ThatNigga vs Illist
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

No dick riding fag.

Come and get served, bitch.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-25-05 at 02:29 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Illist has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-05 02:30 PM.

ThatNigga has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-05 02:49 PM.

I'm dope while you far from it, dont front, fake battla'
use 1/6 of my skills, like ya battle record..
.............and beat the pro portion outta ya
Big lip bandit. ya funny but only looks are to me..
..shit, we have the real life Tyrone Biggums wannabe.
It's clear you're an herb.. this kids frikin' lame..
..I didn't even have to peep a verse.
..I figured that out by your sig n username!
punches- you lack.. nuff, here's the explanation-
It's a parent ya wack...
.... like havin' kids from masturbation..

Murkage.

Drop already you cunt.


It doesn't take this long for 4 bars.

This dick riding faggot is fuckin stressing me like whoa
He hangin off tha tip of my dick and he wont let go
Couldn’t pull a bitch if wanted, this niggaz scared of the clit
You could call him chuck, cuz u know u quick 2 get sticked*
Ill blast this nigga wit 1 clip dropping mad bricks he wont get up this time
Im gon leave this dirty mutha fucka missin thas why they call it victimless crime
“Illist” what an original name dawg, theres no one else like you
ill rip yo ass 2 shreds, and anyone else that got a problem despite who

*Chuck from trapped in the closet was gay

wow.....wack.........but uppin fa these votes...........

uppin............................................. .................

yo can we get some votes................................

uppin............................................. .....

This was feedback posted for ThatNigga
 

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Voted For: Illist

yea, this verse was a lil more on the complex side....

I'm dope while you far from it, dont front, fake battla'
use 1/6 of my skills, like ya battle record..
.............and beat the pro portion outta ya

^pretty decent


punches- you lack.. nuff, here's the explanation-
It's a parent ya wack...
.... like havin' kids from masturbation..

^str8 wordplay

it was to the point....good flow...i dun like the structure, though....punches were there...pretty kew....nothing was like OMFG!!....but, yu made up with the wordplay and such


ThatNigga:....i wasnt feeling ya opening bars...getting pussy is -eh- in battle form unless its stands out....which in this case it didnt...and the punches didnt realli hit him directly...ya flow was here and there, aswell

...iLList had the better verse....plain and simple

This was feedback posted for Illist
 

Illist definately took this...He had punches...Thatnigga you had prolly 1 decent punch...Both flows and structures were way off...Illist,From the way it says Guilty of Chryme underneath your username Im guessing your in C.S....So i cant vote cuz it says no crew votes so..Anyway..You whored this fool...HOLLA!!!...1

This was feedback posted for ThatNigga
 

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Voted For: Illist

ThatNigga

This dick riding faggot is fuckin stressing me like whoa
He hangin off tha tip of my dick and he wont let go
Not a punch..
Couldn’t pull a bitch if wanted, this niggaz scared of the clit
You could call him chuck, cuz u know u quick 2 get sticked
Still not a punch..
Ill blast this nigga wit 1 clip dropping mad bricks he wont get up this time
Im gon leave this dirty mutha fucka missin thas why they call it victimless crime
Random violent shit like this, still doesn't count as a punch..
“Illist” what an original name dawg, theres no one else like you
ill rip yo ass 2 shreds, and anyone else that got a problem despite who
Man.. this isn't a punch..

Illist

I'm dope while you far from it, dont front, fake battla'
use 1/6 of my skills, like ya battle record..
.............and beat the pro portion outta ya
Concept had potential.. worded to shit though..
Big lip bandit. ya funny but only looks are to me..
..shit, we have the real life Tyrone Biggums wannabe.
Not a punch..
It's clear you're an herb.. this kids frikin' lame..
..I didn't even have to peep a verse.
..I figured that out by your sig n username!
Concept had potential.. not worded right..
punches- you lack.. nuff, here's the explanation-
It's a parent ya wack...
.... like havin' kids from masturbation..
Decent..

Overall, this battle wasn't that good at all. ThroughoutThatNigga's entire verse there was not one punch. It was all random statements with the occasional violent remark that just makes it look even more stupid. His verse was just weak and nothing came out even decent. Illist had a few concepts with potential, but were just worded wrong, along with one decent punch, but all of his concepts were punches. That's what separates these two verses, and that's why Illist gets my vote in this battle.

Vote - Illist

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I half assed my verse, but I think this dude is getting some major dr and shit.