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dfrost vs. deleon
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you should of lost last week kid.....
Your the worst clown, You'll get crushed in this 2nd round.. You dont have to run 10 yards to be the First-Down.. Me winning is Clear CUT, Off with ya head.. get it ho?.. I'm going to have a few Al-Qaidas Direct this Video.. Nobodyz Seein Your Raps Thats why Im believing your wack.. Check the Brackets ..Your 3-1,ranked 21st and theres a reason for that.. Ill leave Dfrost runnin infact, Defeat me? your ass is stupid.. If Im the man to beat ur sure in hell not the man to do it.. You cant help to admit.. that Im one hell of a spitter.. And dog you aint "SHIT" But your verses beg to differ.. Ill leave you on the streets, Ya punches are not as hard as mines.. Ya lines aint workin, They should be written on cardboard signs.. Face it, take a look in the mirror and realize your not hot dude.. He leaves pauses for laughs after his lines..but the voters forgot too.. I dont know if I should like you or not, Ill say thanks for the bye.. But than again FUCK YOU.............For wasting my time.. |
Time to elevate, find new techniques, read your sig, you proclaim rookie proudly
Found 8 different ways to say your shit is wack and the message still kinda cloudy You woulda got another award too, if deadly didn’t hate Sure you coulda pulled it off, you was june’s best biter to date Kid is like lemon up, just a fuckin wannabe ‘sprite’ Wishes he was a ‘legend’ but he more of a Tyson who can’t fight Rookie don’t understand ‘wordplay’, it something he ain’t yet ‘caught’ That’s why when I bust the sick shit he’s still ‘molestin thoughts’ People always hatin on newbs, strange cause you still a virgin to rap We all knew it wasn’t your flow that made the booty go ……….. Aight for all yall that don’t get my verse, fuck you On rb awards shadows edge had nominated Deleon as best biter in june, showing all the up and coming biters how its done. But deadly deleted the thread A sprite is also a legendary/imaginary character Word play, play with words, aint caught them yet, messin around with thoughts Play off of that Lil jon, usher and luda chorus, oh and wrap as in condom clap as in gonorrhea, virgin to rap/wrap |
Deleon.. Your the worst clown, You'll get crushed in this 2nd round.. You dont have to run 10 yards to be the First-Down.. You cant help to admit.. that Im one hell of a spitter.. And dog you aint "SHIT" But your verses beg to differ.. Nice^, not original concepts but nice witty flips. Me winning is Clear CUT, Off with ya head.. get it ho?.. I'm going to have a few Al-Qaidas Direct this Video.. This could have been a good line but u didnt say it right, i think if re worded it could of been a better punch. Nobodyz Seein Your Raps Thats why Im believing your wack.. Check the Brackets ..Your 3-1,ranked 21st and theres a reason for that.. ^I enjoyed all those lines above, but these lines are thought were pretty wack Ill leave you on the streets, Ya punches are not as hard as mines.. Ya lines aint workin, They should be written on cardboard signs.. I see u were tryin a "tramp" line the way u connected the signs and streets but it was pretty crap. Face it, take a look in the mirror and realize your not hot dude.. He leaves pauses for laughs after his lines..but the voters forgot too.. ^thats more of a diss at the voters...i understand what ur trying to say but its too basic. Aside from that strong verse, a few personals and had some good wit and originality. Dfrozt. First off...im voting against and u and dont wine because u "beat" me last week, which may I add was bullshit and also its do not say I do not understand ur verse, coz i udnerstand it and thought it was generally not good. Also do not "use quotations", its what newbs do, so for acted like a newb im a treat u like one. Heres what u did right..... You woulda got another award too, if deadly didn’t hate Sure you coulda pulled it off, you was june’s best biter to date ^shudd been re worded but it was decent, had to read it a couple of times to get the wit of it. Kid is like lemon up, just a fuckin wannabe ‘sprite’ Wishes he was a ‘legend’ but he more of a Tyson who can’t fight ^that was dope...good personal and good meta...well done newbie. What u did wrong... Rookie don’t understand ‘wordplay’, it something he ain’t yet ‘caught’ That’s why when I bust the sick shit he’s still ‘molestin thoughts’ ^haha what a wack attempt of wordplay. Time to elevate, find new techniques, read your sig, you proclaim rookie proudly Found 8 different ways to say your shit is wack and the message still kinda cloudy ^make sure ur punches make sense...what message is cloudly? People always hatin on newbs, strange cause you still a virgin to rap We all knew it wasn’t your flow that made the booty go ……….. ^What a bollox closer. Dont tell me u used it because it plays off his Luda avy because this was wack. Vote DeLeon |
v/ deleon...
