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Straight Ace 01-29-04 02:47 PM

T-Nice vs Straight Ace
 
30 min deadline..
House rules..(no feedin,bitin,recyclin,hate or crew votes..)
You spit first.

T-Nice 01-29-04 02:50 PM

aiight lets go

T-Nice 01-29-04 03:16 PM

a yo like it or not all my shit is tight,you couldn't come up wit' straight Aces even if you tried to play ya cards right,not knew to da game dis' is a fresh start,i'll cut ya chest open to let da world know you ain't got no heart,might be a newbie but i'm holdin' it down cat,you ain't close to marvin' but you got da {gay} down packed,i'll battle you anytime you know where i'm at,runnin' da game eyes closed wit' my hand on my gat,and i'm dyin' tryin' to live but i'm livin' to die,spittin' dangerous flames wit' a spark in my eye,you a little nigga makin' moves in da wrong grade, you thought you was nice but aces are only wild in spades,takin' this battle lightly bout' to watch you fold now,movin' at a velocity only keanu reeves could slow down,i'm new on dis' site so ya niggas never herd of me,step up to da plate and i'll shatter your whole vertabrae,always room for elevation,but i do what i can,so just bow and accept ya defeat like a man.

Straight Ace 01-29-04 03:24 PM

T aint nice make his arrivial unpleasant, tryin to get rid of this kid..
& if his name didnt proof he was gay already..
..then his interests sure did!
Clench on to that hope, i merk ppl like u, ur special?..thats a lie..
..& u cud be "U,J,K,O,9 & 8..and still would not surround 'I'..
Truth be told..im weak for prayin on them..im better then that..
..This dumb kid lost a battle...with just a bot in a AIM chat..
Not near you, its hardly equal this match but i like it, i do..
Battlin' this dope head with such an impression..
..That after 2 lines i forgot who to reply to...
So..fuck you! u just got sonned..so move out & leave..RB!
..Just close it down.. & press the Alt + F4 keys..
..Simultaneously!..

Straight Ace 01-29-04 03:26 PM

In his profile it says interests: Ball
You may vote now

LyRiCaL GeEnUs 01-29-04 03:38 PM

a yo like it or not all my shit is tight,you couldn't come up wit' straight Aces even if you tried to play ya cards right,not knew to da game dis' is a fresh start,i'll cut ya
chest open to let da world know you ain't got no heart,
aight first, fix ya fuckin structure. These lines are played
might be a newbie but i'm holdin' it down cat,you ain't close to marvin' but you got da {gay} down packed,i'll battle you anytime you know where i'm at,runnin' da game eyes closed wit' my hand on my gat,
played personal, but ok
and i'm dyin' tryin' to live but i'm livin' to die,spittin' dangerous flames wit' a spark in my eye,you a little nigga makin' moves in da wrong grade, you thought you was nice but aces are only wild in spades,
shit bit from 2pactakin' this battle lightly bout' to watch you fold now,movin' at a velocity only keanu reeves could slow down,i'm new on dis' site so ya niggas never herd of me,step up to da plate and i'll shatter your whole vertabrae,always room for elevation,but i do what i can,so just bow and accept ya defeat like a man.
ok you didn't really throw any punches, or witty personals. You gotta be creative in ya shit. Check out Whcakness Emergency Center for help and tips.


T aint nice make his arrivial unpleasant, tryin to get rid of this kid..
& if his name didnt proof he was gay already..
..then his interests sure did!
nota bad personal
Clench on to that hope, i merk ppl like u, ur special?..thats a lie..
..& u cud be "U,J,K,O,9 & 8..and still would not surround 'I'..
nice
Truth be told..im weak for prayin on them..im better then that..
..This dumb kid lost a battle...with just a bot in a AIM chat..
lil played, but good
Not near you, its hardly equal this match but i like it, i do..
Battlin' this dope head with such an impression..
..That after 2 lines i forgot who to reply to...
good
So..fuck you! u just got sonned..so move out & leave..RB!
..Just close it down.. & press the Alt + F4 keys..
..Simultaneously!..
lol...dope

Ace won this, better structure which led to a much better flow. Also he was more creative with his punches. T came to basic, played newb lines. Peace

Please drop an honest vote here guys. I took the time for you http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110540

D.liver.E 01-29-04 03:42 PM

ace indeed had a better structure with some harder punchez... T-nice had some wack linez and a lil' f'd up structure... both had personalz but ace's had the better line on that one... so...
vote- ace

plz return the favour...:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110377

Wise Mynd 01-29-04 03:47 PM

Ace had a good flow so did T-Nice. Ace had a batter structure then t-nice. Ace also had better personals then T-Nice. Neither of u had good punches.
Ace gets my vote.
This was still and overall good battle.
peace.

Dustin Dubree 01-29-04 05:10 PM

ace took it wit punches flow and harder punches good verses from both but just my opinion

vote ace

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.:K:. 01-29-04 05:18 PM

ace merked this kid really....his strucure was nice with a good,
sense of flow rolled of your tongue,
this was good as he had some nice punches with consistency there,
nice verse ace?(seen harder)but nice spit dawg keep it up.......yo if you got msn pm me...........t this was abit wak man..........your structure was non exsistent so it was streched and your punches didnt hit shit.elavate man...........

plz return the favor now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110695 thx...............pz

Harlem's Finest 01-29-04 05:24 PM

Ace caned the kid...

Better punches, creativity, structure etc... most catergorys..
T Nice sort the structure out, add some original witty lines and you'll be doin well..
Overall a one sided battle..

Vote - Ace

Return the favour.. I need one more vote.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110472

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Straight Ace 01-29-04 05:41 PM

Alright thanks for the votes..
Uppin..1th uppin

Daz 01-29-04 05:48 PM

yes very one sided...ace shouldnt pick on the poor defenseless little newbs lol... your becoming a carson jet lmao...anyone can see this was a slaughter..so wh waste time explaining..vote ace..

v/ace

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Harlem's Finest 01-31-04 05:38 AM

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom - Jeez.. whats up with this.. I dropped a more explained vote than half the peeps who voted... twice now.. damn..

Ace caned the kid...

Better punches, creativity, structure etc... most catergorys.. his verse was a better read.. more original.. better vocab.. witty bars, well presented.. uh.. a tight verse..
T Nice sort the structure out, add some original witty lines and you'll be doin well..
Your verse lacked the standard that Ace had, hardly a flow, weak punches.. basic vocab.. you came behind in every catergory there is basically...
Overall a one sided battle..

Vote - Ace

MYSTERIOSO 01-31-04 10:15 AM

this was a aight battle
my vote is going to ace cuz he had a better verse overall. T need to elevate and learn how to make a good structure.


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