.\\assacre vs. Kimmy
 

aight

10-15 lines

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due 15-20 min after you check in

make dies quick

house rules

no recycling too




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Go get em Kimmy!..... Good to see you here!................

lets just keep it at 10 lines

this aint a check in...cuzz i got stuff to do...but i'll get at this shortly okay

ahhhhhhh comon, i wanna make this shit quick


just try to spit as quickly as you can, aight???



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my bad dawg...i fell asleep.
here we go

AYO
I got this "kid shook" like "micheal jackson ina lingerie", its whateva ya call it doc/
u could "swallow bricks n take laxitives", n ya "shit" still couldn’t be a "solid drop"/
u should run from this fight, u like "vet whores in porn" cuzz this "hoe-aint-tight"/
you say you from Brooklyn right??? Explain why ya flow-aint-"NYC (nice)"/ (1)
stop playin "hooky", we all know "u aint sick", I’m flowin-mean-kid/
bitch, you like a "dropped toilet-seat-lid"….you aint "showin-me-shit"/
I’ll defeat-ya-ass, after this match you’ll be hoping to delete-the-past/
like takin "firearms to catholic church services", I’m bringin "heat-to-mass"/(2)
we could be "caught runaway slaves" n u still couldn’t "hang" with pros-in-rap/
me postin my "verse next to yours" is the only time "my lines" are "close-to-wack"/

EXPLANATIONS:
(1)he lives in brooklyn
(2)mass is a catholic church service…for all ya’ll that don’t know

yo sorry

i havn't been on my computer in so long


i'll spit today.

peace

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He yo...
I’m metaphorically sick, spray thoughts so deadly that this bitch hit the floor when I spit//
I’m too ill to be categorically fit, like ‘missed ball shots landing on players’ I’ll ‘hit this whore with a brick’//
Rip the door when I kick n 'drop this jewel' like a 'retarded theft guy'; so deft I, outcome victorious even when the best try//
Stress why I’m seditious with a blade swinging as your wrist is eternally bleeding from one malicious slit//
Vicious spit, ‘cumin sweet off the top of the head’ have you saying, “hmm this is delicious dick”//
You get repetitious quick resulting to boring verses; scoring first hits when we’re going versus one another//
Your attempts were useless like stolen purses without the butter; you can’t hurt this foreign gun applauder//
Word to mother; my bandwidth u can’t manage; like 'giving out shitty cards' I’m 'dealing this damage'//
I’m like ‘Tracy preparing food for young ones’, the way I have kids eating a ‘Dick sandwich’// (lol = Dick Tracy)
Talk shit to me? Kid you must be retarded; this hard hit is like M16’s firing as I precisely bombarded the target//
Have your mic discarded; Like 'Jason' scoring open lay-ups you didn’t have this 'Kidd' guarded//
When it comes to scripts I 'hold it down' like 'paperweights'; your 'process of uprising' is 'barely visible' like 'vapor states'//
I’m ranked 1st kiddo you can’t have my place; with scraper traits I’d viciously attack to scrape your face //
You can’t escape the gates; 'blazing off the top' like a 'fro burnt'; like 'hydro damns' I’d prevent you 'flow current'//
Most weren’t; respectable soon my delectable rhymes seemed impeccable to beat as foes learnt//
'Blocking spikes in volleyball' is the only time you’ll bring nice 'defense around the net'//
Treat you like rookies...put you on your knees so you know your row around a vet//




yo i went over like 2 bars, i hope ya don't mind



aight upppiiinnn




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upppppin for votes


lets get some votes up in here



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u should run from this fight, u like "vet whores in porn" cuzz this "hoe-aint-tight"/
you say you from Brooklyn right??? Explain why ya flow-aint-"NYC (nice)"/ (1)
stop playin "hooky", we all know "u aint sick", I’m flowin-mean-kid/
bitch, you like a "dropped toilet-seat-lid"….you aint "showin-me-shit"/
I’ll defeat-ya-ass, after this match you’ll be hoping to delete-the-past/
like takin "firearms to catholic church services", I’m bringin "heat-to-mass"/(2)
we could be "caught runaway slaves" n u still couldn’t "hang" with pros-in-rap/
me postin my "verse next to yours" is the only time "my lines" are "close-to-wack"/

^^Dat whole part of Kimmy's verse was FLAMEZ! It's good to see some heavyweights hittin this site now...

Massacre ur verse was coo, but it jus seemed a lil corny in parts. U got da right idea wid ur punches but jus didnt get complex enuff. Good Job doe homie! Congrats to whoever walks away wid da win!

Vote=Kimmy

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I felt kimmy gave a little exttra with her solid punches
more creative tho i liked massacres multis
but overall Kimmy had good flow but mainly harder punches
Massacre brought some heat but i didnt feel they were as direct as kimmys
punches and flow so Kimmy gets the vote

Flow-tied
Wordplay- assacre
Punches- assacre
multies-n/a
metas-kimmy
complexity- assacre
vocab- assacre
enjoyment- tied
vote- assacre

This was a very good battle. Kimmy's verse was decent and all, but I feel assacre came harder. His verse outweighed her's in more discreet ways. Nice battle here.


^uppin this for yall.

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im gona give the vote to assacre,some solid shit in there and i like da rhymes!! Peace

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yo thats a madd dickride.. well. they both girls. so i don't know what to call it


you and that chick is like best friends.


umma report that shit.


peace. mafuckas



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u should run from this fight, u like "vet whores in porn" cuzz this "hoe-aint-tight"/
you say you from Brooklyn right??? Explain why ya flow-aint-"NYC (nice)"/ (1)?

^^^that line ripped it clearly
Flow-kimmy
Wordplay- kimmy
Punches- kimmy
multies- kimmy
metas-kimmy
complexity- kimmy
vocab- kimmy
enjoyment- kimmy
vote-kimmy

assacre was just straight boring....my opinion kimmy's shit was straight fire!1

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stop playin "hooky", we all know "u aint sick", I’m flowin-mean-kid/
bitch, you like a "dropped toilet-seat-lid"….you aint "showin-me-shit"/
I’ll defeat-ya-ass, after this match you’ll be hoping to delete-the-past/
like takin "firearms to catholic church services", I’m bringin "heat-to-mass"/

damn!

kimmy ripped this battle, had my jaw droppin. //assacre had a sick verse too but kimmy's punches metasphors n multis are what did it for me. //assacre had a nice flow n nice vocab but it just wasn't matchin kimmy's