deleon wins becuz of trong punches personals and goood all around flow and structure... he had nice conceptz with nice rhyming ovrall 8/10 dfrozt you had a fair verse but in no way did it match up to deleon.. you had very played conceptz you need to come harder.. with personals and better flow overall 7/10 not bad vote dealon |
deleon:
Your the worst clown, You'll get crushed in this 2nd round.. You dont have to run 10 yards to be the First-Down.. ^^kinda weak but decent opener 5/10 Me winning is Clear CUT, Off with ya head.. get it ho?.. I'm going to have a few Al-Qaidas Direct this Video.. ^^lol good shyt nice punch 7/10 Nobodyz Seein Your Raps Thats why Im believing your wack.. Check the Brackets ..Your 3-1,ranked 21st and theres a reason for that.. ^^another good punch and personal good shyt 8/10 Ill leave Dfrost runnin infact, Defeat me? your ass is stupid.. If Im the man to beat ur sure in hell not the man to do it.. ^^hott bar 8/10 You cant help to admit.. that Im one hell of a spitter.. And dog you aint "SHIT" But your verses beg to differ.. ^^good personal weak bar altogether 6/10 Ill leave you on the streets, Ya punches are not as hard as mines.. Ya lines aint workin, They should be written on cardboard signs.. ^^good meta bad punch 6/10 Face it, take a look in the mirror and realize your not hot dude.. He leaves pauses for laughs after his lines..but the voters forgot too.. ^^good punch decent bar 7/10 I dont know if I should like you or not, Ill say thanks for the bye.. But than again FUCK YOU.............For wasting my time.. ^^decent closer not too hott 6/10 overall : 53/80 dfrost: Time to elevate, find new techniques, read your sig, you proclaim rookie proudly Found 8 different ways to say your shit is wack and the message still kinda cloudy ^^decent opener ok punch 7/10 You woulda got another award too, if deadly didn’t hate Sure you coulda pulled it off, you was june’s best biter to date ^^kinda weak personal punch wasnt too hard 4/10 Kid is like lemon up, just a fuckin wannabe ‘sprite’ Wishes he was a ‘legend’ but he more of a Tyson who can’t fight ^^weak bar...bad punch but good meta 5/10 Rookie don’t understand ‘wordplay’, it something he ain’t yet ‘caught’ That’s why when I bust the sick shit he’s still ‘molestin thoughts’ ^^decent bar not too hott either 5/10 People always hatin on newbs, strange cause you still a virgin to rap We all knew it wasn’t your flow that made the booty go ……….. ^^bad closer worst bar of battle 3/10 overall : 24/50 vote: deleon dfrost your verse was consistent because it was consistently bad all the way thru pretty much...you had decent punches but none that hit that hard...no wordplay or good vocab your verse wasnt that good....deleon you had a better verse and had some good punches and decent personals...work on expanding your vocab and using harder punches ~!1!~ |
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what the fuck, you read the battle? i may have lost but none of that shit was fuckin played. damn kid |
Boooo @ DFrost for explaining his punches....
Vote - Deleon for being able to punch that didn't need an explaination.... |
What's up with the explanation!! De leon.
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vote- delon
i aint explainin shit, this was a hot battle but delon obviously came hotter. one |
yup delon took this quite easy, his punches hit harder mixed em with some personals
good flow, frost ya need 2 punch ur opponant harder ight vote: delon |
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