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FEATURED TRACK NEW SPUL!!! "King Me" (J. Summers diss)
yea, I posted it in battle but wanted more feed too. so word...
www.soundclick.com/itsdakidspul Skit: Zone Out/SPuL Intro: SPuL First verse: SPuL Hook: SPuL Second verse: SPuL Outro: SPuL Beat: "Made You Look" by NaS Lyrics: Now I'm not a promotor of violene but could we please have a little moment of silence? ....That's for you, J Got you duct taped up in the truck, kick, pushin' like you Lupe This ain't no movie. When you're dead you dead This a one-sided bout, fucka two-way Dude, wait... King of the North? Fuck a coast, kid, you ain't even King of your State Listen...girls, love me, they all kissing the guy But if it's thumbs up for, J... he's just hitchin' a ride Man, I'm hot, I abuse...leave you shakin' like Michael J. Fox Only thing you ain't got his excuse Best not get confused, I'm reppin' the new set I'm rude bet, makin' money, doing my 2 step Your weak, I tell your, girl "yo honey, you nude yet?" Cuz losing's a bitch, and the only one you'll get (Chorus x2) SPuL's comin'!! Yo J you shook Feel ashamed, say my name, you cooked You ain't a king, you a clown, cat. You're going down (BLAT!) Lyin' on the ground, noww.. where my crown at? Kid, you want beef? That's stupid to say Cuz I got Kobe lookin' jealous, way I'm shooting a J You reppin' Alanson, kid. That just shows that you wack But congrats, on being King, where nobody raps! This punks mine.. so if you really ARE what you eat Watch J's next battle for my punchlines I'll leave your group with a knife to their neck right Cuz it's a Breeze beating Summers, like your sex life Ain't got lines to waste, wanted to dumb it down a bit But your songs beat me to the chase Yo I hate to break Jaws.... but your name, J. Summers Is sooo last season, that I'm makin' J. Fall Your group playin' you. Don't cry but yo You're just the whiteboy they found to give 'em ride to shows Kid, you ain't fire. Rap hasn't look forward To J. Summers, since fuckin' Jigga retired (Chorus x2) SPuL's comin'!! Yo J you shook Feel ashamed, say my name, you cooked You ain't a king, you a clown, cat. You're going down (BLAT!) Lyin' on the ground, noww.. where my crown at? LINKS: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237018 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=236723 |
roflmao @ the intro
we was foolin on this shit kick pushin like lupe is slightly played.. lol @ the you aint even king of your state the michael j fox line is decent shit's flowin nicely heh @ shootin the j the "you the king where no body raps" that was ill the J Fall line hit hard roflmao @ the "get crunk" addlib shits all decent overall Imma give it a 7.5/10 lol @ the subliminal from the party track aiyo I dont see J Summers with the lyrical capability or creativeness to have something better than this nice job |
LMFAO @ intro.....now THAT is dopeness
where your going "King Me'' thats mixed nicely.... 1st verse is pretty nice.... im liking the opener on the 2nd verse... lmao @ last season line..dope lol closer is ill too...2nd verse is def. better in my opinion...you toasted him on that one... yea...i really dont see j summers coming with anything better than this..but...you never know...... lol good track man...and probably the best mixed track ive heard from u.... |
im feelin u.....ur pretty good as an audio head....
this is was decent.....well some steps above decent..... u got good emotion and flow.....good delivery this was on point man.... like the lupe ish and ur multis afterwards on announciation thumbs up tight....ender of 1st verse yes.... chorus is coo....likes beatin line coo fall and summers line coo |
.......WOW.....
Now thats a fuckin battle track right thurr....... gotta give credit where its due.... for a battle track... this shit was pretty heavy... it aint over till its over though.... waiting on J.Summers to fire back one time... Freakin Bully |
^haha thanks appreciate it yo.
and word props to everyone else for feed too. wordddd |
lmfao, intro iz illyness.
dope track. but howd u guys do tha intro? shit really sounds like ur in tha same room talkin n shit, werd |
I actually found it alright......you're probably thinking I'm hating, but the only real things I liked about it were the intro (pretty creative), the production (top notch man.....seriously) and the J Fall line. The rest of the lyrics sounded pretty played to me. I'm sure there were some more original concepts in there that I'm missing, but you did way too many J something lines and it just wasn't hitting in my opinion. Now, on the production side of things, like I said, you fuckin held it down man......props.
Now it's time to await J's diss :thumbup: |
^blah blah blah blah blah....
and word kool. i just tried to make volume close to the same that Zone did. but word upppp... where the fuck is J? |
very impressive this actually, quite a few played out lines in there, but ya made up for it with the nice cocky delivery, and sick flow haha...nice battle tune man
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Why get all bent outta shape there turtle jizz? |
^hmm..... so not givin' a fuck about a 26 yr old rapper who can't get nowhere thinks is getting bent out of shape? ok, there buddy. How bout you get off my dick and get out of this thread. You already said what you think, so why keep posting here? Don't you got kids to attend to?
BUT THEN AGAIN... i forgot how much you must be on J. Summers dick, so of course you'd be standing up for your lil buddy who got you a show aka the "PHANTOM" show. :rolleyes: Gotta rely on kids 8 years younger than you, huh? Sad.... |
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roffffffflmao i used to watch this show when i was little lol
spuls coming you sound like carson jet and its really annoying lol : / crunk on lmao nice adlibs there uhh not feeling this spuls coming : / solid diss intro killed it what the fuck ever happened to that show lol : / i liekd everything except your hook spuls coming shit you sounded like carson jet to a t |
lol @ carson jet. pshhhh. thanks for feed tho lol
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