SevenThird Vs Me !!!TOPICAL BATTLE!!!
 

Rules:
spit due 20 min. after check in.
no d/r
no c/v
no h/v
3-0 is ko
Topic: escape da police
No SHow is a loss....lolz...for somereason that always happens to me!!!

I wasn't talkin to you in that thread, but its funny how we both were postin like that and signals got crossed.... I dont duck shit though so my verse will be up in 20 son... ez

aight...lets change this to a dis battle aight dawg...not a topical battle...ur still gonna loose either way..hahaha

oh aight...so we doin a regular battle now..hahaha..aight..so topical it is...here's my check in

Just shot this poser named Atmosphere and he hurt in the block/
But now I got bigger worries cuz his boy alerted the cops//
I hear sirens comin quickly now down around the side-street/
Put the burner back in the coat-- cuz I keep my-heat/
Im Grimey- I know these streets-- can't noone find-me//
First move I made was quickly hop in the whip- hit ignition/
Sirens comin closer so I "hit" the long pedal lika "pidgeon"//
rear tires squealin- Quickly capped the trampy witness/
Did a 360 in the street Dip on the On-Ramp wit a quickness/
Did some James Bond shit and cut between a benz and a mazda/
And made a 18 Wheeler crush a miata and kill the driva//
red-lining in my charger quickly downshift and make left turn/
All this before the cops got to where I shot and made his chest-burn//
Drivin slower now, The siren sounds have faded--
Thats how to run from cops- And actually make-it//

nah the thread says topical keep it topical.... My verse was up in 20 mins... You got about 5 left before YOU dq.

I've now jst escaped a penetentary prison//
had to kill one cop and da cell mate tat was wit him//
with Seventhirds behind me, I took a brick threw it and tripped him//
But then he stood up and kept runnin hopin he'll make life and start livin//
I hopped fences, jumped ropes and jacked a mercadece benz//
as a sniper looked at me through his bright sighting lense//
While drivin seen a person, quickley turned right hopin i didn't hit her//
But fuck, drove off da bridge and realized I drove into da river//
Da sniper was still followin me, so hid and took his gun//
Shot one guy, one faget, and tried ta shoot another cop all for fun//
while sniping the cop got shot in the leg by a jail guard//
got up and started to run but realized i was back in the jail yard//

good luck

easier to read if it's like this

plz uppin this shyt ppl plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

we need votes here people we will return the favor

seventhird did come wit the imaginary mind......He
had the structure and was more imagerniary.....similies
was the best past though

atmo-you did good too......Work on
gettin imaginary more.....But thats my opinion
atmosphere migh win this......nice battle

Return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124400

ight thats one.... keep em comin people well return the fav.

seventhird - okay decent drop....pretty short verse for a topical.....but u statyed on topical....not a lot of description to see it happenin....but go the story well....jus elevate on the wordplay.....nice drop....give it a....
6.7/10

atmosphere - another decent drop....liked the ending...pretty funny....but not as beleivable as sevenminds...u stayed on topic....better flow....better wordplay....even though his was better to believe by a tiny bit.....ur flow and wordplay killed his....thats why you got this....
6.9/10

Vote - Atmosphere....this wasd a very evenly matched contest....keep elevatin.....

Thanx boy...uppin da votes plz!!!!!

aight, im feelin atmosphere on this one. He had the flow on lock and good punches

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