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Armada Da 187 04-06-05 12:22 PM

Coming Soon: King n Queens (MaRVJay diss)
 
in school ill post it when i get home round 5

chea chea its gonna be tight!

Pandemonium 04-06-05 03:08 PM

I'm sure it will be. Why have you hidden your record?

Armada Da 187 04-07-05 05:13 PM

back in the days of old there were kings n queens
now theres Armada (A King) n MaRVJay (A Queen)
I be rulin and runnin territory with a mighty fist
MaRV sits back n shuts his mouth until i say spit
I definitly got all the power to do what I please
wheneva MaRv does anything, it comes threw me
Ima flashback of the kings, Henry, Loui, McBeth
MaRVs a flash back of the one bitch Queen Elisabeth
He's tryin to run NY like his very own kingdom, WHAT
his reign falls in to poverity,betrayal, he nuttin butta slut
Nobody stays loyal to dis bitch, leave ya dead in ditches
Like Henry the VIII, Back talk me I behead all my bitches
When it all falls apart ya need a strong,powerful king like me
ironic thing is the rv knows theres a queen livin in Queens
Her Name is MaRVJay1009,she a waste of time, she aint mine
Ill take over NY like Alexander did the world, jus give me time
Risen up, Armada takin this world, n everything there is in it
MaRYJay surrenderin to the power of the Baltimore Senate
take hostile actions to easily throw dis bitch off her throne
Havin her scared out of her wits, refusin to leave her home
This queens got soldiers, but the problem is they from Queens
Ill summin up the army of Armada, n make her whole city bleed
decapitate every head thats on her block, stick them on pikes
Burn the bodies in the town square, have the women turnin dike
Have the soldiers lootin n pivelagin any goods this bitch has
Ima burn queens to the ground wit a fire torch, oil and gas
take MaRY captive n let the soldiers fuck here,spoils of war
I burn witches at the stake, lets have fires consume this whore
send Marv strait to hell, queens is no more, burnt to the ground
after my victory, I still wear a frown, theres a Queen n every NY TOWN
Ill burn the STATE to the ground, flush out the filth, ARMADA thas ME
cuz in the days of the old and to this day KINGS OVERWHELM QUEENS!

lol hahahaha

leave feed I no u feelin it

Armada Da 187 04-07-05 06:24 PM

uppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnn this bitch, leave some feed

Armada Da 187 04-07-05 06:37 PM

Upiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn Give Me Feedback Or Hate Lmfao W/e

Armada Da 187 04-07-05 09:07 PM

Come On Fams Give Feedback On This Diss Uppppiiiiiinnnnnnnnn

MaRVJay 04-08-05 02:50 AM

lmmaoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo y nobody replyin? fukkin suck homo nigga u gota fetish of sayin marv and queens every nigga in queens a fukk ya pussy up

DV8 04-08-05 03:09 AM

this verse needed work...
especially if it was written n not just keyed off the dome
no hate nucca but you said marvs name like 2 dozen times
i think thats a bit much.....

Armada Da 187 04-08-05 11:56 AM

thx for the feed gotta use marvs name fam dont want anyone thinkin im rappin bout anyone else

marv shhh now act like what u say u r A VET quit hatin on my disses like lil noob

Charlie~Manson 04-08-05 12:55 PM

its alright next time try a different approach the king and queen thing didnt do it 4 me but it was coo

Armada Da 187 04-08-05 02:06 PM

thx for the feed UPPPPPPPPIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

Kawn Flixx 04-08-05 03:24 PM

Like in the other piece this wasnt really hitten hard..
you need to learn to use better punchlines ,
some hard personals, maybe scoop up some info on marv
your structure was good , ill give you that but thats basically all you had
Sorry i really wasnt feeling this peice... elevate and keep it up

ps: Drop a link or this will be closed

Armada Da 187 04-09-05 06:49 PM

link is at the bottom of my sig fam

Armada Da 187 04-10-05 01:49 PM

close it up bones


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