RapVerse.com Community

RapVerse.com Community (http://community.rapverse.com/index.php)
-   New Release Songs (http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=7)
-   -   When I Grow Up - Song of E.P. (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=90510)

ShEmY 11-08-03 04:54 PM

When I Grow Up - Song of E.P.
 
WHEN I GROW UP

When I grow up... New Song off E.P.


Let the replies come in...

AlcaTrakz 11-09-03 04:23 AM

"Song off e.p. .... quality better be real good...."

ok quality is good...this beat is mad popish....chorus goes along with the beat.

there is no difference in the chorus and verse..as far as Reverb/stereo seperation...which is not a good thing...it sounds like one big chorus

Lyrics...heartfelt..

Flow...good...some spots where it seemed choppy...but overall nothing to complain about

delivery...Kinda Simple..old school...got that 90's feel...very popish again...

overall decent....but get that chorus / verse problem fixed

1

ShEmY 11-09-03 01:33 PM

The Chrous/Verse thing.. That is the style of the song. The beat is a kinda party type beat. It'z kinda weird, but itz a different type of style.

Thanx for the opinnions tho.

The End 11-09-03 02:14 PM

Still think you are a dick, but enjoyed the track. Not bad.

AlcaTrakz 11-09-03 02:24 PM

NO....there is a difference between a CHORUS, and STEREO seperation....

i think you wanted stereo seperation on the main track...and a chorus on the chorus...but got a chorus the whole time

ive NEVER heard a track like this....its annoying on the ears and brain to not know where the verse and chorus change simply by sound

1

ShEmY 11-09-03 10:02 PM

ummm alright.. Thanx fo the tips Dre?...


Upp'nnn.....

.::Narcotics::. 11-09-03 10:29 PM

!3
years old
u got sum skill i guess
u sounded good for a 8th grader
u got lots of elevation t odo but u got alot of time to do it

pc
stay up

Orpheus Rex 11-10-03 02:51 AM

Pretty Good Shemy...

I Like The Flow And The Lyrics Were Good...
The Chorus Was Good Too...

13th Disciple 11-10-03 03:16 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by ShEmY
ummm alright.. Thanx fo the tips Dre?...


Upp'nnn.....



that was actually funny....

AlcaTrakz 11-10-03 03:42 AM

ok dog, i dont care how old you are

you post something saying its going on an EP then its gonna get critiqued not only for its content but its quality

i wouldnt pay $5 or more for an EP with Shitty Quality and bad mixing

thats all im saying

JUST TRYING TO HELP

dick

1

ShEmY 11-10-03 07:13 AM

No you can't have my dick.

And I appreciate your comments, I was juss playin bout the Dre thing. No hate homie. But, my quality of my E.P. is not bad. Soundclick distorts the music to bad.

No beef

Aisle Phive 11-10-03 04:06 PM

I Have To Say I Really Enjoyed This Track.. Had Me Bobbin My Head And Shit.. Nice Shit. Your Text Is Awful (No Offense) But Your Audio's Are Dope.. Keep Droppin...

PostMan 11-10-03 04:23 PM

this is coo right here. quality is less then desirable.. but djx ask yourself.... does it matteer on a 13 years old ep??? lol what he gonna do playin for his family at christmas.... good shit dog.. you got lots of elevatin......... practice makes perfect

Emerge 11-10-03 04:41 PM

the song was ku then i went and listened to the rest of ure soundclick

the song wit pac and eminem DONT DO THAT EVER AGAIN u almost ruined pac for me luckily i clicked it off
the rest was shit and ure voice gets really annoying

ShEmY 11-10-03 04:43 PM

Thanx bitch..

Next...


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 01:18 AM.