Fly-E vs Mauvais Loup
 

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No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-02-08 at 06:15 PM

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Mauvais Loup has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-29-08 06:16 PM.

Fly-E has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-29-08 07:18 PM.

i don't know why i accepted this, it's obvious that you're on a whole 'nother plateau n' such
but god damn you're outstanding...in the middle of wackness away from the rest of us
dog, i can tell that from your writtens that your vibe is electric, nobody can refuse
such a hoe shit! i'd have a current too if i was willing to blow a fuse like you
you could call me straight edge, i don't fuck with nonsense drugs or theft
but i am violent, so fuck poppin E, i'd rather shank his ass to death
listen kid, you're lucky i gave you 3 days to prepare for your death sentence
i stick to the top...
...and in a matter of minutes 10 of you fuckers have gotten stuck to my fly strip
bitch, you can flap ya gums all you want, but nigga you don't wanna front
you'll be broke after i rip-off ya back and kill any buzz at once

This dude is fool of fantasies about teachers in grannies/
Like an incest beastality he gets off on boys fannies/
He loox like he asks his mom for big words when he's a hidden closet tranny/
The way this guy sounds makes me wanna explode/
Anothere pussy bitch on here,
Like Ransum and Clova from the biters exposed/
I cant even understand he dont rhyme or have punches/

Mauvais Loups exact lines-
you nasty ass granny hunter...when it comes to bitch game, you're a loser
coz i'm guessin...
...that's your son in your sig...so how the fuck a viper fuck a cougar?
Spontaneous Generation

Teacher infatuation


If you believe look in the cypher room his lyrics will stump ya/
Like tryin to understand wayne but this dude dont have an end like busta/
He'll leave you hangin thankin wat the fuck was that/
Jus do rapverse a favor bitch and neva try to rap/
U sound like crap imma bout to trap take u and go laps have u flat linen on ur back/

Jus a lil sumthin good luckk!

Voted For: Mauvais Loup

to be honest i really dont wanna vote on this battle but i will anyway.

Fly E - What the fuck was you talkin bout (no disrespect). most of ya lines made no sense at all.
Example:This dude is fool of fantasies about teachers in grannies/
Like an incest beastality he gets off on boys fannies/

that opener was very weak, not only was it not a good punch in any kind of way it made no sense. i could critique a couple of ya other lines that i felt the same about but i wont. your best line was the ransum line and it took me a couple seconds to get that. and in all actuality it wasnt that good of a punch.

M-L - when i first started reading your verse i thought it was gonna be the same way. i dont really have a lot to say about your verse since in my opinion he really beat himself. but the lines that you had that ensured a victory for you was the poppin E line (that was a nice witty line) and your closer which couldve been set up a little better but was still a very good line

my vote goes to Mauvais Loup. won easily in my opinion

Voted For: Mauvais Loup

i don't know why i accepted this, it's obvious that you're on a whole 'nother plateau n' such
but god damn you're outstanding...in the middle of wackness away from the rest of us



this bar was the best outta of both verus's

That E line was pretty cool 2, but i've seen drug references like that b4.

Fly-E, your whole verus looked pretty newbish....but it was alright. You got good flow, but you lacked any real punches or wordplay that i thought was great.

No Hate

Go Go Power Rangers!!

Voted For: Mauvais Loup

fly- e
your flow was off... format whatever you want to call it.. rather than attacking him you seemed to attack his words.. no real hard pucnhes.. watch battles.. learn how to hit hard.. and u'll get there..

loopy- you could call me straight edge, i don't fuck with nonsense drugs or theft
but i am violent, so fuck poppin E, i'd rather shank his ass to death
haha made me lol
ur close was iight too.. the rest was.. average tho.. nothing hitting too hard

Voted For: Mauvais Loup

better punches more direct and i felt your verse more then fly-e word..

Voted For: Mauvais Loup

i don't know why i accepted this, it's obvious that you're on a whole 'nother plateau n' such
but god damn you're outstanding...in the middle of wackness away from the rest of us
^Eh, I used that concept last week.
dog, i can tell that from your writtens that your vibe is electric, nobody can refuse
such a hoe shit! i'd have a current too if i was willing to blow a fuse like you
^Ehhhh.
you could call me straight edge, i don't fuck with nonsense drugs or theft
but i am violent, so fuck poppin E, i'd rather shank his ass to death
^ehhhhhh.
listen kid, you're lucky i gave you 3 days to prepare for your death sentence
i stick to the top...
...and in a matter of minutes 10 of you fuckers have gotten stuck to my fly strip
^ehhhhhh.
bitch, you can flap ya gums all you want, but nigga you don't wanna front
you'll be broke after i rip-off ya back and kill any buzz at once
^decent.

I'm not going to examine Fly-e's verse cause it wasn't that great and it would just be a waste of time. Mauv won due to having actual punches, even though they weren't that great. They didn't have to be.

V/ ML

PS- If you DQ my vote I'll just come back on an alias and vote.