Unholy Wun vs. triple_n
 

deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

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Ight:

This kid is Struggle's Day after Day for his RB record to Suceed..
But after u Read this it'll Have Blood Trickle as His Eye's Bleed..
Do i Make ur Stomach Turn More then Gettin ur Ball's Tagged..
u Spit Slow b/c u Lagged?Or did Gay Porno get ur CP Red Flagged.
You Couldnt Be Hot if u Got baked in a Oven on it's Hightest Degree..
Cant you See?My Flow leaves u Dead,Floatin out to Sea..
Ur a Itch that Need's to Be Scratched like Ur Pubic Lice..
Take Some Advice when a Girl Offers u Crab Cake dont take a Slice..
Countless Wins?Why does he Lie to Try and Make Friends..
Wait!?! Im 100% Sure that Lieng is one of God's Deadly Sin's..
You should be "iLL" Commin form Big Bad NewYork City..
Disgracin the Streets with ur Half Baked Battle's its a Pity..
How are u N[Cubed] When ur Shit doesnt fit the A-B-C's..
Only reason u got 23 Win's is b/c uve battles Wanna-Be Emcee's..
It's Ok Dont be sad or Cry ur Audio Record is 0-0 So ur Still Evan..
Bitch?Yes ur Mine But dont Cross the Line or ur Brain ull be Retreavin..

Ok.

Haha....^^^^^thats your verse, you in way over ya head kid

Ok look kid, Rule #1 when making personals is stick to the facts
To make it worse, ya punches were more played than "kanye west" tracks
I mean look at ya verse, you spit fillers by the bunch
Man, even if u owned "tropicana" u couldn't manufacture a "punch"
For you to get at least one vote in this thread is gon be a real strife
Your lyrics are "juvenile" they need good rhymes "in they life"
Your verse is wack as fuck, but for your effort I applaud
Its sad tho, cuz wit verses like that u gon get "sonned" more than "baby wards"
Did u even see ya verse, it has exactly 0 lyrical worth
Its not ya fault, I seen ya pic, you've been "fucked since birth"
I was surprised to see u asian, you tryin' to be next jin?
U seemed caucasian, cuz lookin at ya verse u'd think "Vaniila ice" is ya "next of kin"
I can't even call ya rhymes newb, cuz they younger than u in ya pic
I mean how u gon challenge a vet, when ya rhymes still on "wic"

blah battle

unholy, you're style of punches don't really hit too hard, you're basically making declaritive statements, rather than working in some clever concepts, don't get me wrong though, you had some cool lines

triple, you landed more punches, however most of them are terribly played times 739864563479868735653756897, and please...i beg of you...refrain from bolding and using quotations. however, you did throw a punch in every couplet and landed more than unholy, you came harder, but they were still played

weak battle, not feeling either verse

vote = triple

the breakdown...

unholy first

This kid is Struggle's Day after Day for his RB record to Suceed..
But after u Read this it'll Have Blood Trickle as His Eye's Bleed..
5 are you serious...that's not an opener...
Do i Make ur Stomach Turn More then Gettin ur Ball's Tagged..
u Spit Slow b/c u Lagged?Or did Gay Porno get ur CP Red Flagged.
6.5 decent...stupid and played though...where's some wordplay
You Couldnt Be Hot if u Got baked in a Oven on it's Hightest Degree..
Cant you See?My Flow leaves u Dead,Floatin out to Sea..
4 your kidding with this line right?
Ur a Itch that Need's to Be Scratched like Ur Pubic Lice..
Take Some Advice when a Girl Offers u Crab Cake dont take a Slice..
3 wow...i'll never get these 3 minutes back
Countless Wins?Why does he Lie to Try and Make Friends..
Wait!?! Im 100% Sure that Lieng is one of God's Deadly Sin's..
4 hmmm...kind of a personal...although terrible...wit...look it up in the dictionary
You should be "iLL" Commin form Big Bad NewYork City..
Disgracin the Streets with ur Half Baked Battle's its a Pity..
3 hmm...BRUTAL KID
How are u N[Cubed] When ur Shit doesnt fit the A-B-C's..
Only reason u got 23 Win's is b/c uve battles Wanna-Be Emcee's..
5 basic...but not terrible...so it's your best line
It's Ok Dont be sad or Cry ur Audio Record is 0-0 So ur Still Evan..
Bitch?Yes ur Mine But dont Cross the Line or ur Brain ull be Retreavin..
1 wow...that's a bad line...that's all i can say...oh oh...also you suck at life...haha jokes


i'm going to kill myself if triplen's verse is that bad...


Ok look kid, Rule #1 when making personals is stick to the facts
To make it worse, ya punches were more played than "kanye west" tracks
7 hahah...see unholy that's a line...
I mean look at ya verse, you spit fillers by the bunch
Man, even if u owned "tropicana" u couldn't manufacture a "punch"
7 another decent to good line...i'm starting to wake up again
For you to get at least one vote in this thread is gon be a real strife
Your lyrics are "juvenile" they need good rhymes "in they life"
5 decent...
Your verse is wack as fuck, but for your effort I applaud
Its sad tho, cuz wit verses like that u gon get "sonned" more than "baby wards"4boo..not a big fan
Did u even see ya verse, it has exactly 0 lyrical worth
Its not ya fault, I seen ya pic, you've been "fucked since birth"
7 BAMM...good shit...woulda been better with a link
I was surprised to see u asian, you tryin' to be next jin?
U seemed caucasian, cuz lookin at ya verse u'd think "Vaniila ice" is ya "next of kin"4 boo...ice lines are wack
I can't even call ya rhymes newb, cuz they younger than u in ya pic
I mean how u gon challenge a vet, when ya rhymes still on "wic"6 haha...decent...easy battle to decide


vote triple N

breakdown for unholy_wun:

flow:workin kinda basic though nothing too great 6/10

volcab:average array here nothing too say 5/10

punches:not too many good lines mainly played ideas best i thought,"You Couldnt Be Hot if u Got baked in a Oven on it's Hightest Degree.." still kinda played 6/10

overall:17/30

breakdown for triple_n:

flow:nice no problems i had with it 6/10

volcab:edged out wun but still room for improvment 6/10

punches:best line,"Man, even if u owned "tropicana" u couldn't manufacture a "punch"" aside from that you addressed him well my only problem was the valina ice line, pretty played either way you took it here too 7/10


overall:19/30

vote--triple_n got this in my eyes

3-0 triple_n wins