kumar vs marvolousjay
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-28-06 at 12:20 PM

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kumar has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-28-06 12:05 PM.

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dis bitch is crazy 4 battlin me he must have had drugs injected
would shit on dis bitch if it was'nt a thought of my ass bein infected
this herbs readin my verse and now his eyes are lit
But his verses are a cryin shame......But laughin betta describes it
i have battled many ppl in my life but your the worst
so i thought i'l raise the bar of mediocrity.......................
til i tripped over the bar and landed face first in marvs verse
i`ll kill this bitch, no efforts needed, i`ll test my thesis
& put an L in the shape of a pie graph so he can rest in pieces
Infliction of Depiction, i'll hit u with fists n credit description
ur verses suck like newb's do, but ur the synthetic edition

MaRVOLOUSJay has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-28-06 12:10 PM.

im on writer's but hey...

came on rv cuzz on rb u wasn't goin to far.
u got new bar's?,kid was like dont hurt me aint we ku mar(v).
i aint through dog...........fam dont even blink wait!.
give head 2 gay dudes no wonder y u can neva think straight.
play hard i'll spray a couple clips a leave dis prick critical.
u still usin daffy lines....for voter's nun of ya diss-pickabul.
your pitaful listen dude...............i'll leave ya top open.
but in dis battle ima eat kool*ku*
like my parents teachin me a lesson da top smokin.........
your goin da b my 56th example how ima deadin dez fukkz....
ya cd a be like air when it drop's cuzz it a neva be touched

Voted For: MaRVOLOUSJay

MaRVOLOUSJay:
came on rv cuzz on rb u wasn't goin to far.
u got new bar's?,kid was like dont hurt me aint we ku mar(v).
6/10 - Niice Opener.
i aint through dog...........fam dont even blink wait!.
give head 2 gay dudes no wonder y u can neva think straight.
3/10 - Gay Lines Suck!
play hard i'll spray a couple clips a leave dis prick critical.
u still usin daffy lines....for voter's nun of ya diss-pickabul.
7/10 - Niice Punchline.
your pitaful listen dude...............i'll leave ya top open.
but in dis battle ima eat kool*ku*
like my parents teachin me a lesson da top smokin.........
2/10 - Didnt get it?
your goin da b my 56th example how ima deadin dez fukkz....
ya cd a be like air when it drop's cuzz it a neva be touched
4/10 - ok closer.
22/50

I have seen you do better, but this was still iight, you had a ok flow, used some ok punches in there too.


kumar:
dis bitch is crazy 4 battlin me he must have had drugs injected
would shit on dis bitch if it was'nt a thought of my ass bein infected
4/10 - ok opener.
this herbs readin my verse and now his eyes are lit
But his verses are a cryin shame......But laughin betta describes it
3/10 - Wasnt feelin it.
i have battled many ppl in my life but your the worst
so i thought i'l raise the bar of mediocrity.......................
til i tripped over the bar and landed face first in marvs verse
4/10 - OK.
i`ll kill this bitch, no efforts needed, i`ll test my thesis
& put an L in the shape of a pie graph so he can rest in pieces
5/10 - ok punch.
Infliction of Depiction, i'll hit u with fists n credit description
ur verses suck like newb's do, but ur the synthetic edition
5/10 - ok closer.
21/50

You had an ok verse, it flowed pretty well, you had some decent punchlines in there, some ok rhymes.

OVERALL: This was a close battle right here, both EMCEE"S came with some pretty decent shit, nothin' jaw droppin but still good. Marv gets the vote becuz he had one real niice line in there, and the other guys nothin really was stickin out!!

Vote - MARV

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return the fav in sig please, battles are gettin' slept on latly.

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Voted For: MaRVOLOUSJay

hmmm kumar didn't strat actually throwing punches and stop bragging till his 6th line... and even then the concepts were played out... there really weren't any good personals in this battle at all... but I thought that marv was more creative with his punches...

Punches: Marv
Personals: Marv by a hair
Creativity: Marv
Complexity: None to speak of
Structure: Nothing to speak of
Enjoyment: N/A

Vote: MaRVOLOUSJay

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Voted For: kumar

i voted fo kumar he had better punches and flow and nicer endoffs

marvjay ur ending lines were hard to understand but u can do better ok tructure though

no hate vote kumar

rtf to my battles

uppin dis man can we get some real votes

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