AKA IDOL WARRIOR vs Ideal
 

Rulez

No d/r
No crew votes
No bitin

10-15 lines

30 mins

U spit first

Checkin in........................................

c'mon ideal................... Check in..............

sorry didnt know this shit was up here or i woulda checked earliar...

k u spit first.....................................

killin who? Aka idol?! are you really the one? /
you spillin over ya britches please put down the cap gun /
im sick of hearin you boast /
after I kill you once ill b spittin raps atta ghost /
his style is pathetic /
im catchin "meddle" from idol becuz my personalities "magnetic" /
idol needs to choose hes lost and confused /
he is a fruit -even the ass of his pants say "easily bruised" /
please give it a rest /
didnt need spongebob to sea-men exposed on your chest /


goodluck uppin your shit

Ideal, now im goin to take u for a meal,
and when ive finished with u, u aint goin to be no more than crums.
These perfect blows, im givin u aint goin to be light
so u best leave for these lyrics are tight….
Ive seen ur rhymes..... they aint ryhmes
U should be locked up becoz they that bad they crimes.
That cap-gun of mine is lethal boi
So don’t mess with me coz I aint no toy
U think uve got skillz, ill show u skills
But first im goner crush u like aspirin pills
I flow like a river.. smooth and steady,
But wat eva u do, u aint neva goin to be ready,
So to finish this off, I just want to say that I wasn’t even tryin,
So stop your pussy cryin.

Uppin for votes......................................

Uppin for votes....................................

killin who? Aka idol?! are you really the one? /
you spillin over ya britches please put down the cap gun /
im sick of hearin you boast /
after I kill you once ill b spittin raps atta ghost /
his style is pathetic /
im catchin "meddle" from idol becuz my personalities "magnetic" /
idol needs to choose hes lost and confused /
he is a fruit -even the ass of his pants say "easily bruised" /
please give it a rest /
didnt need spongebob to sea-men exposed on your chest /
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this was whack and yea so it wasnt good at all 4/10
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Ideal, now im goin to take u for a meal,
and when ive finished with u, u aint goin to be no more than crums.
These perfect blows, im givin u aint goin to be light
so u best leave for these lyrics are tight….
Ive seen ur rhymes..... they aint ryhmes
U should be locked up becoz they that bad they crimes.
That cap-gun of mine is lethal boi
So don’t mess with me coz I aint no toy
U think uve got skillz, ill show u skills
But first im goner crush u like aspirin pills
I flow like a river.. smooth and steady,
But wat eva u do, u aint neva goin to be ready,
So to finish this off, I just want to say that I wasn’t even tryin,
So stop your pussy cryin.
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this was whack too but it was way better than the first 5/10
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vote/aka
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hit my sig up and i'll come back and poll vote im trying to get 100 posts
have like 96 and shit so yea

aiight dis battle was bad it has 2 be sed.but 2be fair 2u both ill tel ya wat was good./
idal u had a good opener but ur closer was wack!/
AKA ur opener was wack but after that u were aiight, ur flow was ok, ur closer was also wack./
After the break down i wud say AKA took this 1!
Vote:AKA


Overall battle..........4/10

uppin for votes on this............................

aka idol warrior took this 1....y? stat off his structure was much better and his punches actually connected harder.....sum of his lyrics were played.....he had an aight opener but warrior had the better finisher in this battle....as aka had the harder hittin punches i wud give it 2 him this time as i tink punches win battles

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

Aka Idol took this 1. U both improved towards the end but ideal only had like 1 gd punch "idol needs to choose hes lost and confused /
he is a fruit -even the ass of his pants say "easily bruised" /
Where as Idol came gd wid two
"U think uve got skillz, ill show u skills
But first im goner crush u like aspirin pills
I flow like a river.. smooth and steady,
But wat eva u do, u aint neva goin to be ready,

So... Narrowly my vote goes to Aka Idol

But both of ya keep at it.

weak battle... aka took it thanks to better structure and lil' better punchez... ideal work on your structure... both work on vocab
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