Im at the library reading.. so dont yell, but its okay to text.
coz If I get disturbed I'll lay down some bookmarks..across your face and chest.
They say your face is fucked. looks like its fighting your forehead, and every day it raises up.
But never fear, my fist is here to mediate the disputes, by helping to break it up.

lmao. this was pret one sided. mathers really didnt have n e thing. wordz had an overall solid verse. im sure those punches have been used before but i dug the wordin and it was more then enuff to take this. vote/ wordz

This was feedback posted for Wordz AhGod
 

rofl


...^^^ that nig needs to stop rappin and go make some fry bread


















































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lol, he's new so its all good. Not a bad verse for a new guy really. Just needs to go to a more active site to get kicked around for awhile so he can get better I guess.

i can use ur pasty ass as the dough.
always my pleasure to serve up racist bigots tho, les run one

Meh, I never really seen anything from Pinky that I was feeling (although I only seen what he dropped in the VTL soo). Is this Native from our battle in BW?

I am not allowed to vote in Front Lines anymore, but Wordz got this.


Now make me some waffle fries bitch!

Bitch... I want a Dr. Pepper... for FREE!!!
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Voted For: Wordz AhGod

This fag here be sportin lip stick and eye liner. Man he from another world.
Scanning every womans mag he can just coz it promises to cover girls.
Boy Im like a beast when I rap, so I'll school you in the basics of Text for sure.
By pointing at your bitch and saying, "easy does it".. coz yeah, thats a metaphore~~~Lines Dope

as for the other douchebag...Not so dope its more like poop?

What the F*ck is this?

when where done no one will fuck with me cause im the new Denice the menace
while ill leave you looking like the new rocky Dennis

Its actually "Dennis the menace" You Illiterate f*ck.
"New Rocky Dennis" Wow thats umm? Gay

Hey Mathers you should "battle me" Bud...
I could always use a Free win..Rookie

Voted For: Wordz AhGod

Clearly the winner, better written piece, better disses,just generally nicer to read.
King sort your wordplay out and your shit would be alot better.
Vote=wordz

How about we meet on neutral ground and discuss negotiations for a trade?

hmmmm... that sound envigerating.. the thought alone simply stimulates particles in my membrains and neucleuses... there is no horizon to the virtual possiblities that could occur from this gentlemens trade.. tell me Nickalous.. what would be your barter for this occassion and where would be the foundation to this confrence?

Well, good sir... I was brainstorming locations of neutral benefits and I came up with two places. The first would be a 7/11, no particular one, but the benefits of said location would mean we could get some munchies and a fresh beverage as we negotiate trade agreements. The second, Wendy's. It has to be CALI's though, so the benefits of that location would be pointing and laughing at his homo fat ass whilst we trade.

As for bartering, I suggest we save that for the face to face because I prefer to keep my cards close to my chest until the table is set out before me for me to lay them on.

very well, CALI's Wendys it is then. I will await with my Top hat and eye lense at the ready.. have at you!!!

This was feedback posted for Wordz AhGod
 

I don't knoww who won good battle they were both good the thing about callin him a fag and fuckin his gurl is played but it flowed nice but upps to booth of you!

Actually change me to king mathers i re-read them and u landed better punches so u should get my vote cus u dissed him harder and better!