<(UNF AND CMP)>Street Shop-Holla
"Street Shop.Ft CMP" www.soundclick.com/unf Yeah,Holla Left Feed- Tony Self And Enygma http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=223668&page=1 All mighty OYD Cho Kahn N Ike http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=7 Them Notes |
hmmm....never herd this beat...another scarface sample lol....eh not realy feelin the beat wen it drops....
1st dude...flow is nice...lyrics are ...ehhhh....lacks emotion ....need to have a few stand out lines to keep peeps intrested IMO.... hook is not bad UNF-come in is nice..see here ur lvls r good ur not usualy loud enough.....i usualy strain to hear you...flow is nice..lyrcs r their.. nice drop ppls 1n'e |
Thanks,Upppppp To The Sky
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The first dude was alrigh......the production was pretty nice i was feelin the beat a lot.....he gotta up his flow a lil sounds too simple......
hook is meh... Unf - you had way better delivery then him and yoru flow was a lot better......you sound a lot better then you used too you sound like you feelin the mic more..a lil bit more uppin and you be top dolla...but keep comin fam it was straigh this was a nice lil track keep um comin |
Thanks Fam
Uppppppppp |
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me and magik use this beat on our mixtape...
our version > yours lol jk.. dont really like the first dude...presence lacks...flow is ok...could be improved some.. hook isnt catchy....i dunno...i just dont like this dude.. unf comes in.. presence is better...your getting better def. .......still gotta work on pronunciation some... other than that..it was coo... no real stand out lines for this track...try adding some dope ass punches... it was ok... |
Thanks
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yeah n shit,feed plz?
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in less than 4 hours uve upped ur shit 6 times
go leav some more fucking feed and hope ur shit gets returned |
Nope
:) Lol............. |
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can you say LOOOO HOOO ZEEEEEEEEEEER lol there...I upped it for you. |
says the dude who is on RV like all day?
Yeah thanks for upping it:thumbsup: |
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aren't you on it right now? lol dumb ass kids |
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