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shodown (1-1) vs. Red Bull (1-1) vs. Blackmage (1-1)
Due Dates
-------------------------------------- VERSES DUE Friday 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EST VOTES DUE Sunday 9:00pm PACIFIC/12:00 Midnight EST THERE ARE NO CHECK INS :) Line Limit ------------------------------------- 4 lines - NO SHOWS 14 lines - MINIMUM Unlimited - MAXIMUM --------------------------------------- Voting --------------------------------------- - You must vote on 2 battles and post the links. For each vote less than 2 you fail to fulfill and post a link to, you will lose 1 vote on your own match. The league can't survive without voting, No excuses. -No payback votes -No 2nd Chance Votes -No hate votes - If your oponent no shows you are still required to vote on 1 battles. If you don't you will not recive the win. Topics! --------------------------------- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218702 You don't have to Agree On Topics
EVERYTHING IS DUE NEXT WEEK NOT THIS ONE! This is more than enough time to write and drop. |
I'll probably no show because I should be 2-0.
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check......................................
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shit i forgot no check ins............................................... ................
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I'm not wasting a fuckin' verse on a no show battle.
I should have won my last battle, my opponent wasn't online all week, so I didn't even bother posting. So, if these people no show, give me the win, and consider this as my verse, and if they show, I'll drop something for real.  two crows, perched, waiting for death their days scavenging, their days well spent the darkened air, gives light to hell on earth when the world fails, they prove their worth the stench haunts the air, morbid with life the barren emptiness gives appearance to the dreary site skeletal remains creates the burrial grounds howling wolves, hungry for death, sound their cries feign existence is all around, bound with pain the crows guard their instincts, the smell faint like gargoyles, unseen, unnoticed till striking time blood shed, in mud prints....there you will find two crows waiting for death, they sing their song the feast is starting; they do not wait long . . . . understand it, or i will shoot you :shoot: |
THE REMAINS the high price of livin concluded off VENGENCE the kids all fall back off the imortal repentance. slowly dying to define themselves and the price of livin the truth held shut and hidden, its earned not a givin. pressured emotions, Devoted sense fall to the Loyal yet there is none NOW and not ever will there be a true royal. secreted diligence pictured yet not executed to perfection. its like in one ear out the other type of DIMENSION, not to mention. so you tell me how are we suppose to live, off only bread and water. kids growin up off drugs with no brother sister mother or FATHER. no one to turn to, yet the so called upper class still bullies. were the one strivin when the so called smart one are the one playin hookie! the truth is right there, if only you'd look for your own SELF. instead of depending off of other peoplem takin their own wealth. amandity is so calm, as air is to the Earth's calm BREEZE. yet when none is done wrong, the JUST! do just seem to say FREEZE! so i walk down a shadowed path that called the ILL LONELY PATHAWAY! where hunger and scared kids these days live callin it the remains of the DAY! |
Fuck Blackmage..
Now vote. |
if i can vote....seriously, my vote, /v red bull
just because he didn't follow down a played topic, shodown, like seriously, i've seen that shit played out to the BONE, where a family/individual struggles, he has nothing or whatever....gotta come creative man........red bull, you were creative, you came at a imaginative aspect where you incorporated a different view of what was going on, and interpreted that into you verse.....which made it more interesting for the reader because they got to experience a different aspect of viewing.....shodown, was just plain, nothing too much to hang on too and grasp for a concept basing off that...v/red bull |
sorry i forgot all about this shit, ma bad, well i guess i'm out and...yes red bull...fuck me, but only Drama Queen, good luck wit this yall, i'll still drop votes and shit later peace
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V/ - Red Bull.
Red - Your topic was cool, and you approached it well. I cant really say much about it because you had a very picture perfect poetry style verse here. Um, imagery was very nice, wording was good, vocab wasnt too flashy or elegant but it was good. Shodown - You picked a played topic kind of, and thats what killed it for you. Everyone that picks a topic like this, comes the same way, and has the same view and approach to it. You didnt have much imagery, not much of a flow, and I didnt like your vocab whatsoever. Sorry, no hate, just elevate. Whoa at the the rhymage...^^. |
Red Bull wins due to DQ and a 2-0 vote.
Shodown is eliminated Blackmage is eliminated Closed |
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