Music Is Dying
Music Is Dying
Follow Me. . Deep into the Music, where a Beat is Useless And writers voice Alone is the Soul of Featured Blueprints. the Speakers Intuitive Aspects, have Gasped their Last Breath and from here on out, drum & base’ll be mentioned in Past Tense the Absent Minded wont Follow, & will try to Define it as Hollow but I strongly believe poetry will be the ‘Rhyme’ of Tomorrow. Lines of ‘Borrowed’ beat samples, sound amped & create hype, But that cant compare to how raw emotion Sounds on the Mic. You cant put Down or Define how an artist Plots In His Head Or can speak with Intensity, and make you feel What Is Said. Now that’s Real lyricism, no instrumental For Help Just an artist with something to say and then, Hoping He’s Felt. Exposing his Writers Voice, and theirs Legions To Teach Beneath the music lies its one true sign: Freedom Of Speech Hiphop’s not of Interest To Me, so its Useless Trying I see spoken word as the future. Music Is Dying. RB Legend |
this peice was off the hook...great concept and you stayed on topic throughout the whole song...flow was there and you had sum nice vocab....
i'd give it a 9.5/10 |
Great piece Camarac. Nice conept and flowwas quality, couldword play and vocab keep it up. Nice to c more qualiy homegrown talent emerging from England.
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hit my rhyme called time bomb
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^itl explode
tight verse....id say 9/10 |
Nigga this was a 10/10 Sheiiiiiiiiiiiiit, RB legends Mahfuckahz!
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Nice shit right here. I liked the flow and all. Keep elevaten play.
OUT -High Class a.k.a Confusion |
i like, very good verse u had a subject and stuck with it all thru the verse.
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^ that IS the main point to open mics = /
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nice peice man, good vocab and rhyme structure alot of ill lines, umm dont really know what you did wrong, well write somethen longer next time so the pleasure lasts longer lol, could you hit my oeice up called change of heart and mind, ited be great if u couled thanx
9.5/10 |
I read this one @ Hype I believe... a good read and something to think about. Much respect.
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Ive only dropped one piece at Hype and this wasnt it = /
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Dope Piece Man
Definately Legends, I'm Loving the Message Your Putting Across With the Imagery Keep it Up |
its good
mabey Rbs Legends .Mabey Nice imagery Word Choice' All that. |
yup.
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