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In-Vision 07-20-07 06:43 AM

Political criminal
 
..I'm too cynical to vote, with such a minimal approach..
..the pinnacle of hope, is pivotal, and critical to most..
..inches from the slope, habitually, itchin to get chose..
..the centerfold of pitiful, practicin the rituals of ghosts..
..the bridges i've composed, go from fiction to the truth..
..eviction of the rules, will change the diction of the youth..
..let's start by, convincing that, conviction is a spoof..
..it contradicts restriction , and is friction to the roof..
..take a picture of the move, with the mission in it's view..
..constriction is improved, when superstition is the proof..
..play apprentice to the brutes, for the riches and the loot..
..view acceptance as a fruit, yet remain distant from the food..
..the infant and it's coos, it moved, into an incidence that grew..
..it blisters and it blue's, the black untill it's insolence it spews..

..if they say that the revolution is upon at last..
..I pray freedom evolves from a promise to a fact..

Chris Stylez 07-20-07 10:40 PM

U beleive your Mr. Multi cuz your the only one on the site i see pissin off multies like this. Your multies are dope man...cant say anything more

In-Vision 07-20-07 10:44 PM

nope, i'm not mr. multie......I'm thoth...aka...In-Vision...just showin my versatility...thanks for the compliment though.

Valiant 07-21-07 06:15 PM

I would like to battle you some time threadmaker..nice concept.

In-Vision 07-21-07 06:19 PM

But why? Your record is perfect!

MOB 07-24-07 06:29 PM

This was good i like it do some more shit like this foreal!

MC Puff 07-24-07 08:37 PM

Decetn i like it u got skills but it was a lil not wat i was expectn!

In-Vision 07-24-07 08:40 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by MC Puff
Decetn i like it u got skills but it was a lil not wat i was expectn!




decent?

you must be illiterate

Ransum 07-27-07 01:17 PM

this was decent at best....
your multis is what kept you in....
other then that is was decent at best....

go peep my diss i drop for your bitch ass......

Valiant 07-27-07 01:31 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by R-Evolution
But why? Your record is perfect!


So your implying your going to Win? A lose is nothing for me...I don't give a fuck if I lose a battle...it's a battle scar...and another question I wanna ask...are you even in shape for battling?

chip 07-27-07 01:43 PM

good piece, excellent multi's... multi's are almost too good, kinda distracted me from the topic... i like how you didn't compromise the purpose by trying to come up w/ voc. that didn't match the piece, that happens all to often, and i appreciate that you didn't just look for the closest word that rhymed... i look foward to reading more from you, keep writing..

MC Spit 07-27-07 02:57 PM

This was cool i like it u got my props for sure !!!!!!!!

In-Vision 07-27-07 05:00 PM

I'm out of your league jr. I was out of pre-school years ago..let me know when you gain above a pre-school writing level.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Ransum
this was decent at best....
your multis is what kept you in....
other then that is was decent at best....

go peep my diss i drop for your bitch ass......

In-Vision 07-27-07 05:05 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Valentino
So your implying your going to Win? A lose is nothing for me...I don't give a fuck if I lose a battle...it's a battle scar...and another question I wanna ask...are you even in shape for battling?



You mean a LOSS is nothing for you. Not a Lose.

assuming that is true, than a Win means nothing either...which makes the idea of a battle completely pointless. Because we can cypher, and do the same thing. we can message eachother, and do the same thing...the only difference between what you have expressed you want to do.....and a battle....is....a battle containes the element of black and white....right and wrong...win and lose...



and you can try to offend me by asking..."are you even in shape for battling?"

that means nothing....honestly....I am a writer....creativity and wit never leave, they only get stronger with age.....and to answer your first question...im not implying anything..i'm telling you...I will win. Let's just stick to the cypher thread...and if you eventually grow and start to seem like a legitimate challenge.....to the point where i can no longer decipher who's better without bias......we will battle and let others decide.

In-Vision 07-27-07 05:06 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by chip
good piece, excellent multi's... multi's are almost too good, kinda distracted me from the topic... i like how you didn't compromise the purpose by trying to come up w/ voc. that didn't match the piece, that happens all to often, and i appreciate that you didn't just look for the closest word that rhymed... i look foward to reading more from you, keep writing..


appreciate the feed man, just displaying some versatility


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